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- CollisionCourse
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Pretty cool man. Liking the sub although sometimes it somehow sounds out of key.CollisionCourse wrote:anyone?
I think I wanna hear more FX bits to keep it interesting. I'm pretty sure there is a sub note out of key. It's worth putting it up a couple of octaves temporarily to make sure.
Interesting tune name. You been watching black hole documentaries?

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kruptah wrote:I play the technics.
My english teacher gave me a weird look when I mentioned that as the musical instrument I played. Like the wtf stare. I had to give her the 'wiki wiki' dj motion to confirm what i meant.
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just finish this track .:TEZZABYTES:. feed back would be great track is in signature
thanks
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Hi Peeps - There's some new bits that i have uploaded on my myspace page, come listen
- Lemmie know how you feel about them. Peace!!
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
brettheaslewood: awesome, riffs like that are the shit, what did you use to make the bass ?
thierry_le_dj: the part at 1:22 sounds like some bad sidechaining going on or something, and the part at 2:33 sounds a bit too saturated on my speakers... all in all not bad, a little repetitive but danceable
naus: you got some good ambient stuff going on there i like it, except the hi hats on trunk8 sound like they're on a one bar loop and sounds annoying if i think about it, or maybe i should just be focusing on the melodies on not nitpicking the minor rythmic elements lol
...and I never got any feedback on my song yet (in my sig)
thierry_le_dj: the part at 1:22 sounds like some bad sidechaining going on or something, and the part at 2:33 sounds a bit too saturated on my speakers... all in all not bad, a little repetitive but danceable
naus: you got some good ambient stuff going on there i like it, except the hi hats on trunk8 sound like they're on a one bar loop and sounds annoying if i think about it, or maybe i should just be focusing on the melodies on not nitpicking the minor rythmic elements lol
...and I never got any feedback on my song yet (in my sig)

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Muzzah wrote:Pretty cool man. Liking the sub although sometimes it somehow sounds out of key.CollisionCourse wrote:anyone?
I think I wanna hear more FX bits to keep it interesting. I'm pretty sure there is a sub note out of key. It's worth putting it up a couple of octaves temporarily to make sure.
Interesting tune name. You been watching black hole documentaries?

i knew id heard that term somewhere before
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New song up on my myspace called Heavy Rain, give it a listen and tell me what you think.
http://www.myspace.com/blindedwarlords
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Nice track bro! I like the minimal sound you got going on. In my personal opinion, some low sub and maybe a few stabs would bring it to life abit more.zonetrooper5 wrote:New song up on my myspace called Heavy Rain, give it a listen and tell me what you think.
http://www.myspace.com/blindedwarlords
Nice one!!

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I'm liking the live style samples for the drums man, but some of the synths sound a bit thin... maybe a bit more low-mid range in?
i love the synth work from 1:38 onwards.. very melodic
not too sure about the popping noise... its a bit loud in the mix and jarring
possibly a too compressed aswell but i'm not an expert on compression
ahhhh matethierry_le_dj wrote:just finish this track .:TEZZABYTES:. feed back would be great track is in signature
thanks

that bassline is sweet as but i feel it needs more variation
modulate a cut off that progresses
or some pads... just to give it a bit of depth
the bass that comes in at 2:34 sounds a bit fluffy though like its been limited too much?
moody as fuck man

i think the midrange bit that repeats needs a bit more bite though, only a little as i'm feeling the bassline vibe but the mids feel a little too sparse you know?
New Tune! Raze - The Sickness! (my first ever completed dubstep tune
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320 or WAV for any takers...
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- brettheaslewood
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cheers for the words man, as i was listnening to it yesterday, i did notice the glitch pop noise, was too loud in the mix, so that's gotta be taken out.Raze wrote:I'm liking the live style samples for the drums man, but some of the synths sound a bit thin... maybe a bit more low-mid range in?
i love the synth work from 1:38 onwards.. very melodic
not too sure about the popping noise... its a bit loud in the mix and jarring
possibly a too compressed aswell but i'm not an expert on compression
and i agree with you that i need to re-eq the synths

i'm really feeling that sickness track! what DAW you using? safe
kruptah wrote:I play the technics.
My english teacher gave me a weird look when I mentioned that as the musical instrument I played. Like the wtf stare. I had to give her the 'wiki wiki' dj motion to confirm what i meant.
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
i use ableton live with vanguard and waveform samples
i've got massive but never use it...
i've got massive but never use it...
New Tune! Raze - The Sickness! (my first ever completed dubstep tune
)
320 or WAV for any takers...
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yeh man really like this one. Maybe some sort of breakdown somewhere would add something ... really ggod though i love ir!!
Big up!
feel free to listen to my sig track n let me know whet you think. Thanks
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i got u son. but offer some feedback for me
sounds like murder not gonna lie to u lol killing robots and shit reminds me faintly of some Vex'd song
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@ tipwire 22
sounds good but maybe you should put the bass a bit more up front,
add some variation and you're done. the overall feel of the track is eerie, which gives it an original touch.
sounds good but maybe you should put the bass a bit more up front,
add some variation and you're done. the overall feel of the track is eerie, which gives it an original touch.
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naus - lovin the piano on the game. its got a real vintage sound to it too with a nice vynil crackle on
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