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Postby syrup » Sat May 09, 2015 1:02 pm

https://soundcloud.com/johney/tapeworm-dub

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Postby RIG-RAG » Wed May 13, 2015 1:41 pm

Intro sound good, although short.
The hats that pan left to right seem a tid bit too loud, but since they are really the only hats throughout the mix that don't matter then.

I do feel the idea is pretty solid but it seems you stretched the track out beyond its playing time with out any variation. Specifically the mid bass. Maybe make some new filter movements. It sounds like you have a low pass that rises with the bass, try some variation with that filter.

The jungle break beat is nice, good flavor.
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Postby syrup » Wed May 13, 2015 4:13 pm

The whole tune has a 32bar intro :)
i have a few ideas for a variaton, i'll try how that works out, the filter is actually being modulated throughout, but i'll try playing with it.

Thank you for the feedback! I'll try it on a system and maybe do some tweaking afterwards
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