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tomassive · Post by **tomassive** » Sun Apr 26, 2009 8:08 pm

http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?t=86374

copius · Post by **copius** » Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:04 pm

2 NEW PIECES OF FIRE
Feedback would be nice, but as long as you've had a listen im not too fussed

'Cortez' and 'Kent Paul' , top two in myspace player
Easy, Copius

2manynoobs · Post by **2manynoobs** » Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:10 pm

Legendary wrote:
2ManyNoobs wrote:Track i worked on titled "Them Stole My Bike"
The title says it: last thursday they stole my beloved bike, you can read me whine about it in the secret ninja hideout.

Last few days were really shitty for me. Now it's goin better.
I strike back with this Tune!

http://soundcloud.com/2manynoobs/them-stole-my-bike

feedback would be kickass

Listening now..

As I listen..You said

@Legend4ry: nice deep and spotless sounds! i like them.
only one thing: the snare in Polluted City keeps distracting me :p

Distracting how?

Anyways to your tune.

The intro was very good, got my hopes of deep, dark moving track so hearing wobbles instead of deep sub bass and not hearing that melody more was very disappointing. But its your track and the way you take it is up to you..

On the actually track, the drums are great - very good groove and the melody is great (in the intro/breakdown) the wobble is good sound, take the distortion/compression down a bit though, its sounds like its clipping to the extreme! apart from that, sure if you're into this thing it'll be a big tune, its a bit soulless for me though, just opinion not a badly produced track though, far from it! Just not my personal direction

first thx for the reply

then your snare, i don't know, it's a bit higher then the rest of the track and, maybe because of my shit earbuds they distract me a bit. When i listen i can't stop focussing on it. Maybe on a decent system the bass compensates it idk.

and ty for your comment on my tune! Well, wednesday i thought out that melo and put in in FL and i made a chill tune -unfinished- with it.
Then the next day my bike got stolen (haha everybody should know it by now ^^) and i left it till today. And now i wanted that feeling of the loss of the bike in there. It's like the one moment you think about it, you're never gonna see it again (laaaame) and then suddenly you're so fucking pissed of because somebody stole your bike! And then you realise again that it's gone forever. That's why the tune tends to 'change' so sudden like that. And why the breakdown and structure are a bit weird. And yeah the wobble is clipping and distorting like a madman

And thx for the comment on my drums. Believe it or not but they are all standard FL samples :p
I should start using some quality samps tho.

normally my style is a bit more chilled out. (Synkro, Quantum Soul, Scuba,..)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9bI06Z76LX0&fmt=18

that's a chller tune i made, and i think that's more your kind of style but maybe not that dark.

Many thx for the feedback. I'm still kinda new into producing and it's fun to talk with skilled ppl who can help you out, give some tips and stuff..

Can't wait to hear some more tunes of you!

plainface · Post by **plainface** » Mon Apr 27, 2009 3:52 pm

2ManyNoobs wrote:
dedman wrote:http://www.zshare.net/audio/59213842d65badef/

been working on this one all weekend! any feedback on how its sounding please guys!
Cool wobble automation, and overall noice track!

do you use the wobble from on your synth or do you make them in the sequencer?

@Legend4ry: nice deep and spotless sounds! i like them.
only one thing: the snare in Polluted City keeps distracting me :p

@Plainface: where's the myspace link?

@ everybody, c'mon ppl give eachother more feedback! You know how unhappy it make's you feel when you get no feedback.

sorry lol www.myspace.com/plainfaceproduction

im at college atm so cant listen to anyones beats but will give some feedback either when i get home tonight or tomorrow morning

2manynoobs · Post by **2manynoobs** » Mon Apr 27, 2009 4:10 pm

@ Copius

nice man!
good tunes!

@ Plainface

nice clip. Sounds like it's gonna be something. Maybe just hold in mind to bring in some variation. Sound pretty deep and nice,
now finish it!:twisted:

knobgoblin · Post by **knobgoblin** » Tue Apr 28, 2009 12:10 am

@ dedman: Buda Finger is really well crafted and produced, but not really my cup of tea style-wise. I think it could do with an alternate melody making an appearance near the midpoint as a substitute for the chord comp. Basses are pretty creative tho.

