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Post by junior spesh » Sat Nov 07, 2009 10:42 am

idlemode wrote:@junior spesh

i like the track dude. levels all sound good here.
like the bassline. think it all works well together, lyrics and the track. good work.

saaaafe... fanx 4 feedback... anyting of urs u wnant me 2 check out??
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Post by idlemode » Sat Nov 07, 2009 3:16 pm

all good mate, just this one... i can't do heavy stuff atm ;)

http://soundcloud.com/idlemode/dubstep-kinda-thang

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Post by jsills » Sat Nov 07, 2009 4:11 pm

junior spesh wrote:Being a BIG hip hop fan, i fort id try my hand ar Drake's Forever!!

THIS IS MY PROGRESS ON THE REMIX SO FAR, FEEDBACK NEEDED!
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i have given out bare feedback recently and will continue 2 do so in exchange 4 sum aimed my way guyz!!

whats good man, like it so far, couple things that jump out at me...
1)eminem's verse is so ill, why cut the best verse?
2)more drum edits, rolls, flairs for interest
3) cant put my finger on it but id try and spice up the chorus/breakdown sections. im thinking a synth line that you can use to tie the chorus and verse together
4)id like the bass with a little more saturation on the higher frequencies and a little more volume on the lowend, but thats just personal preference, i likes my bass like i likes my women, fat and dirty. 8)

if you dont mind id love some feedback on the track i posted, im feeling the hell out of it and need validation for my ego. :lol:

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Post by junior spesh » Sat Nov 07, 2009 4:53 pm

jsills wrote:
junior spesh wrote:Being a BIG hip hop fan, i fort id try my hand ar Drake's Forever!!

THIS IS MY PROGRESS ON THE REMIX SO FAR, FEEDBACK NEEDED!
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i have given out bare feedback recently and will continue 2 do so in exchange 4 sum aimed my way guyz!!

whats good man, like it so far, couple things that jump out at me...
1)eminem's verse is so ill, why cut the best verse?
2)more drum edits, rolls, flairs for interest
3) cant put my finger on it but id try and spice up the chorus/breakdown sections. im thinking a synth line that you can use to tie the chorus and verse together
4)id like the bass with a little more saturation on the higher frequencies and a little more volume on the lowend, but thats just personal preference, i likes my bass like i likes my women, fat and dirty. 8)

LOOL, yh im beefin up da bass ryte now mate...

that is only my progress so far, eminems verse is cummin next lol...

willl drop feedbak later 4 sure...


if you dont mind id love some feedback on the track i posted, im feeling the hell out of it and need validation for my ego. :lol:
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Post by junior spesh » Sat Nov 07, 2009 4:54 pm

idlemode wrote:all good mate, just this one... i can't do heavy stuff atm ;)

http://soundcloud.com/idlemode/dubstep-kinda-thang
busy atm, college work, but gi feedback asap bruv
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Post by lostintherush » Sat Nov 07, 2009 6:42 pm

Since i can only upload 5 track each month, i made this sampler and marked the tracks..
Help me, and i'll help you. i swear :)

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Post by marsonebeatz » Sat Nov 07, 2009 6:43 pm

hey new tuneage here. kinda house inspired dub called "SoundSkankz" Feedback is greatly appreciated.
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Post by 2nd chance » Sat Nov 07, 2009 7:35 pm

marsonebeatz wrote:hey new tuneage here. kinda house inspired dub called "SoundSkankz" Feedback is greatly appreciated.
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Safe track bro. The mixing is well done. My headphone are rather shit, so I can't tell if that bass is supposed to be a sub... If it is, I can hear it, so it's way to loud. If it isn't, then you're in the clear haha.
Lets see, what else. It's a really big tune, filling a lot of space without losing headroom. That's pretty awesome. I have to say though, it seems a little hollow. I'd really like to hear some more effects and whatnot, little stuff ya know? That would fill it out nicely.
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#1. Hollow. Needs more sound. If there's a booming sub that I can't hear, golden. :wink:
#2. Love it! Very atmospheric. Again, I bet the bass is sick. I might add more of those stabs a bit earlier when you introduce the wobb.
#3. fave so far. Love the sounds you use, and that lead-ish pattern you got going is awesome.
#4. Is that a formant filter on the one sound? I'm not a fan. If you like it, go for it, but I'm not feeling it. And the intro doesn't really seem to congeal with the rest of the song. Really different style. I really like the notes and the musical aspects of it, and the middle eastern vibe is tight.
#5.Too much is going on. All the elements are really good on their own, but when you put it all together, I have absolutely no idea what to be listening to. Pick one aspect and make it a focal point (usually the bass.) Everything else, turn it down, don't use it as much, or cut it. Once you go into the verse where it's just the wobble, it gets to being really good, but the beginning is hard to listen to.

