Extreme Dark dubstep attempt

[decree]

I went out on a limb and tried to make some really wierd dark dubstep, so far im just content with it but I feel like it needs alot of work

any feedback would be great, I already got some saying that I should make the bassline more like a bassline with a groove instead of some wierd living synth monster. Now that I think about it I feel like my drop is just a long breakdown.

http://soundcloud.com/dopecool

its the top song titled Decree - Denied

[low mixdown because of early version (I like to keep track of my peaks)]

[decree]

slight update up

[mbahntge]

I really dig it, the high hats contrast well to the moving synth. I think the intro section sounds a little formulaic maybe, mix it up a bit. And are you gonna add more? You could do a lot with the meat of that track, break down its pieces and all. If you do finish/put a solid ending to it I'd love a 320.

keep it up, dig your stuff

[decree]

thanks man, and ya i didnt add the 2nd half of it yet.
ill work on the intro more add some more layers