can check this clip? thoughts, pointers

[constructo]

I been producing dnb for a while then quiet unhappy with no matter what I do I just feel recreating the same old tunes so giving a try at slower tempos and experimentation.
here is a small sample.. you think stuff like this has potential in the dubstep realm.
*trying to attach the mp3

[shonky]

It's nicely put together, sounds halfway between dnb and electro in terms of construction. Think it's a good starting point

[capes]

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[constructo]

cheers for the responses.. think ill experiment more with less breakbeat sounding edits.

[gauche]

more emphasis on the bass would be nice to hear, try something other than the bass drum to add some depth to the tune, it's a start. simplistic as it may be, it's got potential if you mess around with things, also what did you program the sounds in/use to create? keep us updated mang,
peace

[fullyrecordingz]

you think stuff like this has potential in the dubstep realm.

nope not exactly.. but it does sound good
change ur sounds if u like dubstep, keep @ it

[constructo]

thanks again. right there on the bass i've been shy with subs for some silly reason.

Now putting more of those dreadful, lo-fi, voodoo vibes and I hope to finish an entry for the doa-dubstepforum compo as first dubstep tune.

also what did you program the sounds in/use to create? keep us updated mang,

I use Fl studio as sequencer/sampler and Guitar Rig for processing sounds specially drum samples.. its got all.. eq, compression, reverb with a special character, warmth and a somewhat 'exaggerated' response I miss in most plugins plus it makes it very easy to experiment with different fx chains.

[sidesteppa]

Really feeling the vibes on this one. I love the beat and bass...sounds sick. Only problem is it feels a bit monotnous after a while....maybe cut some stuff out every now and then...