heh, that's all I got in me at the moment... If there's any specific track you want me to listen to, lemme know and I'll check it out.

In the mean time, I did some more work on the new track, if anyone could offer some feedback I'd love ya forever :P. I plan on adding an outro, and there was something else but I forget now. heh.
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Post by jsills » Sat Nov 07, 2009 7:40 pm

lostintherush wrote:Since i can only upload 5 track each month, i made this sampler and marked the tracks..
Help me, and i'll help you. i swear :)

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like what im hearing here, keep doing what yur doing. i like the varying styles going on. the second track that comes in with the dub vibe is dope

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Post by marsonebeatz » Sat Nov 07, 2009 7:58 pm

2nd chance wrote:
marsonebeatz wrote:hey new tuneage here. kinda house inspired dub called "SoundSkankz" Feedback is greatly appreciated.
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Safe track bro. The mixing is well done. My headphone are rather shit, so I can't tell if that bass is supposed to be a sub... If it is, I can hear it, so it's way to loud. If it isn't, then you're in the clear haha.
Lets see, what else. It's a really big tune, filling a lot of space without losing headroom. That's pretty awesome. I have to say though, it seems a little hollow. I'd really like to hear some more effects and whatnot, little stuff ya know? That would fill it out nicely.
lostintherush wrote:Since i can only upload 5 track each month, i made this sampler and marked the tracks..
Help me, and i'll help you. i swear :)

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#1. Hollow. Needs more sound. If there's a booming sub that I can't hear, golden. :wink:
#2. Love it! Very atmospheric. Again, I bet the bass is sick. I might add more of those stabs a bit earlier when you introduce the wobb.
#3. fave so far. Love the sounds you use, and that lead-ish pattern you got going is awesome.
#4. Is that a formant filter on the one sound? I'm not a fan. If you like it, go for it, but I'm not feeling it. And the intro doesn't really seem to congeal with the rest of the song. Really different style. I really like the notes and the musical aspects of it, and the middle eastern vibe is tight.
#5.Too much is going on. All the elements are really good on their own, but when you put it all together, I have absolutely no idea what to be listening to. Pick one aspect and make it a focal point (usually the bass.) Everything else, turn it down, don't use it as much, or cut it. Once you go into the verse where it's just the wobble, it gets to being really good, but the beginning is hard to listen to.

heh, that's all I got in me at the moment... If there's any specific track you want me to listen to, lemme know and I'll check it out.

In the mean time, I did some more work on the new track, if anyone could offer some feedback I'd love ya forever :P. I plan on adding an outro, and there was something else but I forget now. heh.
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thanks for the feedback. yeah i feel like it could use some more dub sounds maybe some delayed samples. ass for the bass ive used a similar version before and it sounds loud on anything from little speakers to my friends 12" subs so ill think its good :) ill check yer track now

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Post by nuane » Sat Nov 07, 2009 8:17 pm

morigami wrote:
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I make this little thing about 2 week and I can't think melody for this :-(
That's a nice and chilled out tune you got there, kudos. I'm not sure about the crackly atmosphere in the background though, it reminds me of getting dust on a vinyl when mixing. Out of interest, what is the original that the vocals come from? Post up again when you get a melody on there :wink:
Thank you for feedback! I use vocal samples from sample library named 'Vocal XTC'. This library contain is in mainly soul- and r`n`b- like vocals.

