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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by thierry_le_dj » Fri Nov 13, 2009 10:03 pm

i have 3 new trax i would love some feed back please!
(Safari Dub,Mon-Dazed and Feeling It) i have been working on these trax a few months now
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Post by legend4ry » Fri Nov 13, 2009 11:52 pm

fhsueh wrote:
legend4ry wrote: Easy man, I absolutely love the progression of the synths - I feel the drums are a little boring and could do with a lot more space, with the minimalness of the synth progression - If the drums were more spaced out and less harsh it would give a lot more character and would make the track a lot more beautiful and very very epic - I'm thinking lots of spacey - slightly reverbed hats and nice big delayed crashes, the kick on 1 and snare on 3 beat would suit this a lot better too


Overall I think its a great track but the drums spoil it from being a instant persy!
Thanks legend4ry! Appreciate the feedback.
legend4ry wrote: the kick on 1 and snare on 3 beat would suit this a lot better too
Haha. Essentially: "make it sound like dubstep" :) Point taken :)
Not at all ! I am the last person to say "follow formulars" I just feel it would give the tune a bit more space and pace if the drums wasn't so busy :)
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by dansu » Sat Nov 14, 2009 12:56 am

sry for not feedbacking anyones shit, i will do it tomorrow

would be nice if someone could have a look at this meanwhile

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Post by marsonebeatz » Sat Nov 14, 2009 3:29 am

new tune i jammed out last night. havent had any feedback yet, any thoughts?

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gooms!

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Post by Reflection » Sat Nov 14, 2009 4:40 am

dansu wrote:sry for not feedbacking anyones shit, i will do it tomorrow

would be nice if someone could have a look at this meanwhile

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nice tune, theres a few things that could use some work.

The big thing that stuck out like a sore thumb is the kick drum.. it sounds....cheap...and it's hitting too high like a rock and roll kick or something. Either replace it entirely or EQ it. You should lower some of the mid and high frequencies and Raise the frequences ranging from 90-120 hz.\
The open hi-hat needs to be EQ-ed as well, this time take out the low to mid frequences and only keep the high ones.
The snare could also use some reverb. as well as possible layering 2 snares on top of each other.
The sub bass sounds good overall.
The track as a whole is a tad repetitive. I would either aim for a more prominent counter melody, or some synth strings playing chords, possible after the break or before it.

After you make these fixes, I'm sure the track will be a banger, Good luck man! 8)
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by Reflection » Sat Nov 14, 2009 4:47 am

legend4ry wrote:
fhsueh wrote:
legend4ry wrote: Easy man, I absolutely love the progression of the synths - I feel the drums are a little boring and could do with a lot more space, with the minimalness of the synth progression - If the drums were more spaced out and less harsh it would give a lot more character and would make the track a lot more beautiful and very very epic - I'm thinking lots of spacey - slightly reverbed hats and nice big delayed crashes, the kick on 1 and snare on 3 beat would suit this a lot better too


Overall I think its a great track but the drums spoil it from being a instant persy!
Thanks legend4ry! Appreciate the feedback.
legend4ry wrote: the kick on 1 and snare on 3 beat would suit this a lot better too
Haha. Essentially: "make it sound like dubstep" :) Point taken :)
Not at all ! I am the last person to say "follow formulars" I just feel it would give the tune a bit more space and pace if the drums wasn't so busy :)

I Think the main problem is the kick drum hits too frequently. If you don't like the 1-3 formula, that's fine, I think it's a bit boring myself. In my opinion, keep the snare how it is, add more variation to the kick, and use it less frequently (ie sometimes hits on 1--2.5---3.75--1--1.75-----1----1 something like, kinda hard to desbribe, but I hope you get my point.

The one section which has a lot of snare would sound fine IF you lowered the volume on the snare hits that are on the offbeats, it will allow it to grove more naturally, try it out.
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Post by Reflection » Sat Nov 14, 2009 4:51 am

marsonebeatz wrote:new tune i jammed out last night. havent had any feedback yet, any thoughts?

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gooms!
jesus, looking at your block wave shape, you squashed the shit out of your sound, lower the volume on all your shit and take the limiter off. (or if u did this with your limiter, turn your gain down).

Also turn the high kick down a bit

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Post by sebastien » Sat Nov 14, 2009 10:40 am

Hi, this is my new tune, made a few days ago. Dont had any feedback yet. :oops:

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Post by Yawzin » Sat Nov 14, 2009 3:09 pm

Feedback please.

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Post by naiad daiad » Sat Nov 14, 2009 4:51 pm

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Got one for ya.
Dunno if it's really "Dubstep"
it's 128 bpm. And it has a guitar solo. And a 2-minute intro.

But it wobbles, and it swings, and it booms.

So take a listen, won't you?

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Post by spencertron » Sat Nov 14, 2009 6:25 pm

naiad daiad wrote:Soundcloud

Got one for ya.
Dunno if it's really "Dubstep"
it's 128 bpm. And it has a guitar solo. And a 2-minute intro.

But it wobbles, and it swings, and it booms.

So take a listen, won't you?

-Naiad Daiad

that is beautiful! drops really nice too.
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Post by melodik » Sat Nov 14, 2009 6:52 pm

New one up...Neon Skank...feedback/crit would be bless!!! would give feedback in return most def!!!

http://soundcloud.com/melodik/neon-skank

Onetime in advance!!

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new dub for 2009 check it out.

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Re: new dub for 2009 check it out.

Post by Dark Reign » Sun Nov 15, 2009 2:59 am

dash b2009 wrote:
Thats sick man. How do you make that kind of intro, Its the same kinds intro to Gamma ray burst by Downlink Ive tried many methods but cant seem to get it.

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Post by dash b2009 » Sun Nov 15, 2009 12:47 pm

its from 1 of my vst's i use with a few effects over the top

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Post by lostintherush » Sun Nov 15, 2009 7:32 pm

Finally finished this track!

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Tell me what you think ;)

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Post by naiad daiad » Sun Nov 15, 2009 8:28 pm

@ spencertron

thanks for the kind words!

anyone else got any comments, criticism, etc?

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Post by Arshaw » Sun Nov 15, 2009 8:48 pm

Looking for feedback on this one:

http://soundcloud.com/kid_kuduro/not-en ... t-you-need

with give feedback obv. :e: :w:

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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by fuzz_2k » Sun Nov 15, 2009 9:35 pm

Kid Kuduro wrote:Looking for feedback on this one:

http://soundcloud.com/kid_kuduro/not-en ... t-you-need

with give feedback obv. :e: :w:
drums sound lovley n tight! The tune does progress but its seems slightly thin imo, mayb the
lack of sub bass?! Where it at?
I think with a nice sub sitting under it, it'll sound fat :twisted:

Any thought on the tune in my sig...............

ps dont listen it your hating on the midrange :D
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