@ Copious: Sound choices are kinda standard/boring IMO. There are some good creative ideas in Cortez, but needs more variations and sound design to make the more minimal beats work. The rasta vocal samples sound a little out of place too. Maybe work more on making the basic sounds lush and give them lots of impact to highlight the negative space around them. Drums are too quite for me as well. Good ideas, just keep at it and really work on getting the production up to the level of your ideas.

I've got a couple new tracks on my virb page. Called SOS Dub and Plasma. Plasma still need arranging work I think...

deadly_habit · Post by **deadly_habit** » Tue Apr 28, 2009 5:50 am

http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?t=86693

2manynoobs · Post by **2manynoobs** » Tue Apr 28, 2009 3:46 pm

@ Knobgoblin: SOS Dub is good quality produced shit, but it was a bit weird too flashy, too trippy for me.

Then Plasma. I really really liked that oudoors-night-sample-thing during the intro. It created a realy dark n deep moody atmo. Loved also the pannings of those hats right before the drop. But when it dropped it went again -i was a bit dissapointed- trippy and weird. And it killed the nice flow, if you know what i mean. It's hard to move to.. But i do like that you have your own perculiar style. Just maybe try to keep the flow goin on

@ Deadly Habit: Nice track. Especially nice that you used a sax! (is it a sample or did you play it?)
But maybe try a bit more reverb to let everying flow together and making the whole thing a bit smoother, idk :s
And i loved the sample of the ppl in the beginning. It was a bit funny ^^

deadly_habit · Post by **deadly_habit** » Tue Apr 28, 2009 5:00 pm

2ManyNoobs wrote:@ Knobgoblin: SOS Dub is good quality produced shit, but it was a bit weird too flashy, too trippy for me.

Then Plasma. I really really liked that oudoors-night-sample-thing during the intro. It created a realy dark n deep moody atmo. Loved also the pannings of those hats right before the drop. But when it dropped it went again -i was a bit dissapointed- trippy and weird. And it killed the nice flow, if you know what i mean. It's hard to move to.. But i do like that you have your own perculiar style. Just maybe try to keep the flow goin on

@ Deadly Habit: Nice track. Especially nice that you used a sax! (is it a sample or did you play it?)
But maybe try a bit more reverb to let everying flow together and making the whole thing a bit smoother, idk :s
And i loved the sample of the ppl in the beginning. It was a bit funny ^^

what track are you listening to? only one i can think of that had a sax i did is ashtray jazz

2manynoobs · Post by **2manynoobs** » Tue Apr 28, 2009 6:46 pm

Deadly Habit wrote:
2ManyNoobs wrote:@ Knobgoblin: SOS Dub is good quality produced shit, but it was a bit weird too flashy, too trippy for me.

Then Plasma. I really really liked that oudoors-night-sample-thing during the intro. It created a realy dark n deep moody atmo. Loved also the pannings of those hats right before the drop. But when it dropped it went again -i was a bit dissapointed- trippy and weird. And it killed the nice flow, if you know what i mean. It's hard to move to.. But i do like that you have your own perculiar style. Just maybe try to keep the flow goin on

@ Deadly Habit: Nice track. Especially nice that you used a sax! (is it a sample or did you play it?)
But maybe try a bit more reverb to let everying flow together and making the whole thing a bit smoother, idk :s
And i loved the sample of the ppl in the beginning. It was a bit funny ^^
what track are you listening to? only one i can think of that had a sax i did is ashtray jazz

comment @ tune at the top of your myspace player. Isn't that the one you needed feedback on?

haxx · Post by **haxx** » Tue Apr 28, 2009 8:42 pm

hai guise.

thanx for makin this thread as i am relativeley scared of the dubs section, and feel i know the production crew more.

been postin' on this forum for a bit now, so decided to finaly have a crack at making a few propper dubs. Having a bit of trouble with the audio quality on myspace but here are my first 2 attempts: www.myspace.com/mninjauk

any feedback would be great.

deadly_habit · Post by **deadly_habit** » Tue Apr 28, 2009 8:57 pm

2ManyNoobs wrote:
Deadly Habit wrote:
2ManyNoobs wrote:@ Knobgoblin: SOS Dub is good quality produced shit, but it was a bit weird too flashy, too trippy for me.

