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Post by ccth » Wed Nov 04, 2009 3:56 pm

My "first" dubstep:) pls write your opinion. Thanks.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lWViQaOQjvM

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Post by stappard » Wed Nov 04, 2009 4:35 pm

the-devo wrote:Shit, I even gave, and still didn't get. And people who post their stuff without giving get feedback?
That's a shitload of motivation, thank you! :evil:

EDIT: Aren't the rules the same for this thread as they are for the one for WIPs?

Half the time I give and don't even ask to get. There's no point, too many people in this thread who aren't interested in taking some time to listen to peoples tunes. Suppose all we can do is lead by example....

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Post by stappard » Wed Nov 04, 2009 4:40 pm

the-devo wrote:Hi all,

Soundcloud

I'm not sure but I think I finally finished this piece of shit track. This was a torture making..
It's my 6th or 7th attempt at Dubstep, but I learned a lot.
The bass and the wobbles and every digital sound you hear in the song is produced by me,
so don't let the numbers fool you; I am a noob, but I think using someone else's wobbles is fucking lame.
So.. I can has feedback?

Cool track man, the intro gives it a lot of atmosphere and the space is really well made following the drums. Lots of room for each sound, very cool. Just the sound effect and :36 might be mixed a bit too loud though man? And the sixth sense quote (the first one) is a bit high in the mix too. Apart from that all seems to be pretty fucking good man. Respect for doing your own synthesis etc, I'm jealous of your sound design skills for sure.

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Post by dj search » Wed Nov 04, 2009 6:02 pm

Soundcloud

I'm at the stage where i feel my productions are beginning to sound half decent and i have Feedback from DSF to thank for that however it just takes too much Bumping to get there.

Feedback is precious!

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Post by 6144 » Wed Nov 04, 2009 7:14 pm

SN3K - HUMAN TRAFFIC (AMBIENT REMIX)

http://6144.pdj.ru/

FRESH STUFF ARE HERE

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Post by djwom » Wed Nov 04, 2009 8:12 pm

Cor there's loooooaaaads of replys 2 this 1!

Here's another

http://soundcloud.com/wom/soundbwoys-betrayal

Feel free 2 follow me on there if u like ma stuff - dont have many followers (hope thats coz iv just started out n not coz i'm shit!)

Safe

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Post by djwom » Wed Nov 04, 2009 8:27 pm

bifta wrote:Soundcloud

Let me know whats up Cheers
gotta do ma bit n give feedback otherwise wont get any myself!

Mid bass is 2 predominant, and could do with a bit more variation. I think dubstep has progessed alot from that sound (early dubstep years) :-) keep em rolling out!

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Post by djwom » Wed Nov 04, 2009 8:33 pm

bradicle wrote:jfloyd, i'm really digging that man. Really like it!
Good track! :-)

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Post by dj search » Wed Nov 04, 2009 8:44 pm

6144 wrote:SN3K - HUMAN TRAFFIC (AMBIENT REMIX)

I enjoyed the track very hypnotic with the video.

I used the same sample in one of my first tracks, good to hear it again!

That track

http://soundcloud.com/search-1/search-under-london

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Post by djwom » Wed Nov 04, 2009 8:45 pm

arktrix wrote:
arktrix wrote:Soundcloud
Not my style but - evil... n well mixed down! :-)

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Post by dj search » Wed Nov 04, 2009 8:51 pm

djwom wrote:Cor there's loooooaaaads of replys 2 this 1!

Here's another

http://soundcloud.com/wom/soundbwoys-betrayal

Feel free 2 follow me on there if u like ma stuff - dont have many followers (hope thats coz iv just started out n not coz i'm shit!)

Safe
Heavy man 320?

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Post by djwom » Wed Nov 04, 2009 9:12 pm

dj search wrote:
djwom wrote:Cor there's loooooaaaads of replys 2 this 1!

Here's another

http://soundcloud.com/wom/soundbwoys-betrayal

Feel free 2 follow me on there if u like ma stuff - dont have many followers (hope thats coz iv just started out n not coz i'm shit!)

Safe
Heavy man 320?
U want a copy?

