psychedelic dubstep...feedback please!! (Sun In Aquarius)320

sun_in_aquarius · Post by **sun_in_aquarius** » Sat May 23, 2009 8:15 am

heya!
This is a track 90% or so complete...not sure really what genre it is, thought some dubsteppers might find a familiar element or 2...??? would love to get some feedback and any areas you think it could be improved...maybe:
-too busy/not busy enough?
-arrangment?too long/short in sections or as a whole.
-mix?
...looks like im going to record some spacy style electric guitar for the breakdown courtesy of a friend so if u are interested in a demo when its complete let us know!
any feedback would be much appreciated and i would generally be stoked to know what u guys think as i dont really post on forums a great deal as i dont really know where 2 put it!
peace
jake, Oz

http://soundcloud.com/goaconstrictor01/ ... e-aquarian

bass hertz · Post by **bass hertz** » Sat May 23, 2009 9:26 am

Nice choon man. I am really feeling this. Elements of OTT, autechre, and italian deep dub. Nice appliance for the late night trip. I think on 1st listen that the female spoken-word would sound incredible if mutated in bombaman style, but hey... never imitate.

You gonna put in some space guitar parts?? yes... I recommend listeing to anything by Steve Hillage (GONG, System 7, 777, System 7.3, The Orb) for inspiration. Good luck man.

Would love a 320 of this now and one when done if possible.

sun_in_aquarius · Post by **sun_in_aquarius** » Sat May 23, 2009 9:41 am

thanks for the feedback brother, vox samples are of my flatmate,recorded a poem and then used some of her breathing and stuff in there aswell....will have a 320 out to you as soon as its done brotha!
boom.

bass hertz · Post by **bass hertz** » Sat May 23, 2009 10:29 am

POND LIFE · Post by **POND LIFE** » Sat May 23, 2009 11:31 am

sounds very well produced! im not into this kinda thing, i mean i love a bit of psy trance and psychedelic-tinged but otherwise normal dubstep but i cant really offer much feedback tbh! other than it sounds nice and you're doing a good job?

vishnu · Post by **vishnu** » Sat May 23, 2009 12:52 pm

interesting samples in this one.. I almost felt it took too long to get into the "hook", but I enjoyed the listen nonetheless. keep it up mate

sun_in_aquarius · Post by **sun_in_aquarius** » Sun May 24, 2009 1:33 am

cheers bud!

tripwire22 · Post by **tripwire22** » Sun May 24, 2009 3:18 am

this is a really deep track bro id also like a 320 whenever

sun_in_aquarius · Post by **sun_in_aquarius** » Sun May 24, 2009 11:46 am

no worries brutha! been getting some good feedback from friends and so on prob gonna add some more rythmical elements to get it driving a bit more and maybe warming up the kick and bass a bit and possibly shortening it...

fuzz_2k · Post by **fuzz_2k** » Sun May 24, 2009 12:47 pm

interesting sounds!! takes a while 2 get the groove but Nice

spkta · Post by **spkta** » Mon May 25, 2009 4:04 am

sounds like you got three or four tracks here! 10 minutes is kind of long, however, i really dig the tracks. only feedback i have is to maybe split it up into several tracks whenever the core sound of the track changes. dig it dude, especially the sample at the very beginning that sounds like squishy fucking

bass hertz · Post by **bass hertz** » Mon May 25, 2009 4:28 am

cook it up

cant wait to get this mate :dinner: :eat: loving the length also.. pay no attention to anyone who sez its too long

sun_in_aquarius · Post by **sun_in_aquarius** » Mon May 25, 2009 5:00 am

SpKTA wrote:sounds like you got three or four tracks here! 10 minutes is kind of long, however, i really dig the tracks. only feedback i have is to maybe split it up into several tracks whenever the core sound of the track changes. dig it dude, especially the sample at the very beginning that sounds like squishy fucking

ha ha sik brutha honestly....i recorded chicken squishing in a bowl of honey soy sauce!!!ha ha

thanks heaps for the feedback,just waiting on a guitar track then will wrap it up!!! thanks again brutha's!!

sun_in_aquarius · Post by **sun_in_aquarius** » Mon May 25, 2009 5:10 am

vishnu wrote:interesting samples in this one.. I almost felt it took too long to get into the "hook", but I enjoyed the listen nonetheless. keep it up mate

thanks for the comment brutha,really dig ure track on the anachoic chamber cd,was the first dubstep cd i heard.....by taking to long to get into the hook do u mean the length of the introduction or the progression into the introduction of more sounds????cheers!

freedomdanishbadman · Post by **freedomdanishbadman** » Mon May 25, 2009 1:22 pm

nice one! would dig a 320 if your willing!

sun_in_aquarius · Post by **sun_in_aquarius** » Mon May 25, 2009 2:22 pm

will send some 320's out of the current version (rough mix aswell) and then ill send the finished version to everyone that asks in a week or 2 when its done!!! peace!

sun_in_aquarius · Post by **sun_in_aquarius** » Wed May 27, 2009 12:57 am

sun_in_aquarius · Post by **sun_in_aquarius** » Sat May 30, 2009 2:24 pm

bump

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mingus · Post by **mingus** » Sat May 30, 2009 8:28 pm

i like can i get a 320?

bass hertz · Post by **bass hertz** » Sat May 30, 2009 11:48 pm

dont forget me man. still wanting this great tune.

psychedelic dubstep...feedback please!! (Sun In Aquarius)320

psychedelic dubstep...feedback please!! (Sun In Aquarius)320

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