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deepend
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Post by deepend » Wed Sep 02, 2009 12:26 am

MUSIC: http://soundcloud.com/lasvain
AIM: las.vainionpaa[at]gmail.com
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Post by saint.z » Wed Sep 02, 2009 12:34 am

STINJEE wrote:@ saint,

il be honest mate it all sounds a bit dry, need to get some effects on there man, reverb 4 sure, it also sounds muddy and quiet,
sorry to be harsh man thats just what i hear,

@ benh

Defo one fer the ladies, i like the bit near the end betta (around 4.20 mins) if u droped the keys here i reckon it would sound betta, sound a bit too much like pop music 4 my taste, but its well produced and still a good tune and id be proud of it.

@panick
big tune straight out man, nothing else to say props man,




got a beat iv bin working on 4 a bit, any comments will be well appreciated

its in the sig and its called "what i cant do"

SAAAFFFEEE
Naw man its perfectly fine
thats what feedback is supposed to be right?
ways to make your shit work better,so i appreciate it.

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Post by sun_ck » Wed Sep 02, 2009 8:11 am

http://www.sendspace.com/file/infsfz

Let me know what you think! =)
preview of finished track )

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Post by ianfm » Wed Sep 02, 2009 9:18 am

Just finsihed up these two:

http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/not-her-anyway
Think the beat's fun in this one.

http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/abs ... r-song-dub
I tried really hard to make this danceable too, but I don't think I managed.
Stranger Song: Confusing the dance with 2-step post-garage beats.
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Post by stinjee » Wed Sep 02, 2009 9:23 am

STINJEE wrote:@ saint,

il be honest mate it all sounds a bit dry, need to get some effects on there man, reverb 4 sure, it also sounds muddy and quiet,
sorry to be harsh man thats just what i hear,

@ benh

Defo one fer the ladies, i like the bit near the end betta (around 4.20 mins) if u droped the keys here i reckon it would sound betta, sound a bit too much like pop music 4 my taste, but its well produced and still a good tune and id be proud of it.

@panick
big tune straight out man, nothing else to say props man,




got a beat iv bin working on 4 a bit, any comments will be well appreciated

its in the sig and its called "what i cant do"

SAAAFFFEEE



come on man, how do you guys expect to get feedback when u dont feedback anyone else,

i once read there was an unwritten rule that if u want some feedback on a tune you have to feedback at least 3 others before, that way everybody gets what they want.


ok rant over :o

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Re: NEW TUNE WITH SUSPECT - GAME OVER

Post by azzaprodukshunzz » Wed Sep 02, 2009 10:42 am

PANICK wrote:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1oZaKwX85fI

:D LET US KNOW WHAT YOU THINK? THIS TUNE IS SET TO BE BIG :wink:
BIG TUNE BRO. LOVING THE BASS YOU GOT GOING THERE.. AND THAT BREAK.. MASSIVE. BIG RESPECT AND KEEP BANGING OUT TUNES :lol:

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Post by dav.id » Wed Sep 02, 2009 10:59 am

IanFM wrote:Just finsihed up these two:

http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/not-her-anyway
Think the beat's fun in this one.

http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/abs ... r-song-dub
I tried really hard to make this danceable too, but I don't think I managed.
I just finisched listening to them both, I like the first one more because it have a sort of hypnotic feel to it wich I like, but I think it needs more work on it, it sounds a bit to empty. The intro is to simple and repetitive for my liking, I think some high strings or some wierd noises would do the intro good.

on the second I had the feeling that I was listening to a very long intro, there is not a obvious start of the track, it just blends in if you know what I mean. but your sound is pretty good it all sounds pretty spaceious :D

sorry for english btw

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Re: NEW TUNE WITH SUSPECT - GAME OVER

Post by kwun-tings » Wed Sep 02, 2009 11:58 am

azzaprodukshunzz wrote:
PANICK wrote:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1oZaKwX85fI

:D LET US KNOW WHAT YOU THINK? THIS TUNE IS SET TO BE BIG :wink:
BIG TUNE BRO. LOVING THE BASS YOU GOT GOING THERE.. AND THAT BREAK.. MASSIVE. BIG RESPECT AND KEEP BANGING OUT TUNES :lol:
agreed, big tune! that gettin a release?

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Post by therapist » Wed Sep 02, 2009 1:00 pm

DEEPEND wrote:new track added

BLOX

http://www.myspace.com/deependstepmusic
Really liking these. Great to hear more songs that actually have a tune, not just one note wobbling around like a bitch. I do think the mixes are really tight and can't fault the actual tunes but some of the sounds I think could just be a bit more developed. Maybe look at the leads and wonder if you'd recognise those sounds as your sounds. Was a lot of this played in freehand? There are little bits that sound a bit out. This is me being harsh here, 'cause I really do dig this.
IanFM wrote:http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/abs ... r-song-dub
I tried really hard to make this danceable too, but I don't think I managed.
Hat/Clap sounds don't do the tune justice, they've been rinsed basically and I'd say stick with the clicky vibe (just bang basic woodhit on and distort it, on the snare hits?) and the strings similarly, nice patterns but just come out a bit blocky (evnelopes / note lengths) but otherwise like it.
STINJEE wrote:
come on man, how do you guys expect to get feedback when u dont feedback anyone else,

i once read there was an unwritten rule that if u want some feedback on a tune you have to feedback at least 3 others before, that way everybody gets what they want.
This tune seems to stagger about a bit, if that makes any sense. It's not completely got the deep vibe going on but is it a dancer? It's well put together but I think it needs some other kind of hook to the quoted title.