Then Plasma. I really really liked that oudoors-night-sample-thing during the intro. It created a realy dark n deep moody atmo. Loved also the pannings of those hats right before the drop. But when it dropped it went again -i was a bit dissapointed- trippy and weird. And it killed the nice flow, if you know what i mean. It's hard to move to.. But i do like that you have your own perculiar style. Just maybe try to keep the flow goin on

@ Deadly Habit: Nice track. Especially nice that you used a sax! (is it a sample or did you play it?)
But maybe try a bit more reverb to let everying flow together and making the whole thing a bit smoother, idk :s
And i loved the sample of the ppl in the beginning. It was a bit funny ^^
what track are you listening to? only one i can think of that had a sax i did is ashtray jazz
comment @ tune at the top of your myspace player. Isn't that the one you needed feedback on?

nah undersea was the one
synesthesia was made in like 06 if i recall been released, featured in knowledge and the theory rmx was on the intalex fabric live cd

paravrais · Post by **paravrais** » Tue Apr 28, 2009 11:05 pm

Lo, I have returned to this thread XD

I'm on my laptop with no headphones or speakers at the moment so I can't really post feedback but I will do tomorrow when I'm with my regular setup.

I'm looking for feedback on my two latest dubstep tunes on my myspace http://www.myspace.com/sativabreather

First one is called 'Watevs' and the second one is 'Cat'. Watevs might still undergo a few changes to get it totally polished but I think Cat is just how I want it now.

knobgoblin · Post by **knobgoblin** » Tue Apr 28, 2009 11:54 pm

@2manynoobs: thanks for the listen. yeah, I'm coming to dubstep from more of an IDM/Industrial background so I like weird and trippy a lot...maybe I've done too many psychedelics...I'm also getting kinda tired of making straight dubstep club music and am trying to create a unique sound for myself. Unfortunately, soundcloud hates my computer and won't let me listen to your track...

knobgoblin · Post by **knobgoblin** » Wed Apr 29, 2009 12:36 am

oops double post

paravrais · Post by **paravrais** » Wed Apr 29, 2009 11:44 am

@plainface - we just listening to the top track on your player yeh? i well like it altho its very short. Would like to hear the whole tune to give proper feedback but I like what I've heard!

@M-Ninja - Not really feeling your sub, is that a sine?!!? and your tracks are a bit minimal for my liking but they seem well put together.

2manynoobs · Post by **2manynoobs** » Wed Apr 29, 2009 2:04 pm

@ Deadly Habit:

The title 'Undersea' suits the tune perfectly! Really enjoyed the track. Nice atmo, spotless sounds, just what we like! Also big up for that remix of that other tune of yours on fabriclive cd

@ paravrais: Realy like your artistname, and the tunes are very nice too. But Watevs could indeed undergo a few changes. Maybe add some crunshyness to that tune, idk why but i think it would do good to that track. And Cat.. just too short! it's a sweet tune. i like the intro very much, nice melody and build up but the wobble after the "drop" sounds a bit too soft and cheesy imo. maybe it needs a bit more higher crunshyness too, but not too much. Then the part after that wobble is very great, it's a weird atmo, it feels like being realy drunk and you know you're slowly loosing control.. Very nice! And yeah the vocals are big fun. They added even more drunkness

@ Knobgoblin: I realy like that you indeed want to have your own style, but i would realy love it if you could make a track with all that trippyness of yours -cause that's what ur good at- but stil keeping that "flow". Try to make something where you can move smoothly to, while your head keeps spinning and spinning of al the trippness

But ofcourse you don't have to, ur free to do what you want!

2manynoobs · Post by **2manynoobs** » Wed Apr 29, 2009 4:40 pm

hav a listen if you can!

http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?p=1154994#1154994

Feedback would be kickass

goose_step · Post by **goose_step** » Wed Apr 29, 2009 4:44 pm

just uploaded 3 new tunes
let me no wht u think
top three in the player

@Copius - kent paul is ace nice deep wobbles and ur logo is something else mate!!

haxx · Post by **haxx** » Wed Apr 29, 2009 6:00 pm

paravrais wrote:@plainface - we just listening to the top track on your player yeh? i well like it altho its very short. Would like to hear the whole tune to give proper feedback but I like what I've heard!

@M-Ninja - Not really feeling your sub, is that a sine?!!? and your tracks are a bit minimal for my liking but they seem well put together.

yeah the sub is shit, gonna adjust that today. I cant even remember how i made it as i have been working on that track for a while.
plus as i mentioned myspace makes it sound shitter

. Thanks for the feedback anywayz

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