tip #1 - use divshare/zshare for clips so i can just hit play without having to download / queue it
as to the tune, its some darkness for sure. i like the chopped vocal or synth or whatever melodic sample is in it, and the use of wobble. your wobble has a sound of its own (good thing)
for it to hit on the dancefloor i think it needs some crispier bass on top of the rolling bass, or at least some more attack on the bassline synth.
i wouldnt trash it