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Post by lostintherush » Sat Nov 07, 2009 8:18 pm

2nd chance wrote: #1. Hollow. Needs more sound. If there's a booming sub that I can't hear, golden. :wink:
#2. Love it! Very atmospheric. Again, I bet the bass is sick. I might add more of those stabs a bit earlier when you introduce the wobb.
#3. fave so far. Love the sounds you use, and that lead-ish pattern you got going is awesome.
#4. Is that a formant filter on the one sound? I'm not a fan. If you like it, go for it, but I'm not feeling it. And the intro doesn't really seem to congeal with the rest of the song. Really different style. I really like the notes and the musical aspects of it, and the middle eastern vibe is tight.
#5.Too much is going on. All the elements are really good on their own, but when you put it all together, I have absolutely no idea what to be listening to. Pick one aspect and make it a focal point (usually the bass.) Everything else, turn it down, don't use it as much, or cut it. Once you go into the verse where it's just the wobble, it gets to being really good, but the beginning is hard to listen to.

heh, that's all I got in me at the moment... If there's any specific track you want me to listen to, lemme know and I'll check it out.

In the mean time, I did some more work on the new track, if anyone could offer some feedback I'd love ya forever :P. I plan on adding an outro, and there was something else but I forget now. heh.
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Thank you for your feedback mate! :)
Definitely useful!

I just listened to your track. I really like your lead melody thing and it sounds really great together with the wobble and those string-like synths, but your kick needs A LOT more sub! It's barely hearable(sp?) in the mix. Your drums are good, i really like the snare but it could use some compression to make it more dominant. And maybe you should make a sub bass to accompany your wobble by using the automation/LFO you used on the wobble filter and apply it to your subs volume. I think it will sound awesome! And at 2:49 where you're doing the glide thing on the wobble, maybe you should let the LFO go twice as fast or it may not be perceived as a glide and it might sound a little misplaced.
But it's a nice track and a good idea, keep working on it and it will end up really sweet!
Hope that was helpful (and understandable. english is not my primary language! :P)

And hey i would love some feedback on a single track i'm working on atm.
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Post by marsonebeatz » Sat Nov 07, 2009 9:18 pm

updated the new track, any thoughts?

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Post by lostintherush » Sat Nov 07, 2009 9:25 pm

marsonebeatz wrote:updated the new track, any thoughts?

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Dude, i LOVE your gliding synth with the delay thing. It's off the hook!!

Mind giving me a little feedback on the track i posted above? :)

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Post by marsonebeatz » Sat Nov 07, 2009 9:47 pm

lostintherush wrote:
marsonebeatz wrote:updated the new track, any thoughts?

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Dude, i LOVE your gliding synth with the delay thing. It's off the hook!!

Mind giving me a little feedback on the track i posted above? :)
you mean the synth at 0:54? thats my riddim :) ill leave you feedback on soundcloud as that is what i prefer

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Post by marsonebeatz » Sat Nov 07, 2009 9:53 pm

@lostintherush that "chaos reigns" track is ridiculous, instant favorite. ive never favorited a preview before either

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Post by nefarious.beats » Sat Nov 07, 2009 10:11 pm

@lostintherush

your tracks have a nice style to them, some of them are tight, others are a little over the place.

By that i mean you can't really zone in into one sound to get your step on! Nice use of sounds tho, basslines are all pretty fat too and the sub bass always sound good. :D

P.S I just check Chaos Reigns.... fuck me man... im loving this... stinky filthy heavy!!! the kick is lovely and punchy, high hats are nice and tinkly too

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Post by marsonebeatz » Sat Nov 07, 2009 10:20 pm

nefarious.beats wrote:@lostintherush

your tracks have a nice style to them, some of them are tight, others are a little over the place.

By that i mean you can't really zone in into one sound to get your step on! Nice use of sounds tho, basslines are all pretty fat too and the sub bass always sound good. :D

P.S I just check Chaos Reigns.... fuck me man... im loving this... stinky filthy heavy!!! the kick is lovely and punchy, high hats are nice and tinkly too
haha fuck me is what i said right away when i left a comment for that tune

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