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Post by dj search » Wed Nov 04, 2009 9:22 pm

djwom wrote:
dj search wrote:
djwom wrote:Cor there's loooooaaaads of replys 2 this 1!

Here's another

http://soundcloud.com/wom/soundbwoys-betrayal

Feel free 2 follow me on there if u like ma stuff - dont have many followers (hope thats coz iv just started out n not coz i'm shit!)

Safe
Heavy man 320?
U want a copy?
Yeah I'm planning to put a mix together of heavy tunes from DSF and Soundcloud!

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Post by djwom » Wed Nov 04, 2009 9:26 pm

dj search wrote:
djwom wrote:
dj search wrote:
djwom wrote:Cor there's loooooaaaads of replys 2 this 1!

Here's another

http://soundcloud.com/wom/soundbwoys-betrayal

Feel free 2 follow me on there if u like ma stuff - dont have many followers (hope thats coz iv just started out n not coz i'm shit!)

Safe
Heavy man 320?
U want a copy?
Yeah I'm planning to put a mix together of heavy tunes from DSF and Soundcloud!
Awsome... ur the first 2 ask 4 a copy of 1 of ma tunes! Respect!How shall i send it?

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Post by dj search » Wed Nov 04, 2009 9:42 pm

On Soundcloud if you hit edit above the tune and select make download available (towards the bottom of the page) that should do it.

Or if you don't want everyone and anyone to DL it get a mediafire.com account or something similar and PM the link

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Post by sebastien » Wed Nov 04, 2009 10:06 pm

Hi again, this is a track i've made lately, Feedback please :z:

Soundcloud

Also check http://www.myspace.com/Requake
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Post by the-devo » Wed Nov 04, 2009 10:58 pm

stappard wrote:
the-devo wrote:Hi all,

Soundcloud

I'm not sure but I think I finally finished this piece of shit track. This was a torture making..
It's my 6th or 7th attempt at Dubstep, but I learned a lot.
The bass and the wobbles and every digital sound you hear in the song is produced by me,
so don't let the numbers fool you; I am a noob, but I think using someone else's wobbles is fucking lame.
So.. I can has feedback?

Cool track man, the intro gives it a lot of atmosphere and the space is really well made following the drums. Lots of room for each sound, very cool. Just the sound effect and :36 might be mixed a bit too loud though man? And the sixth sense quote (the first one) is a bit high in the mix too. Apart from that all seems to be pretty fucking good man. Respect for doing your own synthesis etc, I'm jealous of your sound design skills for sure.
Thank you! Yes, I agree on the 6th sense sample thing (it is too loud).
The way I learned to design my sounds was I opened up FL and Massive, then played some tracks by 16 bit, and I fooled around with Massive and the effect channels as I listened to their songs. I tried recreate their sick brain-raping sounds.
Exactly which sound effect at 0:36 is too loud? The sound effects there are (in order): sword whoosh > blade cut > horror movie effect > a group of people screaming > air horn with lots of reverb.
Respect for doing your own synthesis etc - Doesn't everyone do their own synths? I thought that was the whole point of all the head-shaking and screaming when people heard a sick bass. I thought we celebrated our favorite producers because they have killer sound design skills, not because they can use a sample.
With that effort, I could become famous using eJay. No, man. I can't let this happen. Check your private messages within an hour. You're going to receive something from me.

- Devo
Hip-Hop had the advantage of being born before the age of information (the internet).
It had time to develop naturally into the complex subculture it is today. Dubstep didn't have a chance.
If Hip-Hop was a fully developed husky feared by millions, then Dubstep is the inbred chihuahua on steroids incapable of living but adored by billions.

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Post by Doctor Dub » Wed Nov 04, 2009 11:01 pm

the-devo wrote:Hi all,

Soundcloud

I'm not sure but I think I finally finished this piece of shit track. This was a torture making..
It's my 6th or 7th attempt at Dubstep, but I learned a lot.
The bass and the wobbles and every digital sound you hear in the song is produced by me,
so don't let the numbers fool you; I am a noob, but I think using someone else's wobbles is fucking lame.
So.. I can has feedback?


Yo big tune, i like it very much. one criticism, reverb is a bit much, otherwise great.

