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Postby state of bass » Wed Sep 03, 2008 9:15 am

Hi all 1st post and first dub track on our player, please let us know what you think.

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Postby state of bass » Wed Sep 03, 2008 9:40 am

and its a ruff version (little drum edits n stuff to be added)
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Postby Tangka » Wed Sep 03, 2008 10:33 am

nice track

some of the synths could be a bit more unique but rhythmically, melodically, this is pretty damn dope

you mixed this SUPER freaking loud, which is awesome!

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Postby messdup » Thu Sep 04, 2008 12:47 pm

nice vibe
keep them comin
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Postby ossia » Thu Sep 04, 2008 1:46 pm

i like it...keep it coming!
i think i can hear a bit of clipping on the first bassline - did u use a sample?
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Postby sub7 » Thu Sep 04, 2008 2:42 pm

I dig this track, very moody, real loud mix, good stuff man, interested in what you come up with next....
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Postby twisted - dutty dubz » Thu Sep 04, 2008 3:12 pm

deutschläääänd 12 points :)
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Postby ikos24 » Thu Sep 04, 2008 5:32 pm

yes yes, i like it plenty, that bass is filth, twangs a cord in my chest. keep it coming. only thing id say is swich up the drum pattern a little more mid way through, other that that, big number. word.
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Postby loverboy » Thu Sep 04, 2008 5:42 pm

real good stuff! keep it coming guys
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Postby state of bass » Fri Sep 05, 2008 11:12 am

big respect for the feedback, still ironin out the track as it is really ruff (bassline not sampled but ill check the clip)
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Postby the1mattb » Fri Sep 05, 2008 2:12 pm

PRETTY DOPE...DRUMS SOUND TIGHT!!NICE ROLLY BASS...
WHEN THAT SAMPLE COMES IN THE WHOLE THING TAKES ON A NEW LEVEL...PRETTY SICK!!....LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU GOT THE FINAL MIX UP..

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Postby hugh » Fri Sep 05, 2008 2:17 pm

soundin good 8)
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Postby chewie » Sat Sep 06, 2008 1:54 pm

Rate this tune, like the grizzly sound with the sub, sounds like some S+H - nice subtle touch.
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Postby nedklic » Tue Sep 09, 2008 12:38 am

heavy, really like it man. look forward hearing more!
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Postby dux » Tue Sep 09, 2008 12:58 am

dope tune indeed! big sub, tight production.

nice 1
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Postby state of bass » Wed Sep 17, 2008 6:10 pm

great feedback, cheers we'll crack on with some more :D
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Postby ekaj » Wed Sep 17, 2008 6:21 pm

Nice track
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Postby time » Thu Sep 18, 2008 1:35 pm

tis nice and look forward to more from ya 8)
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Postby sub7 » Mon Sep 22, 2008 3:15 pm

Nice dub, lots of deep feel to it... Nice vocal dub, really gives it what it needs to take it from just good instrumental, to a quality dub, nice work, looking forward to the next....
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Postby lojik » Mon Sep 22, 2008 7:08 pm

I'd love a 320 of the finished version if possible, wicked track!
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