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pess86
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Post by pess86 » Wed Mar 25, 2009 11:57 am

just finished a new track.

" PESS VS SICK JACKEN GODS BANKER MIX "

http://www.4shared.com/file/94880924/5c ... r_mix.html

HAVE A LISTEN ..

THANKS

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Post by j-sh » Wed Mar 25, 2009 2:34 pm

plainface wrote:
J-sh wrote:I'd really love some feedback on the tunes on my myspace
ive posted in th dubs sections so many times with no reply!

anyway its - myspace.com/joshhappe

the 2 tunes on there are both pretty new and have competely different vibes.

let me know what you think
i love the build up in click clack, i think maybe a little work on the drop though ? other than that its sounding pretty tight mate.
thanks for the feedback mate,
i like ur tracks, but the soundset your using sounds very familiar. ie the strings in the 2348.
also i think alot of the tunes would benifit from sort of riff or hook, as although the some of the atmospheres are cool theres nothing that sticks out. Other than that pretty good stuff, keep it up

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Post by mondays child » Wed Mar 25, 2009 11:20 pm

How do folks. New one off the press called 'in Your Hands' inna Burial stylee.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/5766786223a37121/


All comments appreciated, even if its a 'it's shite'

Safe!

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Post by prime|evil » Wed Mar 25, 2009 11:56 pm

PESS86 wrote:just finished a new track.

" PESS VS SICK JACKEN GODS BANKER MIX "

http://www.4shared.com/file/94880924/5c ... r_mix.html

HAVE A LISTEN ..

THANKS

P -
mondays child wrote:How do folks. New one off the press called 'in Your Hands' inna Burial stylee.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/5766786223a37121/

Real nice vibe on this one, kind of like a spacey oriental shit going on. Nice subtle use of strings. Bit too loud on the vocals though. But yeah, tight tune.


All comments appreciated, even if its a 'it's shite'

Safe!
This is nice man, well chilled out. You mad me smoke my last spliff!! Only one thing i would say his that fuzz noise, like soft static thing blankets it a little too much in points. sometimes it just comes in for a little bit at a nice volume, but n parts where its more predominate, try easing the volume off. apart from that, nice!!

Here is my second ever tune up. It's called Plexing. Let me know, all criticism welcome/needed!!
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Post by keyz » Thu Mar 26, 2009 9:08 pm

safe mondays child, Foregone Conclusions' got a 2step feel it sounds decent .
i got a new one on my page check it out its called Hunter

www.myspace.com/brokenkeyzz
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Post by contakt321 » Thu Mar 26, 2009 9:30 pm

mondays child wrote:How do folks. New one off the press called 'in Your Hands' inna Burial stylee.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/5766786223a37121/


All comments appreciated, even if its a 'it's shite'

Safe!
Wow, liking this one. It's deep!

Nice bass. Is that just a sine wave? Sounds like a tuned 808 almost.

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Post by wave o » Thu Mar 26, 2009 10:15 pm

Finishing this up, its called Be Afraid....


http://www.divshare.com/download/6940834-aec



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This cat thanks you for listening...
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Post by mondays child » Thu Mar 26, 2009 10:31 pm

Primevil, sorry about 'yer smoke dude! the sound youmention is a sample of rain so you're right it sounds fairly 'hissy' I forgot to mention the tracks not finished as yet, there's gonna be some specially recorded vocals going in it at some point.

Keyz, always cool mate, i'll check your tune, no worries.

Contakt321, yep, it is a pure sine tone, but it's doubled up IE two tracks of the same thing without any treatments to minimize any phase issues. All the stuff's done in Logic, mainly from the EXS24.

Thanks guys for the nice comments, it's what makes it all worth it!

Stay cool.


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Post by mondays child » Thu Mar 26, 2009 10:41 pm

Wave0, listened to the tracks in your player. Very nice. The tracks i like are 'Now And Then' 'A Nightmares Dream' and 'Spectralite' you got some cool sounds going on there mate, i like the electronic approach to your stuff. It sometimes sounds a little busy but that's no criticism, as i'm guilty of the same thing at times.
Keep it up mate, nice work!

