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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by hayze99 » Fri Dec 04, 2009 10:27 pm

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Hey there. I never get advice from you bastards, but putting it in here anyway. Any advice will be returned! Promise! <3

EDIT: By the way - cynical, that track is a fucking baaaaanger. Think I could jump on and get a 320?

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Post by 5k1LLz » Sat Dec 05, 2009 12:20 pm

hi all, this is my first dubstep track(i think it's dubstep) so i would like you to comment and tell me if something's not quite right... :D

so here we go

5k1LLz - TanjaK vs RoR
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Post by Able8 » Sat Dec 05, 2009 3:07 pm

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posted a bunch of my tunes in the dub forum but thought id post this one here and if people liked it they could browse my other uploaded tunes... I'm mostly a hip hop guy but always been into synths and been doing dubstep production lately..Feel free to hit me up if you want vocals on a downtempo hip hop tune... for examples of my style check myspace.com/emceeable

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Post by j_one » Sat Dec 05, 2009 3:25 pm

Able8 wrote:Soundcloud

posted a bunch of my tunes in the dub forum but thought id post this one here and if people liked it they could browse my other uploaded tunes... I'm mostly a hip hop guy but always been into synths and been doing dubstep production lately..Feel free to hit me up if you want vocals on a downtempo hip hop tune... for examples of my style check myspace.com/emceeable
Nice track mate, I enjoyed that.

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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by CollisionCourse » Sat Dec 05, 2009 3:32 pm

hayze99 wrote:Soundcloud

Hey there. I never get advice from you bastards, but putting it in here anyway. Any advice will be returned! Promise! <3

EDIT: By the way - cynical, that track is a fucking baaaaanger. Think I could jump on and get a 320?
i like that, i like the synth and that drum break that comes in at 1:36 and 2:59, ive got into a habit of doing that in some of my tunes :lol:

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Post by cynical » Sat Dec 05, 2009 9:08 pm

Squalid wrote:
dj_yeoku wrote:
Squalid wrote:
brettheaslewood wrote:
cynical wrote:Pretty much finished this. Would like some feedback on how it sounds to you guys :)

Mstrkrft- Heartbreaker (Cynical-remix)
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really really really liking this remix! any chance of a 320, seriously, woah!
if I could get a 320 also I'd be forever grateful! Track is crazy.
agreed sick tune, 320 would be appreciated
Are you kidding? I've actually been bumming it on soundcloud haha. Release it and you've got my dollar.

I know you said you sent the 320 to all, but I haven't gotten anything yet, would be great if you could resend, cheers!
If anyone else wants it post here and I'll see what I can do :) http://www.dubstepforum.com/mstrkrft-he ... 17946.html

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Post by hayze99 » Sat Dec 05, 2009 10:02 pm

CollisionCourse wrote:
hayze99 wrote:Soundcloud

Hey there. I never get advice from you bastards, but putting it in here anyway. Any advice will be returned! Promise! <3

EDIT: By the way - cynical, that track is a fucking baaaaanger. Think I could jump on and get a 320?
i like that, i like the synth and that drum break that comes in at 1:36 and 2:59, ive got into a habit of doing that in some of my tunes :lol:
Cheers man. Listened to the first track on your soundcloud. The bass is fucking kiiiilller. Made all my uni papers fall of my desk. Got the mixdown perfect on it.

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Post by brettheaslewood » Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:02 am

djwom wrote:Soundcloud
good track!
love the intro :D are you giving any 320's away?
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Post by djchainz » Sun Dec 06, 2009 1:34 pm

You know charlie the unicorn? Remixed..

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btw thats a free 320 download as well :)
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Post by reignstep » Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:53 pm

djchainz wrote:You know charlie the unicorn? Remixed..

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btw thats a free 320 download as well :)
Hmm i get the feeling your bassline isn't fitting in, like your LFO rate is abit off, making it not match with your drums.. i think if you'd fix that the song wud be a real banger ;-)

@djworm: fuckin nice bro, nothing to add , i went completely mental at the drop . 320 plx

@Vokkal: real nice track aswell, the flow is just perfect, you know when to change your bass so it doesn't get boring. Awesome track right there, I wouldn't mind a 320 either

here's a new of me, i couldn't get it on soundcloud so it's once again on Newgrounds:

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/293663

peace,

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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by CollisionCourse » Sun Dec 06, 2009 4:22 pm

hayze99 wrote:
CollisionCourse wrote:
hayze99 wrote:Soundcloud

Hey there. I never get advice from you bastards, but putting it in here anyway. Any advice will be returned! Promise! <3

EDIT: By the way - cynical, that track is a fucking baaaaanger. Think I could jump on and get a 320?
i like that, i like the synth and that drum break that comes in at 1:36 and 2:59, ive got into a habit of doing that in some of my tunes :lol:
Cheers man. Listened to the first track on your soundcloud. The bass is fucking kiiiilller. Made all my uni papers fall of my desk. Got the mixdown perfect on it.
yeah its too loud though need to edit it but cant atm as what i was using is in repair :(
needs some compression and eqing aswell, forgot to do it first time round

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Post by Vokkal » Sun Dec 06, 2009 4:27 pm

reignz wrote:
@Vokkal: real nice track aswell, the flow is just perfect, you know when to change your bass so it doesn't get boring. Awesome track right there, I wouldn't mind a 320 either
Thanks! I will wait with 320s. ;)

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Post by miniweapon » Sun Dec 06, 2009 8:15 pm

[quote="hayze99"]Soundcloud

Hey there. I never get advice from you bastards, but putting it in here anyway. Any advice will be returned! Promise! <3

i dig what you have but i feel like its kinda repetitive. If your using logic mess around with the ringshifter the frequency mod on it will add some extra grim and help with the repetitiveness

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Post by polygonfiction » Sun Dec 06, 2009 10:47 pm

hayze99 wrote:Soundcloud

Hey there. I never get advice from you bastards, but putting it in here anyway. Any advice will be returned! Promise! <3

i dig what you have but i feel like its kinda repetitive. If your using logic mess around with the ringshifter the frequency mod on it will add some extra grim and help with the repetitiveness
The mix is good and I like the melody. I'd say try shifting the wave form for the wub. A 5th formant or TX wave might produce more characterful results. Its fine as it is, just sounds stereotypical to me.
Apatic wrote:Soundcloud
Nice man, like it a lot. Great range with the drums - sparce and good width.. I don't have any suggestions tbh.


Here's mine - been working on this the last couple of days.

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Post by stealthtactics » Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:21 pm

Hey,

I just finished this track tonight, using ableton live and reason... Hope you like it and pls, feedback is appreciated:

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Much respect :e:

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Post by pets bud » Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:22 pm

2 new ones. Feedback appreciated if any.


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