Dispatch by Thawn (wobbler)

Thawn · Post by **Thawn** » Tue Nov 17, 2009 8:11 pm

Hi DSF, tis my first post here.

I have a track i think i have just finished, called Dispatch. Need as many pointers as i can get really

My main issue with this track is the flow of it really, have a listen and tell me what you think, theres a clip on myspace, ful version on soundcloud

links in sig, thanks

Thawn

darkmatteruk · Post by **darkmatteruk** » Tue Nov 17, 2009 10:03 pm

see what you mean by the flow of it, is a bit stop starty, not that thats a bad thing, could prob do with a few synth/string rises in places. cool track

Thawn · Post by **Thawn** » Tue Nov 17, 2009 11:18 pm

Thanks for the fb. Anyone else got anything good, or bad to say about this?

Really could do with some helpful pointers

Thawn · Post by **Thawn** » Wed Nov 18, 2009 1:56 pm

guess not lol

Thawn · Post by **Thawn** » Wed Nov 18, 2009 8:52 pm

Turning into what some might call an epic fail

Thawn · Post by **Thawn** » Fri Nov 20, 2009 6:04 pm

Last effort

wubber stumpper · Post by **wubber stumpper** » Fri Nov 20, 2009 9:27 pm

Dope track man, ever think of integrating some higher passed dnb/break session like havocNdeed use in that "Paris is Burning" remix? Try making it more interesting by switching shit up, maybe add an additional wub, ect.

wubber stumpper · Post by **wubber stumpper** » Fri Nov 20, 2009 9:28 pm

Thawn · Post by **Thawn** » Sat Nov 21, 2009 4:12 pm

wubber stumpper wrote:Dope track man, ever think of integrating some higher passed dnb/break session like havocNdeed use in that "Paris is Burning" remix? Try making it more interesting by switching shit up, maybe add an additional wub, ect.

I dont know that remix unfortunately, will get on the youtube case though.

Thanks for the comments, glad you liked it. I may try make some improvements to it, i have a few more in the works

Anyone else on it?

EDIT: I just noticed, towards the end theres a bit of a fuck up on this tune, bassline over a bassline, so if you get that far, dont watch that

aspect-dubz · Post by **aspect-dubz** » Sun Nov 22, 2009 12:10 am

nice man, im liking the off key approach on this one. good work

Thawn · Post by **Thawn** » Sun Nov 22, 2009 10:05 pm

Thankyou

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