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looking for honest people to give feedback

Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 4:38 pm
by gaff

Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 4:49 pm
by municiple
Sounds nice and mellow, but it never really drops. I like the spaciousness of it, but was waiting for the drums to drop a bit more. Keep the tunes coming!

Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 4:56 pm
by elgato
really, really good in my opinion

i think the drums are lovely, very subtle, which i rated

good atmospherics, well produced, perhaps not my exact 'vibe' as it were, but i think thats a matter of taste not skill.

only thing id say is maybe a bit of variation on the bassline (maybe you've done that already later) as i reckon something a bit softer and more flowing might bring the track together really nicely

big up

Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 5:08 pm
by gaff
fanku not bad for a girl hey--- :wink:

Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 5:23 pm
by elgato
Not at all, nice to hear girls making beats, there isnt enough of that (from what i know anyways), im sure so many females would have a lot to offer electronic music if they got into production...we need more Ellen Alliens and Andrea Parkers!

Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 5:27 pm
by gaff
fanku darlings mwah.x

Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 6:39 pm
by subframe
I'm really liking this. Atmos are excellent. That big bass warp that comes after the drop is nice as well.

Only one question - is that little click on the kick in the beginning there on purpose, no?

320 me? :D

Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 7:42 pm
by gaff
yeah i was meant to do that my boyfreind learnt that from someone on here sweety

hugz,you can have a 320 whatever that is when i find out what it is


Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 7:48 pm
by subframe
320kbps mp3, is what I meant.


Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 7:51 pm
by dubweiser
nice one!
in my opinion it has potential to be a nice track to send people home in the end of a rave, you just need to change the clap sample and make more time into it (with the help of bass variations, and some changes in the middle).
keep up the good work!

Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 7:53 pm
by 8bitwonder
good tune baby

Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 6:15 pm
by auralassassin
not bad for a guy, either... really.

add some more low end to this. I like the clap though, no sense in getting too intricate with the high ends on a dubstep track--the atmosphere is on, now get that low end with some serious bass.

you know the kind I'm talking about... the stuff that hits you in the chest and makes your legs shake.

Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 6:23 pm
by ramadanman
pretty sweet track

yeh i agree on the more low end comment

you could even add a really deep sub on the kick, then release on the snare

very cool atmosphere

would have liked slightly more intricate hats, or maybe just more variation?

its pretty cool

Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 6:27 pm
by auralassassin
yea, as far as variation on the hits, you don't even really need to ADD more to it, just kinda studder the hits, so that they are't so formulaec... more of a broken beat feel.. that would be pretty dope. the atmosphere is definately pretty cool though, so don't modify that too much :P

Posted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 7:28 am
by acetone
yes, VERY nice track. Basically break up the drums a bit and beef up the sub. But whatever you do, don't lose the smoothness. I can't wait to hear the finished track.

Posted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 8:18 am
by Sharmaji
excellent late, late, late nite or early, early, early mornin' chune.