And Keyz mate, i listened to 'Hunter' very electro styled, it sounds a bit like early Mr Projectile if you've heard of his stuff. Nice. It's cool.

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Post by prime|evil » Fri Mar 27, 2009 2:50 pm

mondays child wrote:Wave0, listened to the tracks in your player. Very nice. The tracks i like are 'Now And Then' 'A Nightmares Dream' and 'Spectralite' you got some cool sounds going on there mate, i like the electronic approach to your stuff. It sometimes sounds a little busy but that's no criticism, as i'm guilty of the same thing at times.
Keep it up mate, nice work!

And Keyz mate, i listened to 'Hunter' very electro styled, it sounds a bit like early Mr Projectile if you've heard of his stuff. Nice. It's cool.
no wonder no one reviewed my tune, i didnt put a link up! must be somethng to do with the smoke...

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Post by wave o » Fri Mar 27, 2009 7:39 pm

mondays child wrote:Wave0, listened to the tracks in your player. Very nice. The tracks i like are 'Now And Then' 'A Nightmares Dream' and 'Spectralite' you got some cool sounds going on there mate, i like the electronic approach to your stuff. It sometimes sounds a little busy but that's no criticism, as i'm guilty of the same thing at times.
Keep it up mate, nice work!
Thanks! Really appreciate the feedback, yeah bro, I love electronic styled approaches, the tracks on my myspace page are my more IDMish tracks, thanks again for checking them out, I have a lot more, and I rotate them around.

Hey bro, I'm listening to your tracks again as I type, really like Radiance and Snowblind, really nice.

Prime Evil, I like your track Plexing, really nice part right past the 4 min mark.

Props everyone.

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Post by legend4ry » Sun Mar 29, 2009 8:41 am

http://virb.com/legendaryinnit

Top tune, Night at the beach.

I think it has the "get lost in the beat" factor but I am unsure if it needs more or not, could do with some other ears to give me some feedback!
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Post by keyz » Mon Mar 30, 2009 12:17 pm

new beat on my page people, called starsky check it out!!

www.myspace.com/brokenkeyzz

cool.

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Post by rugged163 » Mon Mar 30, 2009 1:10 pm

new tune on myspace. Hellephant.

http://www.myspace.com/rugged163

would realy appreciate some mixing feedback and advice.

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Post by HGLDT » Mon Mar 30, 2009 2:30 pm

Easy everyone.
This is a track in prog called Passport to K-Hole.
http://www.divshare.com/download/6962432-701
Let me know what you guys think.
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Post by plainface » Tue Mar 31, 2009 4:58 pm

new track on my myspace called I SEE
www.myspace.com/plainfaceproduction

please feedback

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Post by miscreant » Tue Mar 31, 2009 5:18 pm

Tune up for the swatching on my soundcloud - tunes called the ambassador. few little things im gona change, gona stick a bit of reverb on the highs and mids of the bass and maybe get a bit more crunch out my snare. be good to get some feedback on it gfrom yous - im at work at the moment so i cant check anyones stuff out but ill have a listen to everyones work when i get home for sure!

www.soundcloud.com/miscreant

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Post by plainface » Tue Mar 31, 2009 5:54 pm

MiscreanT wrote:Tune up for the swatching on my soundcloud - tunes called the ambassador. few little things im gona change, gona stick a bit of reverb on the highs and mids of the bass and maybe get a bit more crunch out my snare. be good to get some feedback on it gfrom yous - im at work at the moment so i cant check anyones stuff out but ill have a listen to everyones work when i get home for sure!

www.soundcloud.com/miscreant
thats sounding really nice mate, i love the choppy vocal sample, only thing i could think of to improve would be a bit more variation in the bassline.

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Post by retto » Tue Mar 31, 2009 8:03 pm

Just started a new tune is only the intro part and a little bit after the drop but would like some feed back on the way its going.

http://rapidshare.com/files/215871556/Kushty.mp3

Thanks

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Post by vaiken » Tue Mar 31, 2009 8:17 pm

I'm kinda stuck on this one...have been listening to it a million times and I don't really know what to do wivit.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/57997521a69920c9/

I feel like it's almost finished, but somethings missing...just don't know what.

Would really appreciate if you guys could help me out.

Thanks

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