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digitubz
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Re: no chance -- digitubz

Post by digitubz » Tue Aug 11, 2009 2:53 pm

Thierry_Le_Dj wrote:
digitubz wrote:new song i'm working on

http://www.myspace.com/digitubz
first track on the player


grtz
cool track man,nice drums sound dope with the toms...cool sample, nice wobble bass at 1:53
its good!
your other trax are good too...wobble mania is insane..keep it up.
thanx 4 listening, i'm glad you like it :)

grtz

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Post by digitubz » Tue Aug 11, 2009 3:10 pm

Thierry_Le_Dj wrote:this track is frustrating me see what you think of it any way...
its different to the normal heavy dubstep/kinda electronica as well
called (confused!!)
anyone know how to edit the bass check at 1:20
bad extatic sound

can some one plz help?
this happens in most of my tracks when i use the wobble bass...
how do you make the bass stop when you want another sound come in like a different pattern of bass like a hook or some thing

this track is starting to do my head in...listen at 1:20 where that edited sound come in i tryed chopping it up ,tryed turn the volume down before the next bar come in but its still not working for..

basicly once i have a bass pattern going when i want to add another bass pattern in the bass in how do i make the 1st bass stop with out the extatic sound...i dont know if this is making any sence..

try listen to my tune from 1:15 to 1:25 but the extatic sound is at 1:20

http://www.myspace.com/thierryledj (confused
nice track, cool bassline. the other songs on your myspace also sound good . keep up

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Post by tripwire22 » Tue Aug 11, 2009 3:40 pm

work on a new song let me know what u guys think or what i should take out

http://www.zshare.net/audio/6396912707396c7e/

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cataphract
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Post by cataphract » Tue Aug 11, 2009 5:55 pm

another wobbler in the making :|
this one has a twist though :D

areyougoingtoeatthat.mp3 - 7.37MB 320kbps

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Just started out, would love some feedback!

Post by soul/juice » Tue Aug 11, 2009 5:56 pm

Hey, just wondered f I could get some feedback on a couple of tunes on my mspace!
http://www.myspace.com/souljuiceuk

Two of the three on thre are dubstep, cheers!!

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Post by mistayif » Wed Aug 12, 2009 12:29 pm

pretty much finished but still not really sure about little bits and the overall mixdown. just need a pair of fresh ears really. if anyone can give me some feedback that will be much appreciated. cheers 8)

http://soundcloud.com/mistayif/goodz-on-who-1st-mixdown

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NEW DUBSTEP PRODUCER

Post by fiddaman » Wed Aug 12, 2009 1:27 pm

Hello everyone this is a clip of a dubstep tune i have finished, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=71XRWnLGvY0

Feedback is appreciated.

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Re: NEW DUBSTEP PRODUCER

Post by tripwire22 » Wed Aug 12, 2009 2:01 pm

fiddaman wrote:Hello everyone this is a clip of a dubstep tune i have finished, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=71XRWnLGvY0

Feedback is appreciated.
i really dont have anything bad to say about the song i thought it was pretty good man

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Post by thierry_le_dj » Wed Aug 12, 2009 2:10 pm

digitubz wrote:
Thierry_Le_Dj wrote:this track is frustrating me see what you think of it any way...
its different to the normal heavy dubstep/kinda electronica as well
called (confused!!)
anyone know how to edit the bass check at 1:20
bad extatic sound

can some one plz help?
this happens in most of my tracks when i use the wobble bass...
how do you make the bass stop when you want another sound come in like a different pattern of bass like a hook or some thing

this track is starting to do my head in...listen at 1:20 where that edited sound come in i tryed chopping it up ,tryed turn the volume down before the next bar come in but its still not working for..

basicly once i have a bass pattern going when i want to add another bass pattern in the bass in how do i make the 1st bass stop with out the extatic sound...i dont know if this is making any sence..

try listen to my tune from 1:15 to 1:25 but the extatic sound is at 1:20

http://www.myspace.com/thierryledj (confused
nice track, cool bassline. the other songs on your myspace also sound good . keep up
thanks for checking it!

