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paravrais
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Post by paravrais » Tue Aug 25, 2009 8:56 pm

Yo, has been ages since I've been on here but I'm back with a new tune now. I've upgraded my setup quite a bit since last time I posted and am now using Record rather than reason3 so hopefully there'll be more clarity now!

Enough smalltalk heres the link: http://virb.com/sativabreather

Tracks called "Night Cave", shit name but ah well.

Karmacazee I'm liking your track! Everythings sounding really fresh and crisp. The second drop is prime what more can I say?

EDIT: and he forgets the link...smooth..

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Post by wrongky » Tue Aug 25, 2009 9:58 pm

Yo, this is my first ever 'finished' track so any feedback would be cool :). I'll gladly return the favour.

Safe

http://soundcloud.com/wrongky

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Post by corpu5 » Tue Aug 25, 2009 11:39 pm

Wrongky wrote:Yo, this is my first ever 'finished' track so any feedback would be cool :). I'll gladly return the favour.

Safe

http://soundcloud.com/wrongky
ahhh mate that is some proper filthy stuff, im liking it....really took me by surprise
, intro sent me into a lul of saftey then BANG BURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR BREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEUUUWWWWW
how many times did you resample your bassline before you got it the way it is now?
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Post by mjbourne » Wed Aug 26, 2009 12:59 am

ez up all!

i just finished my first sort of dubsteppy tune, wouldn't mind some feedback. i'm pretty new to the game so let me know on any tips u may have.

cheers all.

myspace.com/forenzamusic track is called dr who clubstep remix

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Post by wrongky » Wed Aug 26, 2009 12:45 pm

Yo Corpus, cheers for the feedback man! Will check your tunes but I'm having issues with getting on the new server at work so just a quick 1 for now.

Basically it's just a synth made in Albino with 4 oscilators and then I added some distortion and shit to it in Logic. Fucked around with it for quite a while but eventually got the filthy noise I was looking for :p

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Post by tripaddict » Wed Aug 26, 2009 2:48 pm

i never saw this thread :o :D

but if anyone has time please check the top audio in my player im trying to master it atm any suggestions greatly appreciated :)

safe
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Post by wrongky » Wed Aug 26, 2009 4:50 pm

Digging your tune Corpus, love the vocal samples you used, that's some dark shit! :)

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Re: Timelapse - Expired (existence without a purpose)

Post by trike12 » Wed Aug 26, 2009 8:22 pm

timelapse wrote:Easy guys... Been producing for a number of years and finished a dubstep track the other day. I thought i'd come seek some thoughts and opinions.

Its a deep, dark, abstract number. Deep subs and sexy pads.

just uploaded it to my myspace - first track, top of the list

Timelapse - Expired (existence without a purpose)

http://www.myspace.com/soundlanguage[/url]
Thats a good tune mate, overall good. Missing some variation in the drums and some more buildups. feeling the simple good melodic drop and the didgeridoo like, ambient sounds.


Heres a new tune ive done

"Layback"

www.soundcloud.com/triky12
www.myspace.com/triky12

320's
www.mediafire.com/triky12

would like to know it if you download any tunes :)

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Post by dav.id » Wed Aug 26, 2009 11:48 pm

hey people, just finished this track today, my goal was to make is very dynamic and robotic, I used massive to create all the basslines, I splitted the bassline in three layers so I could give it alot more variation

It has a very robotic rolling sound to it, my inspiration for this track was Excision, Datsik - Boom

you can download it here:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/64702634c0baa711/

320 kb/s

I'm looking forward to here some feedback

If my english is fucked up it is because I'm dutch :D, so sorry for that hehe

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Post by oncore » Wed Aug 26, 2009 11:59 pm

Safe, i've got enough new tunes on my myspace, the first 2 tracks are DIRTY, the 3rd and 4th are CHILLED, please check out my beats, its worth the time, i'll maybe swing out some 320's if people are feeling it.

GET SKANKING!

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Post by therapist » Thu Aug 27, 2009 2:23 am

I gave Wrongky and Oncore's a listen. That's some mad space-station sounding conversation stuff at the beginning of your track wrongky (though I just couldn't get it out of my head that it's the same chord progression as a blink 182 song.) Really do like that bass sound, the drop is all good i'd just have thought it should go somewhere else. Not to sound harsh but if people want to hear the track twice then they can, Something should change in that structure.

Oncore, not feeling stomper but I really liked 'bump' and chillin.' The reverb noises before the drop go a bit crazily loud though. Almost noisia sounding bass on the drop though, like it.

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Post by -pariah- » Thu Aug 27, 2009 2:39 am

like the idea of this thread. like darkmatter said, you could be overlistening to a track you are making and sometimes it loses all meaning. so feedback is always good. anyway im just new to the forum but here is a new track for any one who would like a listen. be as critical as you want, i will only take it as constructive.

http://www.carbonlogic.co.uk/artist/pariah/fiend

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Post by wrongky » Thu Aug 27, 2009 11:34 am

Therapist wrote:I gave Wrongky and Oncore's a listen. That's some mad space-station sounding conversation stuff at the beginning of your track wrongky (though I just couldn't get it out of my head that it's the same chord progression as a blink 182 song.) Really do like that bass sound, the drop is all good i'd just have thought it should go somewhere else. Not to sound harsh but if people want to hear the track twice then they can, Something should change in that structure.
Cheers for the feedback man. Shit you got me worried about that intro now, definitely not wanting to sound like Blink! :p Haha, but yeah I hear what you're saying about the track going somewhere, I'm still working on it with another mate of mine so hopefully will have a newer version up soon!

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Post by oncore » Thu Aug 27, 2009 12:12 pm

well thanks for the feedback, my tunes aren't properly mixed down or finished, production wise, i bounced them for maximum volume on myspace, not for good dynamic range at all . . .
check out my other tunes at...

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Post by scp » Thu Aug 27, 2009 4:01 pm

Wrongky wrote:Yo, this is my first ever 'finished' track so any feedback would be cool :). I'll gladly return the favour.

Safe

http://soundcloud.com/wrongky
even with reading the comments below your original post, i wasn't really prepared 4 such a nasty bassline, its a 'mad ting' lol. nice job
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Post by wrongky » Thu Aug 27, 2009 5:13 pm

SCP wrote:even with reading the comments below your original post, i wasn't really prepared 4 such a nasty bassline, its a 'mad ting' lol. nice job
Haha cheers man, more on the way. Checked out your tracks too man, loving Standard Procedure, the beat is sick!

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Post by kingthing » Thu Aug 27, 2009 7:33 pm

got a few new tunes up on my soundcloud if oyu fancy having a listen, not really dubstep though

will be more up in the next couple of days

http://soundcloud.com/kingthing
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My latest track - "BrainScraper" Feedback plss?

Post by nikmti » Fri Aug 28, 2009 7:27 am

This is my second dubstep tune representing 2 days of work in FL studio. Let me know what you guys think!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zGPHIcYZTTE

www.myspace.com/nickhudspeth


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Re: Something a little chilled for you this time

Post by sub7 » Fri Aug 28, 2009 3:00 pm

Eops wrote:UK FUNKY meets DEEP HOUSE meets DubStep

http://soundcloud.com/eops/after-the-dance_320

Feedback welcome - here's to the weekend!

Enjoy

Eops

Deep house vibes indeed. I dug it, not necessarily my cup of tea, although it's got lots of soul. The piano around 4:20 or so I would probably drop that a db or 2....

Really good structure and I feel it does exactly what you wanted it to with the deep house vibe.

Big up eops
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