Feedback / constructive criticism wanted...

dj n/a · Post by **dj n/a** » Tue Sep 08, 2009 10:27 pm

Yo, just uploaded a new tune into my soundcloud player.

Just started writing really, and would like a few opinions / constructive criticism on the material.

It's a bit of a work in progress but... here's the link

http://soundcloud.com/ferryman

Cheers.

oli90 · Post by **oli90** » Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:22 am

Liked it up until the bass kicked in. The bass kinda masks the rest of the tune which is a shame cause there are some interesting ideas in there.

dj n/a · Post by **dj n/a** » Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:26 am

oli90 wrote:Liked it up until the bass kicked in. The bass kinda masks the rest of the tune which is a shame cause there are some interesting ideas in there.

Yeah - I'm a bit dubious about the bass... I have the issue of having to mix my tracks through a pair of shoddy (and I mean SHODDY!) old speakers - so I think that's got a lot to do with it.

I'm currently on the hunt for some decent studio monitors, so I'm guessing I'll hear the track in a whole new light once I get them up and running.

Thanks for the feedback though!

More welcome people

tripaddict · Post by **tripaddict** » Wed Sep 09, 2009 8:18 pm

yeah change the bass and up the octave

psychological · Post by **psychological** » Wed Sep 09, 2009 8:41 pm

the beat's pretty solid. good idea for the bass line too, i agree with the comment about trying to put it up an octave. good job man!

back to bassics · Post by **back to bassics** » Thu Sep 10, 2009 12:18 am

All noted. Thanks for the feedback guys

dj n/a · Post by **dj n/a** » Thu Sep 10, 2009 7:44 pm

bump.

dj n/a · Post by **dj n/a** » Fri Sep 11, 2009 1:22 pm

any more takers?

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