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Futurism - Bosco feedback/constructive critism wanted

Post by bosco » Thu Sep 10, 2009 5:38 pm

its the only song in my player i got rid of all the old stuff that was a bit bizarre and started a fresh so....
here is my tune futurism please feel free to let me know what you think www.myspace.com/boscomuzik2009

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Post by bosco » Thu Sep 10, 2009 7:38 pm

if you think it needs somthing else let me know id be very interested to hear :)

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Post by badeshi » Thu Sep 10, 2009 7:55 pm

Alright, sounding fresh... Like the general tone and loping wonkyness.
I think you need to sort out your levels tho, the boing is too loud and so are some of the shakery hats. Also check your notes on the wahwah chords or maybe just volume??
I dont think you need to put much more in but could switch it up maybe? I dunno I go crazy for the switch!
Look forward to hearing more.......

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Post by bosco » Thu Sep 10, 2009 8:05 pm

cheers that sounds like some good advice, i did forget to mention that it hasnt been mastered yet iv messed around with it quite a bit and now it just sounds like noise were iv heard it so much so thats why i posted it up here always good to get other peoples opinions

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Post by bosco » Sun Sep 13, 2009 8:45 pm

i changed it around now just played about with it a little and its up on soundcloud now - http://soundcloud.com/bosco-1/futurism2
the original version still on myspace- www.myspace.com/boscomuzik2009

any feedback welcomed cheers

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