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Naw man its perfectly fineSTINJEE wrote:@ saint,
il be honest mate it all sounds a bit dry, need to get some effects on there man, reverb 4 sure, it also sounds muddy and quiet,
sorry to be harsh man thats just what i hear,
@ benh
Defo one fer the ladies, i like the bit near the end betta (around 4.20 mins) if u droped the keys here i reckon it would sound betta, sound a bit too much like pop music 4 my taste, but its well produced and still a good tune and id be proud of it.
@panick
big tune straight out man, nothing else to say props man,
got a beat iv bin working on 4 a bit, any comments will be well appreciated
its in the sig and its called "what i cant do"
SAAAFFFEEE
thats what feedback is supposed to be right?
ways to make your shit work better,so i appreciate it.
Just finsihed up these two:
http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/not-her-anyway
Think the beat's fun in this one.
http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/abs ... r-song-dub
I tried really hard to make this danceable too, but I don't think I managed.
http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/not-her-anyway
Think the beat's fun in this one.
http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/abs ... r-song-dub
I tried really hard to make this danceable too, but I don't think I managed.
Stranger Song: Confusing the dance with 2-step post-garage beats.
http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song
http://www.myspace.com/listentothestrangersong
http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song
http://www.myspace.com/listentothestrangersong
STINJEE wrote:@ saint,
il be honest mate it all sounds a bit dry, need to get some effects on there man, reverb 4 sure, it also sounds muddy and quiet,
sorry to be harsh man thats just what i hear,
@ benh
Defo one fer the ladies, i like the bit near the end betta (around 4.20 mins) if u droped the keys here i reckon it would sound betta, sound a bit too much like pop music 4 my taste, but its well produced and still a good tune and id be proud of it.
@panick
big tune straight out man, nothing else to say props man,
got a beat iv bin working on 4 a bit, any comments will be well appreciated
its in the sig and its called "what i cant do"
SAAAFFFEEE
come on man, how do you guys expect to get feedback when u dont feedback anyone else,
i once read there was an unwritten rule that if u want some feedback on a tune you have to feedback at least 3 others before, that way everybody gets what they want.
ok rant over

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Re: NEW TUNE WITH SUSPECT - GAME OVER
BIG TUNE BRO. LOVING THE BASS YOU GOT GOING THERE.. AND THAT BREAK.. MASSIVE. BIG RESPECT AND KEEP BANGING OUT TUNESPANICK wrote:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1oZaKwX85fI
LET US KNOW WHAT YOU THINK? THIS TUNE IS SET TO BE BIG

I just finisched listening to them both, I like the first one more because it have a sort of hypnotic feel to it wich I like, but I think it needs more work on it, it sounds a bit to empty. The intro is to simple and repetitive for my liking, I think some high strings or some wierd noises would do the intro good.IanFM wrote:Just finsihed up these two:
http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/not-her-anyway
Think the beat's fun in this one.
http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/abs ... r-song-dub
I tried really hard to make this danceable too, but I don't think I managed.
on the second I had the feeling that I was listening to a very long intro, there is not a obvious start of the track, it just blends in if you know what I mean. but your sound is pretty good it all sounds pretty spaceious

sorry for english btw
succes!
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Re: NEW TUNE WITH SUSPECT - GAME OVER
agreed, big tune! that gettin a release?azzaprodukshunzz wrote:BIG TUNE BRO. LOVING THE BASS YOU GOT GOING THERE.. AND THAT BREAK.. MASSIVE. BIG RESPECT AND KEEP BANGING OUT TUNESPANICK wrote:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1oZaKwX85fI
LET US KNOW WHAT YOU THINK? THIS TUNE IS SET TO BE BIG
Really liking these. Great to hear more songs that actually have a tune, not just one note wobbling around like a bitch. I do think the mixes are really tight and can't fault the actual tunes but some of the sounds I think could just be a bit more developed. Maybe look at the leads and wonder if you'd recognise those sounds as your sounds. Was a lot of this played in freehand? There are little bits that sound a bit out. This is me being harsh here, 'cause I really do dig this.
Hat/Clap sounds don't do the tune justice, they've been rinsed basically and I'd say stick with the clicky vibe (just bang basic woodhit on and distort it, on the snare hits?) and the strings similarly, nice patterns but just come out a bit blocky (evnelopes / note lengths) but otherwise like it.IanFM wrote:http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/abs ... r-song-dub
I tried really hard to make this danceable too, but I don't think I managed.
This tune seems to stagger about a bit, if that makes any sense. It's not completely got the deep vibe going on but is it a dancer? It's well put together but I think it needs some other kind of hook to the quoted title.STINJEE wrote:
come on man, how do you guys expect to get feedback when u dont feedback anyone else,
i once read there was an unwritten rule that if u want some feedback on a tune you have to feedback at least 3 others before, that way everybody gets what they want.
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@theshadow
Like the tune man, its creepy as fuck, but love the spitfire samples
. Bass is a little too strong in the mix, turn it down a bit and the percs wont be hidden as much. Maybe a little more variation on the percussion, perhaps some reverb at the high end, but generally a nice tune.
@rapsag
Like the glitch hop feel to the tune, but bear in mind this is a dubstep forum, not sure everyone will be feelin the vibes
. Bit repetitive as well, some little snare offbeats would go down a treat at random intervals. Might wanna curb that build off a bit 2/3 of the way through the tune, its a bit much in the mix. Nice vibes though 
Here's a tune I have just finished, bit heavier than my usual, but would love to see what people think. Feedback is always welcome
http://soundcloud.com/altimeter/big-3
Like the tune man, its creepy as fuck, but love the spitfire samples

