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[rectaldubz]

http://www.myspace.com/rectaldubz
just finished the tune i posted before, top of the player, anyone wants a 320 just pm me, oh yeh feedback would be sik thanks

[chharry]

This is my first attempt ever at electronic music production (made in fl studio . If anyone would be consider having a listen and telling me where im going wrong it would be appreciated

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http://soundcloud.com/chharry/my-first-cp

[elliott whyte]

Hey this is pretty much my first post

Anyways heres my first forum-worthy W.I.P, not really sure if its exactly dubstep but its what i like lol.

This is just the main section atm, looped once so it isn't too short
Some comments + crits please

http://soundcloud.com/klown-theory/wip1

very good...only thing is always work on the drum beat loads..at many percs and hi hats shakers..thats why bengas beats sound amazing cos he uses shit loads of shakers and perc...other than that it was a nice peice of dubstep

Yeh thanks, there is actually alot of other hats and perc in there, but i need to bring them up alot in the mix. Anyone else?

Thanks

[dansu]

i like your sound elliott whyte, pretty ambient melody

[dots]

http://soundcloud.com/dots/lostsoundz

[dots]

This is my first attempt ever at electronic music production (made in fl studio . If anyone would be consider having a listen and telling me where im going wrong it would be appreciated

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http://soundcloud.com/chharry/my-first-cp

i really like the beat
and the basslines ok
but the vocal samples are poor and the bit that speeds up is just wierd
but id deffinetly do something with that beat
keep it up

[deadly_habit]

maybe already posted
didnt know a dubstep booty already existed but ginuwine - pony bootleg
http://www.sendspace.com/file/u0hqtv

[dignan]

http://soundcloud.com/dots/lostsoundz

wasn't really feelin your tune man. the dums need some work, the kick has to be more prominent and that snare needs some more punch to it. try compressing it some more. and that bit where the snare seems to stutter should be taken out completely or put in a different spot. it comes in at the wrong time and throws the whole rhythm off. and I don't like tunes that rely all on the wobble bass.

nice start though man, keep it up!

[ianfm]

working on these two new tunes:

http://dl-client.getdropbox.com/u/71572 ... ontact.mp3
sad thing, really spacious

http://dl-client.getdropbox.com/u/71572 ... la%202.mp3
more 8bit thing, really bouncy

[d16]

Short demo of something I've been working on lately.
Something is missing, but I don't really know what.
http://soundcloud.com/d16/dub-nil

[dots]

http://soundcloud.com/dots/lostsoundz

wasn't really feelin your tune man. the dums need some work, the kick has to be more prominent and that snare needs some more punch to it. try compressing it some more. and that bit where the snare seems to stutter should be taken out completely or put in a different spot. it comes in at the wrong time and throws the whole rhythm off. and I don't like tunes that rely all on the wobble bass.

nice start though man, keep it up!

yh now listenin back i rely need to sort the drums out a bit
and i should just simplify it i think
peace(:

[d16]

Short demo of something I've been working on lately.
Something is missing, but I don't really know what.
http://soundcloud.com/d16/dub-nil

Sub in the empty spaces would do it a lot of good.. All the effects & delayed vocals are pretty sweet tho..

Alright uploaded rev. 2.
Check it out.
Added some sub-bass.

[aspect-dubz]

Short demo of something I've been working on lately.
Something is missing, but I don't really know what.
http://soundcloud.com/d16/dub-nil

Sub in the empty spaces would do it a lot of good.. All the effects & delayed vocals are pretty sweet tho..

Alright uploaded rev. 2.
Check it out.
Added some sub-bass.

im liking this one, got a nice grimy feel to it, check out my newest piece space invaders i could do with some feedback maybe some tips on what to add in the mix, thanks:

http://soundcloud.com/aspect-dubz

[dwayne]

all comments welcome... even if they contain some bad words lol

http://www.zshare.net/audio/63583863e733d816/

[tripwire22]

all comments welcome... even if they contain some bad words lol

http://www.zshare.net/audio/63583863e733d816/

It sounds like i turned on a gameboy 20 seconds in after that sound it sounds better. did u EQ this? i think i just need work maybe a stronger sub?

[spoon pandemic]

This is my first ever dubstep track and my first track using Logic.
Obviously still a lot of work to be done but I'd like to know if I'm on the right track.
Keep in mind I've only ben using logic for 2 days so don't be too harsh lol.

http://soundcloud.com/spoon-pandemic/ill-get-you-sample

Cheers

[Arshaw]

hey, can any one give me feedback on my new tune...

work in progress n all that... mix is a bit off

its called Distance,

www.myspace.com/KidKuduro

had to upload to myspace, soundcload limit reached...

will give feedback in rtrn, obv

[Arshaw]

This is my first ever dubstep track and my first track using Logic.
Obviously still a lot of work to be done but I'd like to know if I'm on the right track.
Keep in mind I've only ben using logic for 2 days so don't be too harsh lol.

http://soundcloud.com/spoon-pandemic/ill-get-you-sample

Cheers

i think you need to look more at the bass m8

i mean that synth thing youve got goin on is cool but nt really dubstep.

the sample/s u used r pretty cool, def on the right track with that imo.
def adds a different flav to the track.

maybe you need to rework the drums tho. more swing less kick drums. sounds like some kinda metal or summat. the kick n snare sound fat tho, dubby aswell. get sum hats or perc in there, fill the space up

put it this way m8, it can only get better.

is this ur first production, or jus 1st on logic btw?

[legend4ry]

http://www.divshare.com/download/8078895-ef8

Will give feedback to anyone who gives me some as standard.