Stapleface- Stapled Shut (FREE unlimited 320)

stapleface · Post by **stapleface** » Sun Jun 14, 2009 3:56 pm

Safe dsf crew, I'm back with a brand spankin new DAW- switched to Logic full time

IMO this is my best tune yet

Update; Now available on Virb and Myspazz ^_^

safe

Stapled Shut

EDIT: Updated link further down

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stapleface · Post by **stapleface** » Sun Jun 14, 2009 8:26 pm

still sortin out the mix btw
but there's the structure/ composition

stapleface · Post by **stapleface** » Sun Jun 14, 2009 10:34 pm

slightly better mix-
stream or download here

New version, new link
see below

stapleface · Post by **stapleface** » Mon Jun 15, 2009 9:47 am

BUMP

also this is the final mix I reckon

http://www.divshare.com/download/7661047-f6e

Feedback appreciated- got bare views and no replies. Is that cos it's shit?

dr nimble · Post by **dr nimble** » Mon Jun 15, 2009 1:29 pm

The tune is interesting and sounds very original to me. It has quite a minimalist style in a full kind of way (if that makes any sense

).

If I had to pick at it there would be 2 suggestions.

1: Maybe vary the lead bassline a tiny bit more. Could be different melodies or different sound all together.

2: There is quite a bit of space in the mid range that could benefit from a soft pad.

I am used to soundclick electronica forum where the whole point is detailed feedback, so I hope this is useful.

Duncan.

fuzz_2k · Post by **fuzz_2k** » Mon Jun 15, 2009 1:40 pm

Dr Nimble wrote:
1: Maybe vary the lead bassline a tiny bit more. Could be different melodies or different sound all together.

2: There is quite a bit of space in the mid range that could benefit from a soft pad.

stapleface · Post by **stapleface** » Tue Jun 16, 2009 7:35 am

cheers for the feedback

more people than that must've heard it though...

(cheeky bump)

redfire · Post by **redfire** » Tue Jun 16, 2009 10:19 am

lovin the synth on stapled shut but yeah bassline needs bit more variation though mate.. but big tune i like it

also likin the mechanical as well, though its a tiny bit repetative, good vibes though

stapleface · Post by **stapleface** » Tue Jun 16, 2009 5:48 pm

right so change the bassline then
cool.
I shall get on that.

cheers for FB

Stapleface- Stapled Shut (FREE unlimited 320)

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