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lowpass · Post by **lowpass** » Thu Jul 09, 2009 5:51 pm

LHD wrote:@Devium-Nice tune, little bit more eq needed for sure though, your kick seems to be hitting where your sub should be and your bass is all mid. Try eq'ing your kick with a spike at 80hz and a spike at 125hz with a hard low cut under 80hz. Boost your bass hard under 70hz and all they way down to 35hz if you need to double your bass line to keep the mid and your cpu can handle then go ahead and double the bass track, add a lowpass filter to your low end with a cutoff at 75hz to avoid signal clash. All in all tune sounding good. Big up!

did you manage to give mine a listen in the end?

reignstep · Post by **reignstep** » Thu Jul 09, 2009 6:28 pm

Lowpass wrote:
Reignz wrote:Lowpass - I loved the mood you set with the subbass, really awesome flow and imo you're doing a great job so far.

This is a song I worked on 2 weeks ago that I picked up now again, tell me what you think

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/253644
Cheers, is there anything else you'd advise? the sub loud enough in the mix?

Checked yours out, didn't know newgrounds uploaded music let alone with badger badger as the background, best mascot for dubstep if eve I saw one. It's sounding cool, atmospheric build up some heavy bass, really dark

Mixing of the sub was perfect for my taste, I was thinking of maybe you should build up the second lead abit sooner, as what you've got from 0:55 to 1:50 is just plain the same patterns all over and over again (I think). It sounds good, though maybe just a bit too long. Once the second lead kicks in, the song is nearly done in my eyes really

lhd · Post by **lhd** » Thu Jul 09, 2009 6:29 pm

@ Lowpass-yeah I did listen, sorry, my reply must have timed out or something, I really love the subs and the piano parts, all very tasteful, my only constructive criticism would be that it really doesn't grab me too much, needs just a touch of soul or even a time change I think would be great, around the 3:12 mark or so, I forget exactly, would be a great place for a rhythm drop or drum change-up. All in all I think it's a great tune. After peeping your soundcloud I do hope that you continue making intelligent music as I personally do enjoy music that makes me think as well as feel.

lowpass · Post by **lowpass** » Thu Jul 09, 2009 6:36 pm

LHD wrote:@ Lowpass-yeah I did listen, sorry, my reply must have timed out or something, I really love the subs and the piano parts, all very tasteful, my only constructive criticism would be that it really doesn't grab me too much, needs just a touch of soul or even a time change I think would be great, around the 3:12 mark or so, I forget exactly, would be a great place for a rhythm drop or drum change-up. All in all I think it's a great tune. After peeping your soundcloud I do hope that you continue making intelligent music as I personally do enjoy music that makes me think as well as feel.

Cheers man I'll get on it, when you say intelligent music what track are you referring to?

lhd · Post by **lhd** » Thu Jul 09, 2009 6:44 pm

Broke Island and the tune you're after right now. Just my opinion, I get tired of listening to club-rockin wobble shit personally. Don't get me wrong a well done wobble is disgusting and I do enjoy hard bangin tunes, this is dubstep after all. However, I prefer deeper, more thoughtful drops and tunes with their own unique style and rhythmic variations that are out of the ordinary. Things that don't sound like presets from Massive etc.

lowpass · Post by **lowpass** » Thu Jul 09, 2009 6:52 pm

haha cheers man, yeah I thought I'd try something new, thanks

reignstep · Post by **reignstep** » Thu Jul 09, 2009 7:15 pm

LHD wrote:Broke Island and the tune you're after right now. Just my opinion, I get tired of listening to club-rockin wobble shit personally. Don't get me wrong a well done wobble is disgusting and I do enjoy hard bangin tunes, this is dubstep after all. However, I prefer deeper, more thoughtful drops and tunes with their own unique style and rhythmic variations that are out of the ordinary. Things that don't sound like presets from Massive etc.

Well that's what I prefer aswell when listening to dubstep, the deep basses and original leads that get you going and settle a mood, but at a real dubstep rave, I still prefer the mind wacking dark wobble basses ^^

turbo p · Post by **turbo p** » Thu Jul 09, 2009 10:39 pm

brand new here

thought id post a track for feedback

Njamimars · Post by **Njamimars** » Fri Jul 10, 2009 9:45 am

So I made a song, just by reading things on this forum, I also stole a vocal out of the DSF for this track I hope that ain't a big deal.

It's my first Dubstep track, or maybe it isn't even close to it, but I made what I could.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_jG411M5Z4A

I hope to get some feedback!

