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Post by Capture pt » Sat Feb 01, 2014 11:40 pm

ey cheers man - you're right a good stereo image is something I need to work on/remember to get into my workflow. thanks for listening and thanks for the props. next track i'm going to pay extra special attention to the image..!

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Post by BEEPBEEP » Mon Feb 03, 2014 9:33 pm

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Post by Capture pt » Tue Feb 04, 2014 10:21 am

not my ting but some good production skills. only concern would be the kick. it seems to have only a few lower frequencies than your snare! in fact, sometimes it even sounds the same. bring some low end into that my man. kicks should thump or boom. not sound like a muted snare!

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Post by jamesyo » Sat Feb 08, 2014 12:07 am

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Post by BEEPBEEP » Sat Feb 08, 2014 6:02 pm

Capture pt wrote:not my ting but some good production skills. only concern would be the kick. it seems to have only a few lower frequencies than your snare! in fact, sometimes it even sounds the same. bring some low end into that my man. kicks should thump or boom. not sound like a muted snare!
You know what yeh your the first person to say this and I completely agree with you about the kick. Its hard to get that kick to sub ratio tho and on a system you can feel the kick a lot trust I've played it out a few times and its probs a bit too loud. Thanks for your honest opinion man much appreciated. :)

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Post by WelshVersion » Mon Feb 10, 2014 9:08 am

hey just started working on house music how does this sound?? would love some feedback :)
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Post by Libra » Mon Feb 10, 2014 10:08 pm

BEEPBEEP wrote:Soundcloud

Let me know what you people think of this one.
Yeah its alright, snare could do with some brightening, the bass is alright but could have done with a more varied melody.

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not too keen on the vocal samples, and the drums could do with a re-do with some harder hitting one shots but is ok. Bass sounds nice!
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Post by Libra » Mon Feb 10, 2014 10:11 pm

Just left some feedback, so heres my new bit called royce. Its deep house

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Post by elyhess » Tue Feb 25, 2014 4:04 pm

123 and 122 bpm house

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Post by karmacazee » Sun Mar 16, 2014 1:32 am

Libra wrote:Just left some feedback, so heres my new bit called royce. Its deep house

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That is really nice. Lots of stuff to like in there. the claps, the rhythmic interplay between the bass and the wah wah chords... Really enjoyed it tbh!


Tusk is a sweet tune too man. Safe!
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Really enjoyed the first one. Nice slow burner. Second one is nice too, lovely chord progressions. I imagine they'd sound really nice mixed together in a set.
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Post by karmacazee » Sun Mar 16, 2014 1:44 am

skins345669 wrote:Soundcloud

I tried to make some dub techno and it came out like this. Little half-time section in the middle.
This is really nice, I can see what you're going for, but I found myself kind of thinking 'get on with it' a few minutes in. I'd cut it down a little, bring in the hi-hats sooner and develop the musical idea a little more. It's very chill though, nice.
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Post by karmacazee » Sun Mar 16, 2014 2:03 am

And so,
on to my new track, as always super interested to hear any and all feedback.
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Nice work. Great energy and vibe to it. My only criticism is the stabby chords and the squelchy bass line are playing in the same frequency range and hitting at exactly the same time and are getting lost amongst each other, and are both saturated/distorted a little too much. Maybe dial back the distortion on the chord stabs for a bit of contrast in texture. Also at 1.45 ish , the last three notes in the progression, where it goes up, try taking out the chords all together and give some room for the acid bass. It'll create a nice interplay between the two parts, rather than having them play in unison constantly. Actually, it does that a little later in the tune, but they still sound like they're competing for space. But now I think I'm being overly critical.... it's a great track and would get me dancing!
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Post by karmacazee » Sun Mar 16, 2014 2:05 am

I'm looking for some feedback on the tune in my sig - it's totally different to what I'd normally make so keen to get some opinions. Cheers.
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Post by Libra » Mon Mar 24, 2014 10:51 pm

karmacazee wrote:I'm looking for some feedback on the tune in my sig - it's totally different to what I'd normally make so keen to get some opinions. Cheers.
It's not loading here.

Anyway, I'll send feedback when the links working..

Heres my new bit called Smokescreen, feedback welcome!

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Post by elyhess » Thu Mar 27, 2014 8:46 pm

Lovin smokescreen Libra, another great track!!

Heres the newest bit i just finished, thought i'de share and hear what you beautiful people have to say

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Post by karmacazee » Fri Mar 28, 2014 11:23 am

I swear, left feedback all over this damn forum and everyone ignores my shit. Am I on some kind of mad block list where only I can see what I post and no-one else?
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Post by nruen » Sat Mar 29, 2014 2:05 am

great tune karma, v. tight arrangement and it'd be even better with a tight + powerful mix

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Post by karmacazee » Sat Mar 29, 2014 4:16 pm

nruen wrote:great tune karma, v. tight arrangement and it'd be even better with a tight + powerful mix
:h: Thank you! Someone finally responded lol. Yeah the bass isn't quite sitting right and there's not enough power to it... and the guitar is a little dominating now I listen back. And it could do with some kind of master.
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Post by wirez » Sun Mar 30, 2014 2:11 pm

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Post by elyhess » Tue Apr 08, 2014 9:06 pm

Just finished this one, feedback welcome

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