First tune

axelk · Post by **axelk** » Tue Apr 07, 2009 10:45 am

I have a tune for you lot to listen. http://soundcloud.com/axelk/r

Any kind of feedback is most welcome. Thank you

axelk · Post by **axelk** » Wed Apr 08, 2009 3:08 pm

any thoughts? none?

toolatenow · Post by **toolatenow** » Thu Apr 09, 2009 8:36 pm

its a gd idea but theres not enough variation in the bass and needs more melody bits

axelk · Post by **axelk** » Fri Apr 10, 2009 11:46 am

i see. thank you.

diasporah · Post by **diasporah** » Fri Apr 10, 2009 12:15 pm

Seems more like drone breaks to me...The bass does need some melody instead of a straight note.. I dig the suspense atmosphere but cant say I really like the tune as a whole...If this is your first tune ever then I can encourage you to make more ..Do a little reading up on your craft ...check youtube for a couple tutorials ...I remember my first tune it was ...um.. cool. We have all been there..Keep making tracks

axelk · Post by **axelk** » Fri Apr 10, 2009 4:30 pm

thanks mate. i'll keep working on it.

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