@rapsag
Like the glitch hop feel to the tune, but bear in mind this is a dubstep forum, not sure everyone will be feelin the vibes


Here's a tune I have just finished, bit heavier than my usual, but would love to see what people think. Feedback is always welcome

http://soundcloud.com/altimeter/big-3
http://soundcloud.com/altimeter
Man im just about the bitches and bling, otherwise i'd be following my real passion... Extreme Crochet
Man im just about the bitches and bling, otherwise i'd be following my real passion... Extreme Crochet
Re: NEW TUNE WITH SUSPECT - GAME OVER
sick tune!Kwun-tings wrote:agreed, big tune! that gettin a release?azzaprodukshunzz wrote:BIG TUNE BRO. LOVING THE BASS YOU GOT GOING THERE.. AND THAT BREAK.. MASSIVE. BIG RESPECT AND KEEP BANGING OUT TUNESPANICK wrote:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1oZaKwX85fI
LET US KNOW WHAT YOU THINK? THIS TUNE IS SET TO BE BIG
new on here but been lurkin about for a bit, any feedback would be sick

www.myspace.com/rosiedubstep - Flatliner & Talk To Kevin
I like the intro on the first one, really nice. Whats the piano bit from? Both are really nice mate, proper chilled stuff!IanFM wrote:Just finsihed up these two:
http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/not-her-anyway
Think the beat's fun in this one.
http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/abs ... r-song-dub
I tried really hard to make this danceable too, but I don't think I managed.
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i like this man, would like to hear it when its mastered. Like the little eerie motif, real nice bass sound toojjbutler88 wrote:
Here's a tune I have just finished, bit heavier than my usual, but would love to see what people think. Feedback is always welcome
http://soundcloud.com/altimeter/big-3
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Yeah there's something not quite right with the bassThe Shadow wrote:@jjbutler88- Cheers for the feedback, helpful, and im glad u liked it![]()
Heard yours as well liked it. Thought u could have made that bass a bit fuller... it just felt a bit thin. But I liked the feeling of space in the song.


http://soundcloud.com/altimeter
Man im just about the bitches and bling, otherwise i'd be following my real passion... Extreme Crochet
Man im just about the bitches and bling, otherwise i'd be following my real passion... Extreme Crochet
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Thanks man, will post it in the dubs section when it's done, of course free 320's will be available from my soundcloudRedCode wrote:i like this man, would like to hear it when its mastered. Like the little eerie motif, real nice bass sound toojjbutler88 wrote:
Here's a tune I have just finished, bit heavier than my usual, but would love to see what people think. Feedback is always welcome
http://soundcloud.com/altimeter/big-3

http://soundcloud.com/altimeter
Man im just about the bitches and bling, otherwise i'd be following my real passion... Extreme Crochet
Man im just about the bitches and bling, otherwise i'd be following my real passion... Extreme Crochet
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Just a little remix I did..
Hey here's a remix I finished up..
http://www.mediafire.com/file/zdg45timmyi/Amerie - One Thing [DJ 2slo's Quick Fix Remix].mp3
http://www.mediafire.com/file/zdg45timmyi/Amerie - One Thing [DJ 2slo's Quick Fix Remix].mp3
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