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d-con · Post by **d-con** » Fri Sep 04, 2009 10:13 am

rooz wrote:
D-Con wrote:I usually make other styles but I have started working together with some dubstep heads on a couple of things. It has inspired me and in the meantime i just finished this dubstep tune i did solo.

http://soundcloud.com/d-con/d-con-wheres-the-bass
Love it.

thanks

The Shadow wrote:@ D-con
Like the track, the contrasting wobbles work well together and intertwine to make a good tune. Smile

Have u heard mine? on the link below-seeking some feedback also.

Thanks for the f/back. Onto yours : I like the darkness and those machine type beats. It sounds like an intro all the way through though. I was expecting some beats to drop around the 1 min mark with the bass. I'm not sure if its just the drums mixed really low but i can't hear a kick drum for example. Maybe get some bass sounds in there to switch back & forth with as well as something different in the tune so its not all the same, keep the machine drums but put some more percussion in and mix them higher in the tune. I like the vibe of it, but it needs to go somewhere and have a lot more variation for me

aspect-dubz · Post by **aspect-dubz** » Fri Sep 04, 2009 6:59 pm

finished up a track the other day, would love to know what you lovely peeps think

, the tune is in my soundcloud located in my sig and is the top one in the player, thanks

disonata · Post by **disonata** » Fri Sep 04, 2009 10:09 pm

SAINT.Z wrote:
Disonata wrote:just dropping by to try and grab some feedback from my newest tune
really appreciate it if you could give it a listen and leave any comments

http://www.soundcloud.com/disonata

also, i havent yet realised how to render a 320 from reason, any particular way to do this?
i just export at the standard way its preset to do
Game Over-
Dirty dirty bass
maybe change the beginning of the second half up just a bit besides just the reso and filter on the bass?
Keep the modulations though)
Overall filthy tune.

Own the zone(Dirty Refix)-
No complaints at all
GREAT.

Own the zone-
Skream comes to mind
i also hear a bit of rusko influence
maybe thats just me
Nicely arranged.

Miskreants-
I dont even know what to say
fucking amazing

We do not fear-
i think i just shit my pants
GRIMEY
that bass is nice on some amps for sure

i hope i gave you the kind of feedback you were looking for
Ill be watching out for more tracks from you.
-Saint

cheers man, i appreciate the time you took to give my stuff a listen and some feedback
and even more that you like my tunes!
and now ive sorted out how to convert into 320's if anyone wants any ill be happy to sling em your way!

BIG UP!

thierry_le_dj · Post by **thierry_le_dj** » Fri Sep 04, 2009 10:10 pm

Feeling it!
http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj
electronica/dubstep...
plz check see what you think.

knobgoblin · Post by **knobgoblin** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 12:21 am

@theshadow: I really like the track on your soundcloud. It sounds like you are trying to do your own sound more than replicating someone elses, which is refreshing. Im listening on crap headphones, so I cant say too much about the production quality but it sounds like the mix is pretty decent, sharp and weighty. Could use some more variations in the string part, as well as with the drums. Maybe not variations for the drums but parts where other less typical drum sounds interrupt the pattern before going back into it.

@disonata: Game Over is a heavy grimey track! Really like the synth work. The Mix is nice, but the one complaint I have is that it would be even heavier with more dynamic range. This seems to be the case with most of your tracks. Don't know if you've had a chance to hear your tracks much on a big system yet (i would assume you have, as these tracks are huge) but if you get the chance you should try playing out versions of these tracks that don't push the limiter very much and see the difference when level matched.

@VulvaVibrations: Track is sounding pretty good. It could use more drum variations and sounds. I also think this track would benefit greatly from more atmosphere and space. The horn part is nice, but it could use more things like that. Also try throwing in some other bass sounds/stabs to break up the wobbletron and act like accents or to delineate a section changing. Production sounds pretty good, but as I said above, I'm listening on crap headphones in a coffee shop.

My track is here:
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/518773/02%20 ... 0Final.mp3
as well as on my virb and myspace
I finally finished my track called Shedding Moon. Its really atmospheric and minimal, and I think the experimentation has been successful in terms of finding my own "sound". Drums dont come in till about 1:30 and bass not till 2:30. I'm still debating if I should clean up the sub on the basses or leave them as raw and hard as they are.

dub-z · Post by **dub-z** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 4:45 am

check it out

http://www.facebook.com/video/video.php?v=1242076531981

saint.z · Post by **saint.z** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 6:31 am

Any feed back would be appreciated good or bad.
http://soundcloud.com/saintzachy/bit-creep-by-saint

dansu · Post by **dansu** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 2:38 pm

@saintz: wobble is good, arrangement not.

put a lil work on that, and the tune will be rockin

heres another tune of mine
http://soundcloud.com/dansu/kot-red

have a look at it pls

psy:am · Post by **psy:am** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:24 pm

Thierry_Le_Dj wrote:Feeling it!
http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj
electronica/dubstep...
plz check see what you think.

Loved the bass in feeling it i think the sound is warm and whole, maybe reduce the mid frequencies at some points and a bit more variation.

I just feel that your intro and 2nd section dont fit into the overall vibe of the tune and just dont seem a part of the main tune. The 2nd synth is too trancey for my liking and i think maybe a pad may be more appropriate.