EDIT: Wrong topic..

lhd · Post by **lhd** » Fri Jul 10, 2009 2:01 pm

@njmamimars-man that vocal sample is so noisy! It just comes in way too loud and gets all in your face. The whole track is too loud. Nothing should be over 0db, and this joint really is painful to listen too. A little more reverb on the whole tune would be nice, something to warm it all up a bit. Your drums sound decent, but sort of lost in the mix of the guy screaming and that irritating wobble, just my opinion, not trying to come off a prick, but this is your first song so you should have lots of room to grow. I would suggest starting your mix out a lot lower and getting better volume out of your samples first then bringing up the volume on the master, see the gain structure thread for more help on that. Also, I like a bit more of an intro on tunes, you don't have to kill the club in your first 8 bars! Hopefully this helps. Great effort on what you have done so far, keep up the hard work.

Njamimars · Post by **Njamimars** » Fri Jul 10, 2009 3:00 pm

LHD wrote:@njmamimars-man that vocal sample is so noisy! It just comes in way too loud and gets all in your face. The whole track is too loud. Nothing should be over 0db, and this joint really is painful to listen too. A little more reverb on the whole tune would be nice, something to warm it all up a bit. Your drums sound decent, but sort of lost in the mix of the guy screaming and that irritating wobble, just my opinion, not trying to come off a prick, but this is your first song so you should have lots of room to grow. I would suggest starting your mix out a lot lower and getting better volume out of your samples first then bringing up the volume on the master, see the gain structure thread for more help on that. Also, I like a bit more of an intro on tunes, you don't have to kill the club in your first 8 bars! Hopefully this helps. Great effort on what you have done so far, keep up the hard work.

Thanks alot for these tips!
I will work on it!

dansu · Post by **dansu** » Fri Jul 10, 2009 5:32 pm

so, this tune is basically finished, i just can`t master it well, due to crappy soundsystem, so i`ll just post it here.

http://www.speedyshare.com/149409447.html

hf folks

jsilver · Post by **jsilver** » Fri Jul 10, 2009 9:10 pm

new jsilver one

http://soundcloud.com/jsilver/drumatic-groove

thanks

edlaws · Post by **edlaws** » Sat Jul 11, 2009 9:29 am

hi all, this is just a start of a tune, not sure where to go with it next so any suggestions/comments/feedback is much appreciated ... you'll see that the drums are just lifted from the purephase back with a bit of extra processing, i intend on putting together my own drums for it but just wanted to have a template to get the track started.
many thanks,

voice4.mp3 - 4.71MB

http://www.zshare.net/audio/62519316f165243b/

edlaws · Post by **edlaws** » Sat Jul 11, 2009 9:30 am

sorry meant to say drums are from a 'purephase pack' i.e. sample pack.

aux · Post by **aux** » Sat Jul 11, 2009 2:06 pm

http://www.soundcloud.com/djwash

new tune called RoadShow

i'm not totally sure about it as yet, would be great if i get some feed back on this one! cheers!

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Sat Jul 11, 2009 3:01 pm

turbo p wrote:brand new here

thought id post a track for feedback

your tune is sounding really good so far, but the thing that I immediately noticed first is that your bassline is too jagged. it doesn't flow well with the rest of the track, maybe you were going for that but to me, it sticks out like a sore thumb and takes away from everything else that is going on in the song.

shambandito · Post by **shambandito** » Sat Jul 11, 2009 3:46 pm

been working on this tune with the 'song of storms' melody from zelda

practically the second song i've actually done properly so nothing too special imo..

need some feedback though not sure bout the intro and the congas in the middle part.. i definitely need some more percussion but i think the congas aren't really working for this particular style of song.
arrangement, mixdown and so on isnt final at all yet (oh and no sub in it yet).. just the general idea of the song.
any general feedback is welcome, just dont be too hard on me (:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/6253097234bfda0f/

thx

reignstep · Post by **reignstep** » Sat Jul 11, 2009 4:13 pm

Aux wrote:http://www.soundcloud.com/djwash

new tune called RoadShow

i'm not totally sure about it as yet, would be great if i get some feed back on this one! cheers!

sounds good, though the electric guitar like lead isn't too fitting in the whole song. the flow is good , I like ^^

shambandito wrote:been working on this tune with the 'song of storms' melody from zelda practically the second song i've actually done properly so nothing too special imo..

need some feedback though not sure bout the intro and the congas in the middle part.. i definitely need some more percussion but i think the congas aren't really working for this particular style of song.
arrangement, mixdown and so on isnt final at all yet (oh and no sub in it yet).. just the general idea of the song.
any general feedback is welcome, just dont be too hard on me (:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/6253097234bfda0f/

thx

Hmm well yeah you shouldn't really mix zelda songs since they already are perfect, awesome, and stuff like that ^^ but good attempt, the drums need some working , it's like you only hear kicks & snares.

Update on my song, changed the drums abit:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/62530564cb8eb6c7/

dark elixir · Post by **dark elixir** » Sat Jul 11, 2009 5:20 pm

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q34BrHpS3yI&fmt=18

i uploaded a remix of prodigy's omen to youtube...it aint finished but if anyone could suggest ideas and critisism it is much apreciated

thanks dsf peepz

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