New track

[k.i.]

This is my first finished track i have no monitors and was wondering on some advise.
flame away.
http://www.internetdj.com/artists.php?op=show&id=56029

[k.i.]

nobody wanna comment then? is it the way i hosted it. i don't have any hosting of my own maybe some body could sugest a better way to host an 8 mins long song.
If you just don't like the please say why but let me know why. The track is pretty shit but i am learning and need some advise.

[drift]

is it the way i hosted it. i don't have any hosting of my own maybe some body could sugest a better way to host an 8 mins long song.

hostings fine from over here man

( this is just my opinion mate )

the tracks got quite a muddy feel to it, a lot of the sounds are swamped in one another....may help too eq your sounds more, to give them there own space in the mix.. ( cutting low frequencies of your pads / drones etc )

the vibe is definitly suffocated by this.... some overall variation to the sequence / bass pattern may help, as it has quite a drone'y feel to it and can sound repetitive at times...

would definitly be worth investing in some moniters mate, theres a thread in here with some good ones too look out for.

you've got all the elements here K.I, keep it up man