Overall, a track with potential just a coupel of things to be changed, imo.

Check out my tracks 'London's Broken' and 'Down the Rabbit Hole', appreciate all feedback!

www.soundcloud.com/psy-am

dav.id · Post by **dav.id** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:27 pm

Dansu wrote:@saintz: wobble is good, arrangement not.

put a lil work on that, and the tune will be rockin

heres another tune of mine
http://soundcloud.com/dansu/kot-red

have a look at it pls

hmm It's still very plain, the wobble sounds oke nothing special....I think you need to work on your drums/percussion variations

psy:am · Post by **psy:am** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:30 pm

SAINT.Z wrote:Any feed back would be appreciated good or bad.
http://soundcloud.com/saintzachy/bit-creep-by-saint

I think the high pitched noise sound needs to be eq'd because at the moment its very sharp. I also agree that you deffo need more variation with your drums.

Arrangment will also spice up the tune more.

psy:am · Post by **psy:am** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:53 pm

KnobGoblin wrote:
My track is here:
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/518773/02%20 ... 0Final.mp3
as well as on my virb and myspace
I finally finished my track called Shedding Moon. Its really atmospheric and minimal, and I think the experimentation has been successful in terms of finding my own "sound". Drums dont come in till about 1:30 and bass not till 2:30. I'm still debating if I should clean up the sub on the basses or leave them as raw and hard as they are.

The track progresses really nicely and by the time the drums kick in it sslowly built up. I think you could clean up the sub on the basses, because youve got a lot of raw sharp sounds so it would be a nice contrast. Nice track!

Any feedback on 'London's Broken' and 'Down the Rabbit Hole' would be appreciated

www.soundcloud.com/psy-am

psy:am · Post by **psy:am** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 4:10 pm

D-Con wrote:I usually make other styles but I have started working together with some dubstep heads on a couple of things. It has inspired me and in the meantime i just finished this dubstep tune i did solo.

http://soundcloud.com/d-con/d-con-wheres-the-bass

When this drops its mad! Sick tune, well produced. At some points it does feel like the snare is overused. I also think the snare is too loud and sharp.

Any feedback on 'London's Broken' and 'Down the Rabbit Hole' would be much appreciated

www.soundcloud.com/psy-am

tripwire22 · Post by **tripwire22** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 5:04 pm

Psy:am wrote:
D-Con wrote:I usually make other styles but I have started working together with some dubstep heads on a couple of things. It has inspired me and in the meantime i just finished this dubstep tune i did solo.

http://soundcloud.com/d-con/d-con-wheres-the-bass

When this drops its mad! Sick tune, well produced. At some points it does feel like the snare is overused. I also think the snare is too loud and sharp.

Any feedback on 'London's Broken' and 'Down the Rabbit Hole' would be much appreciated

www.soundcloud.com/psy-am

i really like the two tracks but i like londons broken a bit more i like the feel of it more. though the drops in the rabbit hole are sick i dont like the wobble sound much.

if any one could let me kno what u think of this song i just made please do ill offer more feedback to who ever needs it

http://soundcloud.com/trpwr

cixxxj · Post by **cixxxj** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 5:09 pm

Free 320 for a limited time ! njoi

http://www.mediafire.com/?inznmiemmzq

ANY thoughts welcome!

tripwire22 · Post by **tripwire22** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 5:13 pm

cixxxj wrote:Free 320 for a limited time ! njoi

http://www.mediafire.com/?inznmiemmzq

ANY thoughts welcome!

i love the atmosphere in this is a really dark tune man

cixxxj · Post by **cixxxj** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 5:26 pm

Tripwire22 wrote:
cixxxj wrote:Free 320 for a limited time ! njoi

http://www.mediafire.com/?inznmiemmzq

ANY thoughts welcome!
i love the atmosphere in this is a really dark tune man

cheers!

disonata · Post by **disonata** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 7:15 pm

KnobGoblin wrote:
@disonata: Game Over is a heavy grimey track! Really like the synth work. The Mix is nice, but the one complaint I have is that it would be even heavier with more dynamic range. This seems to be the case with most of your tracks. Don't know if you've had a chance to hear your tracks much on a big system yet (i would assume you have, as these tracks are huge) but if you get the chance you should try playing out versions of these tracks that don't push the limiter very much and see the difference when level matched.

cheers for having a listen man
do you mean try not to make everything so equally leveled so that different synths are more prominent?
but no ive not heard any of these through a big system at all, they haven't been played out yet. hopefully soon though!

grunt · Post by **grunt** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:03 pm

Grunt - Dick! Superbad is the way!!!!

Tried to make it grimey...

Feedback please?

http://soundcloud.com/gruntgibson/grunt-dick

saint.z · Post by **saint.z** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 10:53 pm

Dansu wrote:@saintz: wobble is good, arrangement not.

put a lil work on that, and the tune will be rockin

heres another tune of mine
http://soundcloud.com/dansu/kot-red

have a look at it pls

its little repetitive but i like it
and i thank you for the feed back i see what you mean about the arrangement it does need some work

@Dav.id
I appreciate you taking the time and giving feed backand with the drums a littlemore action and variation would be good i believe is what your saying and maybe some tweaking of the bass and an effect or two

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