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daryo · Post by **daryo** » Sat Aug 08, 2009 8:39 pm

here is a track i finished.
don't think it dubstep, maybe the bassline it's influenced but curious to know what you think
http://www.zshare.net/audio/638242960b3735d1/

michaelvman · Post by **michaelvman** » Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:11 pm

MoRiGaMi wrote:Would be eternally grateful if someone could have a listen and give me some advice on my tune...

http://www.zshare.net/audio/638239803f846bcb/

I'm no engineer for sure, and have crap speakers in all so apologies in advance ^^

Edit: Whoops, this should be in the works in progress section...

No need to apologise tune is really good. Could probably do with a bit more sub and maybe bringing the low end of the snare up a bit.

morigami · Post by **morigami** » Sun Aug 09, 2009 3:45 pm

Cheers man

Came up with a lighter 2nd drop with chords to avoid cut and paste repetition, will post it up later in the right thread later.

naus · Post by **naus** » Sun Aug 09, 2009 3:53 pm

New Tune on myspace ( SKRIBBLE) have a listen... much different to my normal style. Has had a good reaction so far hope you guys enjoy it too!

Let me know what you think.

Thanks

melodik · Post by **melodik** » Sun Aug 09, 2009 6:38 pm

new one up....

www.soundcloud.com/melodik
"Aurousal"

quite a bit layed back....
keen to know what the verdict is.

Bless in advance

karaketarr · Post by **karaketarr** » Mon Aug 10, 2009 11:31 am

Nice tune Melodik, like the theme all the way and the levels sounds nice and done. I just don't dig the guitar thing going on at the intro, it works fine throughout the rest of the track, but I think it sounds a little odd at first.

But hey, in total it's a solid track I like it.

karaketarr · Post by **karaketarr** » Mon Aug 10, 2009 11:41 am

Gizzlor wrote:Hi folks,

just doing my first post in this forum. I know its not very polite to post a Track before giving feedback to others. I Need some time to dig through this topic.

Thanks for checking out my latest tune @ Youtube/Myspace:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CeU6qPo1RKc

Greetings

Heavy track all the way all though the sample is a little noisy in the back unfortunatly. Like the feel of it en general!

naus · Post by **naus** » Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:34 pm

love the tune melodik. Very laid back i like the beats most of all. you have some really nice stuff on your soundcloud.

Biggitupp!

melodik · Post by **melodik** » Mon Aug 10, 2009 2:18 pm

Onetime guys for the feedback!!! always much appreciated!!

@ Naus
got summing coming up soon and if inter-course not gonna be used will hit you up with an 320 for shore!!

thanks again!

witek-osc · Post by **witek-osc** » Mon Aug 10, 2009 3:43 pm

Hi!
I`m new here. I made my first dubstep track, it is a RMX of Ayo Technology.

Check it out--> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IAks68CL ... annel_page

One!

soul/juice · Post by **soul/juice** » Mon Aug 10, 2009 4:03 pm

http://www.myspace.com/souljuiceuk
Would love some feedback on 'body bag' and 'movement', just started out so let me know what you think!!
Cheers
JJ

disonata · Post by **disonata** » Mon Aug 10, 2009 7:50 pm

Melodik wrote:new one up....

www.soundcloud.com/melodik
"Aurousal"

quite a bit layed back....
keen to know what the verdict is.

Bless in advance

really liking the track man, nice sounding synths and the interchanges between them really work in the mix
think you're onto some nice vibes there
the only thing i will say is around 2:25 you got a bit of crackle from the high end of the guitar line, not amazingly noticeable but if its one those things i personally would need to get rid of, probably a mild case of ocd or some shit!
but yeah still liking the track loads man, alot of melody and depth
keep it up

appreciate any comments on my tunes back, probably at the dirtier end of the spectrum but still.

disonata · Post by **disonata** » Mon Aug 10, 2009 7:52 pm

Disonata wrote:

didnt even mean to put one in there, dont know how that happened

karaketarr · Post by **karaketarr** » Mon Aug 10, 2009 8:36 pm

I have 2 tracks I hope you'll have a moment to dwell upon, both unmastered. Lookin forward to reading your thoughts.

Rhodees:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/63926395f855a7dd/

Chinese Soldier:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/639269862d3707bb/

Thanks guys!

defekt · Post by **defekt** » Mon Aug 10, 2009 10:04 pm

Karaketarr wrote:I have 2 tracks I hope you'll have a moment to dwell upon, both unmastered. Lookin forward to reading your thoughts.

Rhodees:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/63926395f855a7dd/

Chinese Soldier:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/639269862d3707bb/

Thanks guys!

Rhodees is strangely compelling, and I love that little synth melody.

Chinese Soldier is really nice as well, really deep.

Edit: Listened to Rhodees again a few times, and I absolutely love it.

melodik · Post by **melodik** » Tue Aug 11, 2009 9:33 am

@ disonata

givethanks for the feedback!!!! will have a look into that crackle...
appreciate you taking the time to listen though!!!!

dont got speakers at work so will most def have a listen when I get home!

karaketarr · Post by **karaketarr** » Tue Aug 11, 2009 9:56 am

Defekt wrote:
Karaketarr wrote:I have 2 tracks I hope you'll have a moment to dwell upon, both unmastered. Lookin forward to reading your thoughts.

Rhodees:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/63926395f855a7dd/

Chinese Soldier:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/639269862d3707bb/

Thanks guys!
Rhodees is strangely compelling, and I love that little synth melody.

Chinese Soldier is really nice as well, really deep.

Edit: Listened to Rhodees again a few times, and I absolutely love it.

Big up for your time defekt, nice someone wants to here the work you done.

defekt · Post by **defekt** » Tue Aug 11, 2009 12:53 pm

Karaketarr wrote:
Defekt wrote:
Karaketarr wrote:I have 2 tracks I hope you'll have a moment to dwell upon, both unmastered. Lookin forward to reading your thoughts.

Rhodees:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/63926395f855a7dd/

Chinese Soldier:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/639269862d3707bb/

Thanks guys!
Rhodees is strangely compelling, and I love that little synth melody.

Chinese Soldier is really nice as well, really deep.

Edit: Listened to Rhodees again a few times, and I absolutely love it.
Big up for your time defekt, nice someone wants to here the work you done.

No worries mate I love it, thanks for the tune, may I ask how you got that synth sound making the melody?

reignstep · Post by **reignstep** » Tue Aug 11, 2009 2:41 pm

Two finished tracks, tell me what you think

Reign - Plan B

Reign - Dub Violin

Soundcloud won't upload my tracks for some odd reason, so NG is a temporarily alternative

melodik · Post by **melodik** » Tue Aug 11, 2009 5:29 pm

@ Disonata

yeah man you got some tuff sounding tings for damn sure!!! tracks are well structured and production is pretty sick aswell!!

got a few ruffer tings on my soundcloud same time ,you should check it out

Onetime

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Just started out, would love some feedback!

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