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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by rob_del_terror » Tue Sep 29, 2009 1:13 pm

just put this together this mornin, slugstep:-

http://soundcloud.com/rob-del-terror/slugstep
would appreciate any feedback whatsoever before i continue with it.
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Post by Pendaz » Tue Sep 29, 2009 2:03 pm

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Levels still to be adjusted and a few tweaks, have a listen - feedback appreciated


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Post by bradicle » Tue Sep 29, 2009 10:14 pm

step correct wrote:
bradicle wrote:
epochalypso wrote:
Hey guys, Just started this. Lets me know what ya think, And what I can improve on etc :). Open to whatever is thrown this way.
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8) That's pretty impressive man. Super clean all around.
Thx mate :). Any other feedback would be great thx.

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Post by dj2slo » Wed Sep 30, 2009 9:45 am

This is just a little loop I started today, I thought it sounded cool.. Not really sure where im going with it though haha :?:

http://www.mediafire.com/file/zgdgdudnn10/9-29-09 Rough Draft 1.wav


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Post by Risky_Business » Thu Oct 01, 2009 7:41 am

this is my second dubstep tune. Ive had NO feedback yet, so if you could really take a second and tell me something i can do to make this track better.
thanks sooooo much in advance to anyone who replys. i WILL return the favor. just leave me with a link to your tune.

thanks
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Post by Risky_Business » Thu Oct 01, 2009 7:42 am

how do you post your soundcloud songs in here , like have them embeded like that?
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Post by Risky_Business » Thu Oct 01, 2009 8:02 am

bradicle wrote:
step correct wrote:
bradicle wrote:
epochalypso wrote:
Hey guys, Just started this. Lets me know what ya think, And what I can improve on etc :). Open to whatever is thrown this way.
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8) That's pretty impressive man. Super clean all around.
Thx mate :). Any other feedback would be great thx.

nice tune. i like the mellow/dark ish mood. sounds a bit muddy on the low end. take some time to really eq and compress some more. its not a HUGEEE tune, but i really seem to like it. how long you been producing? what do you use?
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Post by Risky_Business » Thu Oct 01, 2009 8:07 am

Njamimars wrote:My second DS, I think it's the better music I made so far.

It's messy I know but I always make things first then making a long nice intro and somethings between them.

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Nice drum work. and good job on the hi lead. but that Hi sci fi sounding shit needs some eq on the hi end its hurtin my ears. but the wobble/bassy lead is blahh. its speed dosnt seem to match the song. i would scratch that all together and create a new one. something that grooves more with the tune
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Post by Risky_Business » Thu Oct 01, 2009 8:14 am

dj2slo wrote:This is just a little loop I started today, I thought it sounded cool.. Not really sure where im going with it though haha :?:

http://www.mediafire.com/file/zgdgdudnn10/9-29-09 Rough Draft 1.wav

im feeling the track, but it sounds like its clipping pretty bad. like you said its a rough draft. so put some work into that baby and lets see her again real soon
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Post by daz-butane-1987 » Thu Oct 01, 2009 11:41 am

hi this is my on going track its a ruff version... im new fairly new to production and still getting the hang of it .... hope this link below works

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Post by Death_Bastard » Thu Oct 01, 2009 1:05 pm

First shot at producing electronica, am a bassist really. Any feedback would be great.
This is by no means a dark or clubish track. Need to sort out the arp in the midsection break and the basses need tweaking, but main problem is structure. If anybody has advice on building tension/mood I'd love to hear it.
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Post by marshy » Thu Oct 01, 2009 3:12 pm

*Moved to finished thread*
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Post by hirshi » Thu Oct 01, 2009 5:38 pm

drenster wrote:WATS UP everyone. Just workin on tracks as usual, any feedback would be appreciated if not, thanks for listening anyway. peace!

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FEEELIN this track. love the sample. makes me crack up. you got a finished version? 320 perhaps??

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Post by drenster » Thu Oct 01, 2009 8:36 pm

hirshi wrote:
drenster wrote:WATS UP everyone. Just workin on tracks as usual, any feedback would be appreciated if not, thanks for listening anyway. peace!

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FEEELIN this track. love the sample. makes me crack up. you got a finished version? 320 perhaps??
thanks alot man! finishing up two tracks and will gladly send you it when im done.

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Post by bradicle » Thu Oct 01, 2009 10:54 pm

Risky_Business wrote:
nice tune. i like the mellow/dark ish mood. sounds a bit muddy on the low end. take some time to really eq and compress some more. its not a HUGEEE tune, but i really seem to like it. how long you been producing? what do you use?
Not very long at all. Use FL9. Yea it's basically had no eq work at all so will spend some time on that.

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Post by midnight_toker » Thu Oct 01, 2009 11:02 pm

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Although I've been mixing dub tracks for a few years I never tried much production. This one came together in 20 minutes after a happy accident I had while working on another project.

Also have another version with a more traditional dubstep drum pattern, but having some ducking issues with that one. A bit of a cheesy vocal, and needs some frequency work on the mud to crisp it up... Go easy on me, not like I'm suggesting anyone should be playing this out anytime soon...

Check out my dubstep mixes @ http://hvyhttrs.podOmatic.com


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Post by my_fickle_eye » Thu Oct 01, 2009 11:43 pm

daz-butane-1987 wrote:hi this is my on going track its a ruff version... im new fairly new to production and still getting the hang of it .... hope this link below works

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Hey think you should ditch the grit in the second chorusy cant hear any definition on the bass, maybe more variation with the vocal sample at the start, like add an automated delay or reverb maybe.

http://soundcloud.com/randeebugga/hvyhttrs-all-yer-bazz

Although I've been mixing dub tracks for a few years I never tried much production. This one came together in 20 minutes after a happy accident I had while working on another project.

Also have another version with a more traditional dubstep drum pattern, but having some ducking issues with that one. A bit of a cheesy vocal, and needs some frequency work on the mud to crisp it up... Go easy on me, not like I'm suggesting anyone should be playing this out anytime soon...

Check out my dubstep mixes @ http://hvyhttrs.podOmatic.com

Think the panning needs to be chilled out a bit, but could be just cause i got my phones in, yeah sounds clear and crispy, maybe some more variation with the apregi.




hirshi wrote:
drenster wrote:
WATS UP everyone. Just workin on tracks as usual, any feedback would be appreciated if not, thanks for listening anyway. peace!

http://soundcloud.com/drenone88/fake-your-own-death
FEEELIN this track. love the sample. makes me crack up. you got a finished version? 320 perhaps??


thanks alot man! finishing up two tracks and will gladly send you it when im done.

Sounds really together man the tones are sweat to listen to not sure maybe the wobble line needs to be a tab quieter but thats just real specific.
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Post by aspect-dubz » Thu Oct 01, 2009 11:45 pm

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haven't upped a track in a while, so any feedback would be really REALLY appreciated, safe :)
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Post by my_fickle_eye » Thu Oct 01, 2009 11:46 pm

Hey working on putting an ep or something together and this is a sample from one of my tracks, just wondering if i could get some advice on general structuring, and especially EQ mixing and mastering problems with the sound ive got, thanks for your time.
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