my very first dub step track ever - opinions?

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evilcomputergenius
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my very first dub step track ever - opinions?

Post by evilcomputergenius » Wed Sep 27, 2006 8:36 pm

and coincidentally my first post ever....
I hail from texas where i have made electronica, dnb, industrial, noise and metal. My music has been heading this direction for some time on its own but the great Mundo turned me on to it officially.

Being new to dubstep, I would dig some opinions and suggestions. Help out the noob, you know you want to. This is my first track and it is a work in progress. Its getting there though.

evilcomputergenius - hermaphrodite -69bpm - 320khz
http://download.yousendit.com/96579DA01F51740B

Rock on,
Don

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Post by fullyrecordingz » Wed Sep 27, 2006 8:45 pm

yo from east LDN

its quite a nice track u got. i like all da bits with vocal samples and ur beats are cool.

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Post by evilcomputergenius » Wed Sep 27, 2006 9:30 pm

thanks! I appreciate it! :D

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Post by theverdict » Wed Sep 27, 2006 9:35 pm

what part of Texas???
Houston right cheaaaaaaaaa!

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Post by evilcomputergenius » Wed Sep 27, 2006 9:41 pm

I am from Dallas. I like Houston though. I have had some really good times there. My old outfit Ropelab did some live PAs down there.

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Post by evilcomputergenius » Mon Oct 02, 2006 5:47 pm

Any more feedback before the link expires and I post a new track? Intro and outro ok? levels ok, bass check?
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Don Relyea

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Post by zacharia360bpm » Tue Oct 03, 2006 9:16 pm

Very interesting:)
Definitely from an industrial background.
A bit busy for my taste.
The lower mids/kick and the bass are kind of muddy.
The panning is nice.
Keep at it man... I can see the Vex'd lovers digging your style
when it gets a bit more refined.

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Post by evilcomputergenius » Tue Oct 03, 2006 9:28 pm

Thanks, that is awesome feedback.
My achillies heel is too many virtual tracks for sure. I just need to remember to settle down and that less is more.

I just learned the other day to split off the bass from the rest of the mix and cut the low end out of the mix for all tracks except the bass. I was thinking about trying that trick on this track but now I am going to for sure.

Thanks!
Don

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Post by ekaj » Tue Oct 03, 2006 9:42 pm

Hi

Interesting you're producing at 69bpm instead of 135-140 :)

Checking your track now:

The bass is cool. Sounds a bit overcrowded.. may want to minimalise it a little more, cut the pads out a for a while. You should concentrate on a bass orientated track because your synths sound cool man. Phatten the drums up and make a track based on your bass synths and you're rollin. ;)

take it ez!

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