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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by Muzzah » Wed Nov 25, 2009 10:59 pm

CollisionCourse wrote:
CollisionCourse wrote:Soundcloud
:t:
anyone?
Pretty cool man. Liking the sub although sometimes it somehow sounds out of key.
I think I wanna hear more FX bits to keep it interesting. I'm pretty sure there is a sub note out of key. It's worth putting it up a couple of octaves temporarily to make sure.

Interesting tune name. You been watching black hole documentaries? 8)

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Post by brettheaslewood » Thu Nov 26, 2009 11:09 am

Soundcloud

:)

3rd/4th time into reason, 2nd track made within it :)
kruptah wrote:I play the technics.
My english teacher gave me a weird look when I mentioned that as the musical instrument I played. Like the wtf stare. I had to give her the 'wiki wiki' dj motion to confirm what i meant.

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Post by thierry_le_dj » Thu Nov 26, 2009 11:36 am

just finish this track .:TEZZABYTES:. feed back would be great track is in signature
thanks

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Post by naus » Thu Nov 26, 2009 1:41 pm

Hi Peeps - There's some new bits that i have uploaded on my myspace page, come listen :) - Lemmie know how you feel about them. Peace!!

www.myspace.com/naususn

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Post by rapsag111 » Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:34 pm

brettheaslewood: awesome, riffs like that are the shit, what did you use to make the bass ?

thierry_le_dj: the part at 1:22 sounds like some bad sidechaining going on or something, and the part at 2:33 sounds a bit too saturated on my speakers... all in all not bad, a little repetitive but danceable

naus: you got some good ambient stuff going on there i like it, except the hi hats on trunk8 sound like they're on a one bar loop and sounds annoying if i think about it, or maybe i should just be focusing on the melodies on not nitpicking the minor rythmic elements lol

...and I never got any feedback on my song yet (in my sig) :t:

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Post by CollisionCourse » Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:23 pm

Muzzah wrote:
CollisionCourse wrote:
CollisionCourse wrote:Soundcloud
:t:
anyone?
Pretty cool man. Liking the sub although sometimes it somehow sounds out of key.
I think I wanna hear more FX bits to keep it interesting. I'm pretty sure there is a sub note out of key. It's worth putting it up a couple of octaves temporarily to make sure.

Interesting tune name. You been watching black hole documentaries? 8)
:lol:
i knew id heard that term somewhere before

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Post by dark elixir » Thu Nov 26, 2009 9:18 pm

Soundcloud

this is a great idea there is some great tunes on here
:i:
HTTP://SOUNDCLOUD.COM/DARKELIXIR

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Post by zonetrooper5 » Fri Nov 27, 2009 1:59 am

New song up on my myspace called Heavy Rain, give it a listen and tell me what you think.

http://www.myspace.com/blindedwarlords

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Post by naus » Fri Nov 27, 2009 1:02 pm

zonetrooper5 wrote:New song up on my myspace called Heavy Rain, give it a listen and tell me what you think.

http://www.myspace.com/blindedwarlords
Nice track bro! I like the minimal sound you got going on. In my personal opinion, some low sub and maybe a few stabs would bring it to life abit more.

Nice one!! :D

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Post by Raze » Fri Nov 27, 2009 1:09 pm

brettheaslewood wrote:Soundcloud

:)

3rd/4th time into reason, 2nd track made within it :)
I'm liking the live style samples for the drums man, but some of the synths sound a bit thin... maybe a bit more low-mid range in?
i love the synth work from 1:38 onwards.. very melodic

not too sure about the popping noise... its a bit loud in the mix and jarring
possibly a too compressed aswell but i'm not an expert on compression
thierry_le_dj wrote:just finish this track .:TEZZABYTES:. feed back would be great track is in signature
thanks
ahhhh mate :D
that bassline is sweet as but i feel it needs more variation
modulate a cut off that progresses
or some pads... just to give it a bit of depth
the bass that comes in at 2:34 sounds a bit fluffy though like its been limited too much?
dark elixir wrote:Soundcloud

this is a great idea there is some great tunes on here
:i:
moody as fuck man :) i'm on that
i think the midrange bit that repeats needs a bit more bite though, only a little as i'm feeling the bassline vibe but the mids feel a little too sparse you know?
New Tune! Raze - The Sickness! (my first ever completed dubstep tune ;))
320 or WAV for any takers...
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Post by dj.c.jay » Fri Nov 27, 2009 1:41 pm

this one is finished I think

Soundcloud

Please leave feedback

cheers, C.Jay

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Post by brettheaslewood » Fri Nov 27, 2009 1:45 pm

Raze wrote:
brettheaslewood wrote:Soundcloud

:)

3rd/4th time into reason, 2nd track made within it :)
I'm liking the live style samples for the drums man, but some of the synths sound a bit thin... maybe a bit more low-mid range in?
i love the synth work from 1:38 onwards.. very melodic

not too sure about the popping noise... its a bit loud in the mix and jarring
possibly a too compressed aswell but i'm not an expert on compression
cheers for the words man, as i was listnening to it yesterday, i did notice the glitch pop noise, was too loud in the mix, so that's gotta be taken out.
and i agree with you that i need to re-eq the synths :) thanks for the words bro!
i'm really feeling that sickness track! what DAW you using? safe
kruptah wrote:I play the technics.
My english teacher gave me a weird look when I mentioned that as the musical instrument I played. Like the wtf stare. I had to give her the 'wiki wiki' dj motion to confirm what i meant.

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Post by Raze » Fri Nov 27, 2009 2:39 pm

i use ableton live with vanguard and waveform samples
i've got massive but never use it...
New Tune! Raze - The Sickness! (my first ever completed dubstep tune ;))
320 or WAV for any takers...
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Post by naus » Fri Nov 27, 2009 2:48 pm

dj.c.jay wrote:this one is finished I think

Soundcloud

Please leave feedback

cheers, C.Jay

yeh man really like this one. Maybe some sort of breakdown somewhere would add something ... really ggod though i love ir!!

Big up!

feel free to listen to my sig track n let me know whet you think. Thanks



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Post by tripwire22 » Fri Nov 27, 2009 5:16 pm

i got u son. but offer some feedback for me

sounds like murder not gonna lie to u lol killing robots and shit reminds me faintly of some Vex'd song

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Post by flownLess » Fri Nov 27, 2009 5:35 pm

@ tipwire 22

sounds good but maybe you should put the bass a bit more up front,
add some variation and you're done. the overall feel of the track is eerie, which gives it an original touch.

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Post by dj.c.jay » Fri Nov 27, 2009 6:29 pm

naus - lovin the piano on the game. its got a real vintage sound to it too with a nice vynil crackle on

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