PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

hardware, software, tips and tricks
Forum rules
By using this "Production" sub-forum, you acknowledge that you have read, understood and agreed with our terms of use for this site. Click HERE to read them. If you do not agree to our terms of use, you must exit this site immediately. We do not accept any responsibility for the content, submissions, information or links contained herein. Users posting content here, do so completely at their own risk.

Quick Link to Feedback Forum
Locked
User avatar
d16
Posts: 43
Joined: Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:06 am

Post by d16 » Sun Aug 02, 2009 9:15 pm

rectaldubz wrote:just finished up a track called captivation, i used burial's drum beat from archangel just to tell you now, ANY FEEDBACK would make my day/night thanks:
http://soundcloud.com/rectaldubz
ask for a 320 if you want one
I get a "Oops, looks like we can't find that page!"

This is my 1st ever Dubstep track.
http://soundcloud.com/d16/d16-0167
D16 - 0167
Comments?

dansu
Posts: 31
Joined: Fri Jul 10, 2009 5:29 pm

Post by dansu » Sun Aug 02, 2009 11:11 pm

but you made other kinds of music before?
cuz dis tune is wicked

instand-dl

User avatar
d16
Posts: 43
Joined: Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:06 am

Post by d16 » Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:06 am

Dansu wrote:but you made other kinds of music before?
cuz dis tune is wicked

instand-dl
Hehe, thanks mate.
Yeah, I've made hiphop and hardstyle before.
So I've got the basic already.

User avatar
tripwire22
Posts: 2384
Joined: Wed Mar 25, 2009 11:30 pm
Location: United States
Contact:

Post by tripwire22 » Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:47 am

Ill offer Feedback to anyone who comments on my news songs Heaven and Dub Jungle

User avatar
d16
Posts: 43
Joined: Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:06 am

Post by d16 » Mon Aug 03, 2009 1:02 am

Tripwire22 wrote:Ill offer Feedback to anyone who comments on my news songs Heaven and Dub Jungle
Heaven sounds wicked.
Dub jungle is cool, too.
But the beginning bass sounds a bit.. distorted? dunno.
And you could've probably chosen other toms (Don't really know what they are.)
Now do my track ;D

User avatar
tripwire22
Posts: 2384
Joined: Wed Mar 25, 2009 11:30 pm
Location: United States
Contact:

Post by tripwire22 » Mon Aug 03, 2009 4:00 am

D16 wrote:
Tripwire22 wrote:Ill offer Feedback to anyone who comments on my news songs Heaven and Dub Jungle
Heaven sounds wicked.
Dub jungle is cool, too.
But the beginning bass sounds a bit.. distorted? dunno.
And you could've probably chosen other toms (Don't really know what they are.)
Now do my track ;D
yeah idk what happen to the bass in the beginning and i couldnt fix that but w.e.

your song is actually very professional everything is really together though what are the vocals saying i cant understand them. the bring that beat back drop is intense

User avatar
d16
Posts: 43
Joined: Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:06 am

Post by d16 » Mon Aug 03, 2009 5:54 am

Tripwire22 wrote:
D16 wrote:
Tripwire22 wrote:Ill offer Feedback to anyone who comments on my news songs Heaven and Dub Jungle
Heaven sounds wicked.
Dub jungle is cool, too.
But the beginning bass sounds a bit.. distorted? dunno.
And you could've probably chosen other toms (Don't really know what they are.)
Now do my track ;D
yeah idk what happen to the bass in the beginning and i couldnt fix that but w.e.

your song is actually very professional everything is really together though what are the vocals saying i cant understand them. the bring that beat back drop is intense
Hehe, that's the whole point.
Everytime I listen to it I can hear something diffrent.
It's an vocal sample from Vengeance Cutvox 2.
Thanks for the comment.
Although it feels like the wobble is a bit too obvious.
It really sticks out.
Should've put it a little bit lower in the mix.

dansu
Posts: 31
Joined: Fri Jul 10, 2009 5:29 pm

Post by dansu » Mon Aug 03, 2009 11:26 am

D16 wrote:
Tripwire22 wrote:
D16 wrote:
Tripwire22 wrote:Ill offer Feedback to anyone who comments on my news songs Heaven and Dub Jungle
Heaven sounds wicked.
Dub jungle is cool, too.
But the beginning bass sounds a bit.. distorted? dunno.
And you could've probably chosen other toms (Don't really know what they are.)
Now do my track ;D
yeah idk what happen to the bass in the beginning and i couldnt fix that but w.e.

your song is actually very professional everything is really together though what are the vocals saying i cant understand them. the bring that beat back drop is intense
Although it feels like the wobble is a bit too obvious.
It really sticks out.
Should've put it a little bit lower in the mix.
yeah, the wobble also sounds kind of cheap, compared to the other parts of the song. spice it up or lower it down i would say

User avatar
heidi m.
Posts: 133
Joined: Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:37 pm

Post by heidi m. » Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:29 pm

This just strictly for dubstep? Not even sure what you'd call this but it's the first track i've finished for a while and wanna know if i'm doin' anything right/wrong. ANY feed back would be more than welcome. Peace.

http://soundcloud.com/heidi-m/parrallax-scroller-draft

User avatar
d16
Posts: 43
Joined: Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:06 am

Post by d16 » Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:39 pm

HEiDi M. wrote:This just strictly for dubstep? Not even sure what you'd call this but it's the first track i've finished for a while and wanna know if i'm doin' anything right/wrong. ANY feed back would be more than welcome. Peace.

http://soundcloud.com/heidi-m/parrallax-scroller-draft
It seems to be some sort of... House/dance?
Quite nice tbh!

