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rubixdub · Post by **rubixdub** » Thu Jul 16, 2009 6:08 pm

JimmaJamJamie wrote:

If anyone could check my song and give me some feedback, good or bad it will be much appreciated.

http://soundcloud.com/etikut/the-arrival-3

I'm feeling the dark vibes there, the drums are sounding tight.
I felt the sub was a little bit on the quiet side but other than that yeah pretty good

JimmaJamJamie · Post by **JimmaJamJamie** » Thu Jul 16, 2009 8:35 pm

Yeah i am not too sure if that because it's quite a low frequency bass or it is just quitet but if i turn it up too much the sub starts making a noise through my tweeters so essential isn't in the lower frequencies anymore =/.

Any help on this? Compression maybe?

piggyuk · Post by **piggyuk** » Thu Jul 16, 2009 11:21 pm

Alright dudes

I'm a proper noobie so you reckon you could have a listen to one of my first tune attempts?

http://virb.com/piggy

cheers

rubixdub · Post by **rubixdub** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:34 am

JimmaJamJamie wrote:Yeah i am not too sure if that because it's quite a low frequency bass or it is just quitet but if i turn it up too much the sub starts making a noise through my tweeters so essential isn't in the lower frequencies anymore =/.

Any help on this? Compression maybe?

If you have a bitcrusher you can use that to give it a bit more presence and just experiment with different waveforms as well as the sine. I don't mean i can't hear it i just think it would be sick if it had a little bit more of a boost.

odiecreversed · Post by **odiecreversed** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 1:27 am

Yo,
http://finlaybelcher.co.uk/artwork/HealthClub.mp3

If I could get some feedback on this it'd be rad. It's the first dubstep track I've got a reasonable way with.

Structure of the track is a bit out of whack... I think? Anyway I just want to get better, so any constructive criticism or tips are very welcome.

Cheers, will leave some feedback after I get some sleep.

dansu · Post by **dansu** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:47 pm

healthclub owns, nice smashy leadbass in there :>

comment this:
http://www.speedyshare.com/149409447.html

HangManDubstep · Post by **HangManDubstep** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:52 pm

piggyuk wrote:Alright dudes

I'm a proper noobie so you reckon you could have a listen to one of my first tune attempts?

http://virb.com/piggy

cheers

not bad..sounds quite gd but dont like the michael jackson samples(bit gay)
other than that tis a gd first effort and im sure ure future beats will be gd

odiecreversed · Post by **odiecreversed** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 1:28 pm

Dansu wrote:healthclub owns, nice smashy leadbass in there :>

comment this:
http://www.speedyshare.com/149409447.html

Like the start, reminds me of streets of rage. Not sure about the sound of the keys at the beginning though, as to me, they sound a bit amatuerish... or maybe it's just the bit where the keys pitch up quickly that does it? Melodically it sounds good though. Drums sound nice. The bass sounds pretty good too, although, there's parts of the bass where the lowpass might be a bit over modulated or the envelope too high? Only throwing stuff out there and just my opinion obviously.

dansu · Post by **dansu** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 1:42 pm

thanks for listening.

well, i heard some much more modulated and distorted basses, but maybe your right, it doesnt really fit into the mood of the whole song @some parts, due to too aggressive modulation.
but youre the first one who mentioned it, so i think its bearable

piggyuk · Post by **piggyuk** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 2:01 pm

X-Fyah wrote:
piggyuk wrote:Alright dudes

I'm a proper noobie so you reckon you could have a listen to one of my first tune attempts?

http://virb.com/piggy

cheers
not bad..sounds quite gd but dont like the michael jackson samples(bit gay)
other than that tis a gd first effort and im sure ure future beats will be gd

Thanks for the feedback man i'm working on some more right now
yeh it was just a vocal sample in desperation when i realised i didn't have any!
thanks dude

martello · Post by **martello** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 8:36 pm

Finished. "Get Busy".

Listen here:
http://www.martellorotativo.com/mr_dub15_140.mp3
or
http://www.myspace.com/mrotativo

rfk · Post by **rfk** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 8:54 pm

Got a load of barely listened to tracks on the myspace so I thought I'd whack them in here even though I'm not really looking for much feedback just more listeners really. I know my mixdowns aren't great so feel free to comment on that.

www.myspace.com/rfkuk

let me know if you're feeling them

mqfluquerton · Post by **mqfluquerton** » Sun Jul 19, 2009 8:29 pm

http://soundcloud.com/magic-mash/ivory

any thoughts?
ez

head transfer · Post by **head transfer** » Mon Jul 20, 2009 11:21 am

http://soundcloud.com/head-transfer/3xdrop-final

I think I can call this finished. What do you think? Any comments are welcome...

reignstep · Post by **reignstep** » Mon Jul 20, 2009 12:14 pm

Head Transfer wrote:http://soundcloud.com/head-transfer/3xdrop-final

I think I can call this finished. What do you think? Any comments are welcome...

I think it's an awesome track except for one little thing that would make it even better:

Your kick atm kinda sucks, it doesn't sound EQ'd at all , perhaps it's a LQ sample , but it needs replacement or a huge boost. If you can make the kick stand out in the mix, the track is done I think..

mqfluquerton · Post by **mqfluquerton** » Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:25 pm

Head Transfer wrote:http://soundcloud.com/head-transfer/3xdrop-final

I think I can call this finished. What do you think? Any comments are welcome...

yuh i'd a agree about the kick, i reckon at points ur synths overpower evrything a little.

otherwise it's a cool track, the build up section from 2:43 is totally sweet

IMHO i would totally drop the 3rds a semitone and make the whole thing minor, the tunes a little too cheerful for my taste. or pick a mode
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Musical_mode ,minor modes=archaic evil

but u may disagree, just my opinion

ez

wooda916 · Post by **wooda916** » Mon Jul 20, 2009 2:05 pm

http://soundcloud.com/wooda/wooda-money-debt-320

Dark and moody roller.

feedback would be much appreciated, particularly on the mix-down.

Cheers.

wooda916 · Post by **wooda916** » Mon Jul 20, 2009 2:10 pm

JimmaJamJamie wrote:If anyone could check my song and give me some feedback, good or bad it will be much appreciated.

http://soundcloud.com/etikut/the-arrival-3

nice tune this mate.

Loving the minimal approach, spooky as fuck like walking through a misty graveyard.

Think the sub could do with being turned up slightly.

mqfluquerton · Post by **mqfluquerton** » Mon Jul 20, 2009 6:06 pm

wooda916 wrote:http://soundcloud.com/wooda/wooda-money-debt-320

Dark and moody roller.

feedback would be much appreciated, particularly on the mix-down.

Cheers.

yuh man sounds dark

personally, i might lay off that snare a little, or choose a crisper sound.

s'all i can say really

ez

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