Impey & Charlie T - Sausage Surprise

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Impey & Charlie T - Sausage Surprise

Post by impey » Mon May 04, 2009 5:37 pm

Well me and my mate (Both 13) Started this track today, we are trying to find out on what it needs, its so empty and bits need doing up, obviously this isnt the finished product so we need some advice

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kup2OqMBX9M

Thanks alot :D
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Post by matt88 » Mon May 04, 2009 10:30 pm

You need to really layer up the bass, add plenty of constant sub-bass to drive the tune and make the lead bass synth louder, the melody is too overpowering. The snare drums could be crisper to pack more of a punch as well. Im not a fan of the synth you've used for the melody either, sounds too much like a school keyboard! What program/synth are you using? You should def try experimenting to get a dirtier sound. On the whole though its a start and fair play for being 13!
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