thanks for the comments mates!selophaine wrote:Liking this one, but djaccel is right, the build up is bigger than the drop. maybe some drum variation after the drop too. But all in all it's good imo.dj_hottok wrote:this is my latest work which is still in progress let me know what ya'll think!
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?qymw5zndwjx
at about 1:22 i like how you switch up the bass with that nice high pitched siney thing on top, seems abit repetative. Feeling the snare in it and liking the bass's just reckon it needs a bit more ideas like a few more melodys?djaccel wrote:
Now here's my latest work in progress, got about 81 bars there, lemme know what you guys think.
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EDIT: Soundcloud doesn't seem to be working, so here's the track on speedyshare.
http://www.speedyshare.com/680980562.html
generally feeling it though 
done my 3 feedbacks for today so http://www.dnbshare.com/download/xmanstep.mp3.html
Jesus that bass is serious business..djaccel wrote: Now here's my latest work in progress, got about 81 bars there, lemme know what you guys think.
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EDIT: Soundcloud doesn't seem to be working, so here's the track on speedyshare.
http://www.speedyshare.com/680980562.html
Nice track mate, like the sorta reggae feel with the off beat nd sample feeling the bass sounds kinda weird but is interesting. The kick sounds very big and i loved the way for the drop it sorta melt into the bassmarsonebeatz wrote:hey new tune, one of my heavier yet chiller tracks, check it out and feedback is greatly appreciated and will be reciprocated
safe!!
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louissmusic wrote:Nice track mate, like the sorta reggae feel with the off beat nd sample feeling the bass sounds kinda weird but is interesting. The kick sounds very big and i loved the way for the drop it sorta melt into the bassmarsonebeatz wrote:hey new tune, one of my heavier yet chiller tracks, check it out and feedback is greatly appreciated and will be reciprocated
safe!!
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very nice
Its ok at least it shows the ideas and the flow of the track at a reasonable standard. Yeh me too, i allways have used them on the go ready and waiting with just the best reverb and delay all in a comb ready to go!:D haha dont feel bad, i use a real acoustic strummed guitarlowpass wrote:Cheers man there was actually another mix that I uploaded which sounds a little cleaner but no not the final product, I can't stop using those pianos no lol nearly added an electric guitar too for the full distance rip-off haha. You're right there is an element missing which is why I came here, I just can't work it out. Maybe I could try a sax stab or something like you said in there see how it works.nitz wrote:lowpass wrote:@Dj Accel - I like the bass noise, maybe throw some different percussion in there, like the voice sample too
Anyone else who wants feedback, leave some crit for mine first
This is my track, looking for some feedback on it before I play it out on Friday, I'd say it's more influenced by metal than anything else, I'm going with the melodic piano thing again with that sub underneath, much darker than other recent stuff though
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Easy lowpass, whats good man hows its going? i seen this on sound cloud and decided to try find it on DSF
I see your on the distance piano sound again!, you cant leave them along they are too goodalways have to be used !
nice track, good vibe to it, good use of delay and reverb and its even got a wobble in it ! Great variation into the 2nd drop.
crit= need one more element i think, not a full on riff, just something that play between certain bars, ie a sax stab..?
Other then one not really much to say... just maybe need one more element other then that its quite good. it should sound good when it played out, after everything is done
btw this is not your final mix down right?
@ Bradicle - mate that made me laugh, you're on about my crit for someone elses track, but yeah the sub was too overpowering, I've lowered it in recent mixes I've done of the track. I like your track mate, I think the rises are a little overdone, I think maybe either reduce them or just use a couple of different ones, deep track though.
noting wrong with it.. its placed in the back of the mix, it fits into the music and i think it sounds good, and if someone else dont then thats there problem not your Sax or a arp would do fine tho, but if you make a arp i would suggest placing deep into the mix give the song more dimension but if its the sax place up and close so you can actually hear the long delayed stab going farer farer..... farer..... farer...... abit like the tape delay I can see what approach you are trying to take, and by no means am I an expert in the feel, but I'd beef the kick up as it feels drowned out in the current mix.circadian wrote:Soundcloud
Just something I threw together last night, some ideas comments would be cool. Thanks.
lynn mc wrote:ok here's something i've made on renoise thus far.
sort of, early 90s newage meets double-speed jungle'y dubstep chillout ??
sweet.mp3
anything else bud? and thats from the funniest show of all time here in the states called "its always sunny in philadelphia" check it out, youll fall in lovemainhead wrote:2marsonebeatz
it is fun to look on a guy at ur avatar while listening (%
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