MICHAEL ROSE - WARRIOR (ERROR382 RMX)

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MICHAEL ROSE - WARRIOR (ERROR382 RMX)

Post by ERROR382 » Mon Jul 07, 2014 2:11 pm

Hi there family here is a new one from my self, have a listen and drop a line if you want.
Hope you like it fellas.
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Re: MICHAEL ROSE - WARRIOR (ERROR382 RMX)

Post by andyyhitscar » Wed Jul 09, 2014 4:18 pm

nice man this one is scary

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Re: MICHAEL ROSE - WARRIOR (ERROR382 RMX)

Post by ERROR382 » Wed Jul 09, 2014 6:46 pm

andyyhitscar wrote:nice man this one is scary
Hahaha, what you mind scary? That's good or bad :6:

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Post by andyyhitscar » Wed Jul 09, 2014 9:13 pm

scary is different and that's always good

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Post by ERROR382 » Wed Jul 09, 2014 11:41 pm

:W: Cool!! I appreciate that.

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Re: MICHAEL ROSE - WARRIOR (ERROR382 RMX)

Post by bigbasha » Thu Jul 10, 2014 4:10 pm

yes man, nice track! great vibes, and a good summer tune.
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Re: MICHAEL ROSE - WARRIOR (ERROR382 RMX)

Post by koncide » Thu Jul 10, 2014 5:49 pm

A bit too much reverb and not enough presence on the drums IMO.

Found my head bobbing to the tune though, especially when the vocals come in.
Melodic deepness from my mind.

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Re: MICHAEL ROSE - WARRIOR (ERROR382 RMX)

Post by ERROR382 » Thu Jul 10, 2014 11:55 pm

koncide wrote:A bit too much reverb and not enough presence on the drums IMO.

Found my head bobbing to the tune though, especially when the vocals come in.
You right man, i think i've lost a bit the presence of drums on the mixdown, i'll working on it.


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Thanks for comment people.

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Re: MICHAEL ROSE - WARRIOR (ERROR382 RMX)

Post by Kongret » Fri Jul 11, 2014 6:03 am

Drums are too quiet and need more highs, snare sounds muffled atm. Skank also lacks clarity and needs more defined transient.
Vocals sound nice, but they sound dissonant from time to time in this harmony.
Lead has too much reverb, cut those low sides for more clarity they add nothing but mud. Also tune seems to be a bit inconsistent in it's tone, first we have a normal stable melody, then things go unstable for a moment at 1:13 and then return to stable vocals, which is a bit weird imo.

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Re: MICHAEL ROSE - WARRIOR (ERROR382 RMX)

Post by ERROR382 » Sun Jul 13, 2014 4:13 pm

Kongret wrote:Drums are too quiet and need more highs, snare sounds muffled atm. Skank also lacks clarity and needs more defined transient.
Vocals sound nice, but they sound dissonant from time to time in this harmony.
Lead has too much reverb, cut those low sides for more clarity they add nothing but mud. Also tune seems to be a bit inconsistent in it's tone, first we have a normal stable melody, then things go unstable for a moment at 1:13 and then return to stable vocals, which is a bit weird imo.
Ez Kongret, thanks so much for comment man, that really help me. Sometimes when i over the same thing for a while a fresh par of ears help a lot.
I've been working on the tune and i thought i polish most of the stuff commented above drums, chop piano and lead, reverbs and muddy issue. I did't change vocal armonies or tune thing i like how it is actually.
So here is it the new mix down.
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:W: Thanks everyone to help me with this.

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