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Post by thierry_le_dj » Wed Aug 12, 2009 2:10 pm

thanks..

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Post by relik » Wed Aug 12, 2009 2:37 pm

did this as a joke, but i kind of like where it went. not mixed yet. newboyz jerk remix with some other pop samples.

http://67.227.159.167/~undergro/reliks/ ... mojerk.mp3

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Post by fiddaman » Wed Aug 12, 2009 2:54 pm

fiddaman wrote:
Hello everyone this is a clip of a dubstep tune i have finished, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=71XRWnLGvY0

Feedback is appreciated.


i really dont have anything bad to say about the song i thought it was pretty good man


Thanks alot man.

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Post by gorbek » Thu Aug 13, 2009 2:38 pm

Hey I stayed up all night working on this bass sound... I'm really struggling to get bass I like, i like this sound but I wonder if i'm just submitting to myself after putting in so many hours..

Maybe you guys can give me some feedback on the bass in this clip

Its not refined at all so theres a crappy intro and a gap between the intro and the main loop

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?ymqiuzz2lnl
Word -

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Post by knobgoblin » Thu Aug 13, 2009 10:01 pm

@Gorbek: Bass sound is nice, now you just need to start tweaking it for variations. Filter tweaks and glitch fx would work well with this I think. More varied drum sounds and synth/atmosphere work would go a long way.

@Fiddaman: There's nothing bad about your track, but nothing unique about it either. Pretty standard sounds and ideas. It just follows the conventions of dubstep too closely for what I'm into at the moment, just my .02. Its hard to tell thru youtubes compression, but it sounds fairly clean and punchy, if a little on the quite side. But you need some space and atmosphere in the mix.

@Killall: Really digging the organ and drums. The bass is pretty heavy and scrapes nicely. But the drums and atmosphere really make this track for me. Awesome tune!

I've got a new one up on my virb page called "Culture is Your OS". Its about 70-80% done. Still need to do more bass and synth variations and tweaks to drive it along. I've really been trying to break out of the standard "dubstep" sound. I wish more people were doing stuff at different tempo's so that this would be able to fit into a set...

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Post by abs » Thu Aug 13, 2009 10:44 pm

http://soundcloud.com/r-i-f-f-s/riffs-hotel

I made this today, not sure where to take it though, ANY FEEDBACK OR IDEAS?

*edit, fuck me the claps n that sound quiet

*edit again, my headphones were twatted, what does it sound like production-wsie on your speakers??

psymson
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Please check out work in progress for first tune

Post by psymson » Fri Aug 14, 2009 12:29 am

Hi

I started working on a track a while back
keen to get back into it again, please any comments would be
greatly appriciated

http://www.darkaudio.co.uk/index.php?ar ... d=943&sg=5&

(andy simpson - prefered state)

thanks for listening

(apologies to those who pointed out that this post was originally in the wrong topic - this is my first post and i hit "new topic" rather than "post reply")

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Post by ledew drugis » Fri Aug 14, 2009 5:01 am

tristram remix by me (Drugis)

not finished.

90 bpm, mashup of the tune from the village in diablo1.

www.soundcloud.com/drugis
Copenhagen MASSIVE!

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Post by trypto » Fri Aug 14, 2009 5:35 am

Work in progress.

Not dub... but influenced.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/64095952f0e1025c/

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Post by psymson » Fri Aug 14, 2009 8:12 am

ABS - nice tune, like it, especially the sound that comes in first time at 48s. if anything, would say the clap needs fattening up, not nes too much louder, maybe some layering or a touch of distortion to thicken the sound. really nice laid back vibe though.

Trypto - again, nice vibe, let down by the snare in my humble opinion. quite like the sound, just doesn't cut it as is. don't get me wrong it sounds ok, but i think it would make the whole thing more powerfull with a weightyer (if thats a word) snare emement. maybe layer with another sound to thicken up the timbre or dirty it up a bit.

both tunes really good though just minor constructice points.
:P

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