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Post by the shadow » Wed Sep 02, 2009 4:42 pm

Just uploaded my first tune :o on the soundcloud profile. Link is below feedback would be good.

Think it may be too slow. But I like the chaotic overpowering vibe of it.

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Post by jjbutler88 » Wed Sep 02, 2009 9:38 pm

@theshadow
Like the tune man, its creepy as fuck, but love the spitfire samples :). Bass is a little too strong in the mix, turn it down a bit and the percs wont be hidden as much. Maybe a little more variation on the percussion, perhaps some reverb at the high end, but generally a nice tune.

@rapsag
Like the glitch hop feel to the tune, but bear in mind this is a dubstep forum, not sure everyone will be feelin the vibes :). Bit repetitive as well, some little snare offbeats would go down a treat at random intervals. Might wanna curb that build off a bit 2/3 of the way through the tune, its a bit much in the mix. Nice vibes though :)


Here's a tune I have just finished, bit heavier than my usual, but would love to see what people think. Feedback is always welcome :)

http://soundcloud.com/altimeter/big-3
http://soundcloud.com/altimeter

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Re: NEW TUNE WITH SUSPECT - GAME OVER

Post by redcode » Wed Sep 02, 2009 10:02 pm

Kwun-tings wrote:
azzaprodukshunzz wrote:
PANICK wrote:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1oZaKwX85fI

:D LET US KNOW WHAT YOU THINK? THIS TUNE IS SET TO BE BIG :wink:
BIG TUNE BRO. LOVING THE BASS YOU GOT GOING THERE.. AND THAT BREAK.. MASSIVE. BIG RESPECT AND KEEP BANGING OUT TUNES :lol:
agreed, big tune! that gettin a release?
sick tune!

new on here but been lurkin about for a bit, any feedback would be sick :)

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Post by redcode » Wed Sep 02, 2009 10:06 pm

IanFM wrote:Just finsihed up these two:

http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/not-her-anyway
Think the beat's fun in this one.

http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/abs ... r-song-dub
I tried really hard to make this danceable too, but I don't think I managed.
I like the intro on the first one, really nice. Whats the piano bit from? Both are really nice mate, proper chilled stuff!

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Post by the shadow » Wed Sep 02, 2009 10:09 pm

@jjbutler88- Cheers for the feedback, helpful, and im glad u liked it :D

Heard yours as well liked it. Thought u could have made that bass a bit fuller... it just felt a bit thin. But I liked the feeling of space in the song.

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Post by redcode » Wed Sep 02, 2009 10:09 pm

jjbutler88 wrote:
Here's a tune I have just finished, bit heavier than my usual, but would love to see what people think. Feedback is always welcome :)

http://soundcloud.com/altimeter/big-3
i like this man, would like to hear it when its mastered. Like the little eerie motif, real nice bass sound too

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Post by jjbutler88 » Wed Sep 02, 2009 10:11 pm

The Shadow wrote:@jjbutler88- Cheers for the feedback, helpful, and im glad u liked it :D

Heard yours as well liked it. Thought u could have made that bass a bit fuller... it just felt a bit thin. But I liked the feeling of space in the song.
Yeah there's something not quite right with the bass :). Am getting on it though. Cheers for the feedback 8)
http://soundcloud.com/altimeter

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Post by jjbutler88 » Wed Sep 02, 2009 10:11 pm

RedCode wrote:
jjbutler88 wrote:
Here's a tune I have just finished, bit heavier than my usual, but would love to see what people think. Feedback is always welcome :)

http://soundcloud.com/altimeter/big-3
i like this man, would like to hear it when its mastered. Like the little eerie motif, real nice bass sound too
Thanks man, will post it in the dubs section when it's done, of course free 320's will be available from my soundcloud :)
http://soundcloud.com/altimeter

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Post by the shadow » Wed Sep 02, 2009 10:26 pm

@ STINJEE

That is a big tune!!! liking it just thought the sample 'dont ever tell me what i cant do' got a bit tired as the track went on. If you just had something else to change it up a bit it would give the track alot more life. But good tune anyway. :)

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Just a little remix I did..

Post by dj2slo » Wed Sep 02, 2009 11:34 pm

Hey here's a remix I finished up..

http://www.mediafire.com/file/zdg45timmyi/Amerie - One Thing [DJ 2slo's Quick Fix Remix].mp3

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