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First Dubstep Tune - Feedback? (be brutal!!!)

Post by wil blaze » Fri Jul 07, 2006 3:50 pm

Easy...

Finally got round to actully making some Dubstep (I'm hooked now!)

Check the tune let us know what you think... and be honest i can take criticism...

www.myspace.com/wilblazemusic

track entitled "One Down"

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Post by wil blaze » Fri Jul 07, 2006 3:52 pm

shit i can't believe that was my first post lol

I've been trolling on here for so long i never clocked that i hadn't posted shit.

Sorry lol

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Post by dermike » Fri Jul 07, 2006 4:11 pm

:)
I've heard worse.. That bass sound is a little too lame for me though ;)

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Post by wil blaze » Fri Jul 07, 2006 8:53 pm

which one? the wobble bit or the sub?

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Post by dermike » Fri Jul 07, 2006 11:13 pm

"Wobble"

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Post by wil blaze » Sat Jul 08, 2006 2:59 am

fair enough

thanks for your input

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Post by ballistics » Sat Jul 08, 2006 3:07 pm

I like it! Perhaps I would add some treble-sounds right in my face! It is VERY mellow...

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Post by wil blaze » Sat Jul 08, 2006 7:47 pm

yeah that's what i'm more into - the mellower side of dubstep

might try and do something lively soon though

thanks for your feedback.

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Post by clone.a.k. » Mon Jul 10, 2006 10:03 pm

you got a real handle on how you want them bass hits!
beautiful flow.

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Post by shonky » Mon Jul 10, 2006 10:49 pm

Yeah really nice toon, likin the mellow vibes, but the growling bass and harshness of the drums seems a bit incongruous to the mix, everything else seems to have that nice underwater ambience to it. Loving the detail in the track, the arpeggiation/delay lines work really well.

To my tastes I'd go for lighter more brushy, more syncopated drums with a hint of reverb or delay, and maybe use a low pad rather than the growling bass, think it'd flow really nice like that. I'd offer my services for a remix, but I'm taking ages on the last one I started so best not eh :wink:
Hmm....

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Post by wil blaze » Mon Jul 10, 2006 11:33 pm

big up all for the feedback... can't believe how many people have actually bothered to listen and give some input....

you don't get nothing like this on DOA believe!!!

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Post by metalboxproducts » Tue Jul 11, 2006 11:31 am

Well minimal, but with variation. :D
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Post by digital » Thu Jul 13, 2006 12:21 am

Its a fiendish sounding one, i like it, but i would say it needs more bass. added u on myspace as well bruv. :Q:

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