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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by Kochari » Wed Jan 06, 2010 2:31 am

junior spesh wrote:Soundcloud


Chinese influenced dubsteo/grime track... DROP FEEDBACK... AS USUAL I WILL RETURN IT!!! :D
i like this a lot, the chinese...thing \9i dont know the name!) sounds wicked and fits really well, and the bass has a lovely squelchy feel. the one thing i would say is that the drums are maybe a little repetitive (though i am guilty of this as well), perhaps add in some crazy percussion at certain points and such?
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Post by icebagg » Wed Jan 06, 2010 3:45 am

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Post by icebagg » Wed Jan 06, 2010 3:49 am

Pitchdownplease wrote:
icebagg wrote:Soundcloud

please critique this!!! any input much appreciated!!!

Bassline loosely sounds like Chase n Stay's running.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Smm93h254OY
Could just be my ears and lack of sleep however
does sound similar, though this wasnt influenced by that song, nice observation though! hope you like the tune!
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Post by icebagg » Wed Jan 06, 2010 3:53 am

junior spesh wrote:Soundcloud


Chinese influenced dubsteo/grime track... DROP FEEDBACK... AS USUAL I WILL RETURN IT!!! :D
I like it, only thing...the sample/synth you used in the beginning is a little too messy, i would try to smooth it out, otherwise pretty good tune
ears ringin all night you know how that shit go

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Post by twobeans » Wed Jan 06, 2010 4:27 am

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This isn't the latest version of this, but it is the one I have uploaded to SC. The latest version just have the levels played with a little.

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Post by icebagg » Wed Jan 06, 2010 4:55 am

two beans wrote:Soundcloud

This isn't the latest version of this, but it is the one I have uploaded to SC. The latest version just have the levels played with a little.
I'd like to hear the finished version!
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by rdub » Wed Jan 06, 2010 5:14 am

Hey guys, I am very very new to dubstep production and I have been messing around in FL and have come up with this so far! but the thing is that I am not even sure if I am on the right track so I am posting this so that one of you can hopefully guide me in the right direction for dub production so let me know what you think and what I need to improve on!! ps. It is a very noob track so far but I think I am getting it after reading lots of things on the dsf.

http://www6.zippyshare.com/v/75297970/file.html <-------- TRACK HERE :)
Sorry I dont have soundcloud..

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Post by icebagg » Wed Jan 06, 2010 8:55 am

rdub wrote:Hey guys, I am very very new to dubstep production and I have been messing around in FL and have come up with this so far! but the thing is that I am not even sure if I am on the right track so I am posting this so that one of you can hopefully guide me in the right direction for dub production so let me know what you think and what I need to improve on!! ps. It is a very noob track so far but I think I am getting it after reading lots of things on the dsf.

http://www6.zippyshare.com/v/75297970/file.html <-------- TRACK HERE :)
Sorry I dont have soundcloud..
nice start, your more or less on the right track. i wouldnt worry too much about structure (most dubstep songs have a structure unique to themselves) but since your just starting i would stick with 4/4 structure, its easy on the ears. any specific questions? Ive been producing for about 5 years now might be able to help you out. i would check out the production forums about eq and compression, as well as modulation (reverb, distortion, etc...)
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Post by jaydot » Wed Jan 06, 2010 11:20 am

Typed the tags wrong before:

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I know what I need to do with this:

Sub bass under main bass

Sort the drop out because it doesn't fit with the track.

Fatten it out more.

Anyone else got any other suggestions?

Thanks.

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Post by riproarious » Wed Jan 06, 2010 11:26 am

Feedback, feedback, feedback! .. Please :D
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Post by grahamcody » Wed Jan 06, 2010 11:32 am

So I've been producing for a while [about 7 years] experimenting with different styles, and i recently discovered dubstep, so i figured id give it a shot. This is my first attempt at a dubstep track, and I used Logic 9. Any feedback would be appreciated. This track is a remix of Esser - Headlock (original track with video here:) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HHQCOkSGnKs

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Post by junior spesh » Wed Jan 06, 2010 12:42 pm

icebagg wrote:
junior spesh wrote:Soundcloud


Chinese influenced dubsteo/grime track... DROP FEEDBACK... AS USUAL I WILL RETURN IT!!! :D
I like it, only thing...the sample/synth you used in the beginning is a little too messy, i would try to smooth it out, otherwise pretty good tune
yh man thanx.. my new seinheisser headphones hae arrived so ill able 2 clean up dese tunes properly now! :D

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Wed Jan 06, 2010 1:45 pm

grahamcody wrote:So I've been producing for a while [about 7 years] experimenting with different styles, and i recently discovered dubstep, so i figured id give it a shot. This is my first attempt at a dubstep track, and I used Logic 9. Any feedback would be appreciated. This track is a remix of Esser - Headlock (original track with video here:) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HHQCOkSGnKs

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imacculate production, what you using?
edit; i didnt read your post properly, logic 9!
might have to upgrade myself

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Wed Jan 06, 2010 2:29 pm

work in progress, what do you all think?
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Post by riproarious » Wed Jan 06, 2010 7:24 pm

Sorry to re-post, but everyone just skips over mine..

Can I get any feedback?

You can tell me the track is shit if you like..


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Post by cronicle » Wed Jan 06, 2010 8:59 pm

was wondering if anyone could give me feedback on this? any tips for improvements would be appreciated.
i have only been producing for a year or so using fl studio. this track was made entirely with fl7.
http://soundcloud.com/cronicle/the-begining-unfinished

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by riproarious » Wed Jan 06, 2010 9:24 pm

cronicle wrote:was wondering if anyone could give me feedback on this? any tips for improvements would be appreciated.
i have only been producing for a year or so using fl studio. this track was made entirely with fl7.
http://soundcloud.com/cronicle/the-begining-unfinished
Your intro sound a little too muffled. I'd try and crisp it up a bit.
Your basics are really good, might want to add some sub-bass, but thats just me ;)
Might want a little more meat on it... (Bass or Glitches etc)
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Post by deadnoisesystem » Wed Jan 06, 2010 9:29 pm

riproarious wrote:Sorry to re-post, but everyone just skips over mine..

Can I get any feedback?

You can tell me the track is shit if you like..


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strange tune, very abstract. dont be afraid to drop the obvious wobble and experiment
cut the beat up some too


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Post by riproarious » Wed Jan 06, 2010 9:59 pm

deadnoisesystem wrote:work in progress, what do you all think?
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I like it, very relaxing, trancey tune.
I would personally make it little dryer (EQ) and maybe add a few bass notes.
But it could completely change the vibe of the track..
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