User avatar
heidi m.
Posts: 133
Joined: Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:37 pm

Post by heidi m. » Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:59 pm

Hehe, Nice one =)

User avatar
aspect-dubz
Posts: 1763
Joined: Sun Aug 02, 2009 4:14 pm
Location: BRISTOL,UK
Contact:

Post by aspect-dubz » Mon Aug 03, 2009 1:33 pm

D16 wrote:
rectaldubz wrote:just finished up a track called captivation, i used burial's drum beat from archangel just to tell you now, ANY FEEDBACK would make my day/night thanks:
http://soundcloud.com/rectaldubz
ask for a 320 if you want one
I get a "Oops, looks like we can't find that page!"

This is my 1st ever Dubstep track.
http://soundcloud.com/d16/d16-0167
D16 - 0167
Comments?
oh yeh whoops i forgot about that i changed profile name therefore having to change my myspace, soundcloud and all that shit heres my new soundcloud in the sig

User avatar
tripwire22
Posts: 2384
Joined: Wed Mar 25, 2009 11:30 pm
Location: United States
Contact:

Post by tripwire22 » Tue Aug 04, 2009 12:45 am

rectaldubz wrote:just finished up a track called captivation, i used burial's drum beat from archangel just to tell you now, ANY FEEDBACK would make my day/night thanks:
http://soundcloud.com/rectaldubz
ask for a 320 if you want one
So i like the track its groovy but i think u need to bring the wooden click sounds in the mix up unlesss thats just my shitty head fones.

I kinda need feed back on my new songs in relation to my old songs cuz i tried making mid range cack sounds on Habits and Bad Intentions and wanna kno if they sound better then my other tracks

Of course ill offer feedback to anyone who responds

www.myspace.com/trpwr

User avatar
aspect-dubz
Posts: 1763
Joined: Sun Aug 02, 2009 4:14 pm
Location: BRISTOL,UK
Contact:

Post by aspect-dubz » Tue Aug 04, 2009 1:30 am

Tripwire22 wrote:
rectaldubz wrote:just finished up a track called captivation, i used burial's drum beat from archangel just to tell you now, ANY FEEDBACK would make my day/night thanks:
http://soundcloud.com/rectaldubz
ask for a 320 if you want one
So i like the track its groovy but i think u need to bring the wooden click sounds in the mix up unlesss thats just my shitty head fones.

I kinda need feed back on my new songs in relation to my old songs cuz i tried making mid range cack sounds on Habits and Bad Intentions and wanna kno if they sound better then my other tracks

Of course ill offer feedback to anyone who responds

www.myspace.com/trpwr
no i understand what you mean now, thanks, i gave two of your tunes a listen i like the one illumination it's got a nice kinda hip hop feel to it which is cool and i also listened to bad intentions, its sounding good but the synth/bass could maybe do with some more punch and you could throw in some high hats or something. :wink:

User avatar
Arshaw
Posts: 239
Joined: Thu Mar 26, 2009 10:04 am
Location: Sheffield, South Yorkshire
Contact:

Post by Arshaw » Tue Aug 04, 2009 5:40 am

hey, can any one give me feedback on my new tune...

work in progress n all that... mix is a bit off

its called Distance,

www.myspace.com/KidKuduro

had to upload to myspace, soundcload limit reached... :?

will give feedback in rtrn, obv 8)

User avatar
jbird22
Posts: 253
Joined: Thu Mar 20, 2008 3:02 pm
Location: North Wales, http://soundcloud.com/the-j-man
Contact:

Post by jbird22 » Tue Aug 04, 2009 1:56 pm

Yo,

Thought i'd post up this new track of mine

"Breaking Skulls"

the tracks got more of a hip hop vibe 2 it rather then dubstep especially with the redman acapella I put on it.

Its up on myspace 1st track. 320's on request (with or without the acapella).

Some feedback would be great.

P.s. make sure u listen 2 it with a sub

Peace!

User avatar
86.
Posts: 2605
Joined: Fri Jun 19, 2009 5:04 pm
Location: Canada

Post by 86. » Tue Aug 04, 2009 4:16 pm

HEiDi M. wrote:This just strictly for dubstep? Not even sure what you'd call this but it's the first track i've finished for a while and wanna know if i'm doin' anything right/wrong. ANY feed back would be more than welcome. Peace.

http://soundcloud.com/heidi-m/parrallax-scroller-draft
good vibes here.

noticeable thing: to me, it doesnt seem like you tried to make a big ass lound tune, super-limiting. that's good. it breathes.

I like the panning you did with the drums.

the wobble, I don't know...could be tuned down slightly....I don't mean like detune, but something other than that. Although it does leave the mix which is nice.


props though! feeling it

User avatar
mg civet
Posts: 12
Joined: Tue Aug 04, 2009 7:31 pm
Location: Finland
Contact:

Post by mg civet » Tue Aug 04, 2009 7:40 pm

New project from Finland!!! MG Civet;
http://www.myspace.com/mgcivet

Every piece of comments are extremely welcome!

User avatar
tripwire22
Posts: 2384
Joined: Wed Mar 25, 2009 11:30 pm
Location: United States
Contact:

Post by tripwire22 » Tue Aug 04, 2009 7:46 pm

MG Civet wrote:New project from Finland!!! MG Civet;
http://www.myspace.com/mgcivet

Every piece of comments are extremely welcome!
The 2 tracks you got are actually really good i dig the electro mixings you have on the tracks

ianfm
Posts: 149
Joined: Wed Mar 25, 2009 3:36 am
Location: Canada
Contact:

Post by ianfm » Wed Aug 05, 2009 1:06 am

Just finished arranging this, what do you guys think?
http://dl-client.getdropbox.com/u/71572 ... la%204.mp3
Stranger Song: Confusing the dance with 2-step post-garage beats.
http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song
http://www.myspace.com/listentothestrangersong

Locked

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 0 guests