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Post by stappard » Thu Nov 05, 2009 12:18 am

the-devo wrote:
stappard wrote:
the-devo wrote:Hi all,

Soundcloud

I'm not sure but I think I finally finished this piece of shit track. This was a torture making..
It's my 6th or 7th attempt at Dubstep, but I learned a lot.
The bass and the wobbles and every digital sound you hear in the song is produced by me,
so don't let the numbers fool you; I am a noob, but I think using someone else's wobbles is fucking lame.
So.. I can has feedback?

Cool track man, the intro gives it a lot of atmosphere and the space is really well made following the drums. Lots of room for each sound, very cool. Just the sound effect and :36 might be mixed a bit too loud though man? And the sixth sense quote (the first one) is a bit high in the mix too. Apart from that all seems to be pretty fucking good man. Respect for doing your own synthesis etc, I'm jealous of your sound design skills for sure.
Thank you! Yes, I agree on the 6th sense sample thing (it is too loud).
The way I learned to design my sounds was I opened up FL and Massive, then played some tracks by 16 bit, and I fooled around with Massive and the effect channels as I listened to their songs. I tried recreate their sick brain-raping sounds.
Exactly which sound effect at 0:36 is too loud? The sound effects there are (in order): sword whoosh > blade cut > horror movie effect > a group of people screaming > air horn with lots of reverb.
Respect for doing your own synthesis etc - Doesn't everyone do their own synths? I thought that was the whole point of all the head-shaking and screaming when people heard a sick bass. I thought we celebrated our favorite producers because they have killer sound design skills, not because they can use a sample.
With that effort, I could become famous using eJay. No, man. I can't let this happen. Check your private messages within an hour. You're going to receive something from me.

- Devo

Ok I would say in particular the air horn is probably a few db too loud, that whole set of sounds is nicely put together but a bit harsh to my ear (listening in studio headphones, peoples experience on monitors may be different). The blade cut and horror movie effect are probably a tiny bit too loud as well. This is all personal preference to me though so I would go changing things unless you yourself aren't happy with them.

What I meant about synthesis is there is a tendency (especially in threads such as this one - I'm guilty to a certain extent) to whore presets, hence the whole "brutal electro" problem where one wobble preset has been in so many songs its silly. So if you start out with an interest and talent for crafting your own sounds from scratch that'll only lead to individual creations and a positive improvement from track to track as your skills improve, as opposed to finding yourself out of presets.

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Post by the-devo » Thu Nov 05, 2009 1:34 am

Doctor Dub wrote:
the-devo wrote:Hi all,

Soundcloud

I'm not sure but I think I finally finished this piece of shit track. This was a torture making..
It's my 6th or 7th attempt at Dubstep, but I learned a lot.
The bass and the wobbles and every digital sound you hear in the song is produced by me,
so don't let the numbers fool you; I am a noob, but I think using someone else's wobbles is fucking lame.
So.. I can has feedback?


Yo big tune, i like it very much. one criticism, reverb is a bit much, otherwise great.
Thanks, man! About the reverb. Do you mean that in general (for the whole song) or only a few particular sounds?

@stappard
The only reason I wouldn't spend much time balancing the loudness is that, as I said, the song was a pain in the ass. =D
But I probably will do that later on when I get over the exhaustion.
And yeah.. I don't have neither monitors or studio headphones (they were stolen from me).. all I have are my stereo system's speakers (using AUX).

Oh by the way.. an off topic question: Do people still appreciate Digital Mystikz' works? I mean when I ask someone if they like dubstep, they're like "yeh caspa n rusko iz teh awesomez!" which gives me the will to kill. :evil:
Wasn't Digital Mystikz the very first band that ever had anything to do with Dubstep? I asked a guy recently if he listened to Skream's songs, or Digital Mystikz, but no reaction.
Rusko is ravestep.. correct me if I'm wrong.
Hip-Hop had the advantage of being born before the age of information (the internet).
It had time to develop naturally into the complex subculture it is today. Dubstep didn't have a chance.
If Hip-Hop was a fully developed husky feared by millions, then Dubstep is the inbred chihuahua on steroids incapable of living but adored by billions.

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