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- CollisionCourse
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heres something ive started, feedback please!
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I really like the track, really atmospheric and the drop is awesome - loving the sub-bass. Rather short but I presume you're working on that nowCollisionCourse wrote:heres something ive started, feedback please!
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My effort:
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Any feedback would be appreciated - apologies for the awful mixing things always sound much worse on soundcloud.
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real nice sounds man, love the saxophone, an piano, sort of the jazzy thingLTUK wrote: Any feedback would be appreciated - apologies for the awful mixing things always sound much worse on soundcloud.

maybe the hi hats could be a bit more flamboyant? Like more open and less synced up? Its lready pretty groovy but maybe a bit more?
I think there needs to be more of a change up in the bass line though mid way. Not a fan when it gets distorted, doesn't really suit the track... instead what about like a long sub sound, not much lfo on it with a different melody? Liking this style alot man

Not sure about the intro mate, the sounds you got are great, but the tune seems a bit chirpy for the dark mood... Subs fantastic... beat sounds quite hip hoppy, but i guess thats just opinion. The drop i'm not too sure about, that kind of drum roll only really works for up beat music, something like cutting away the music completely for the drop and then have that pre drop sound come in? Pads getting more and more present in the mix? I like that lead sound though! is that something thats been sampled?CollisionCourse wrote:heres something ive started, feedback please!
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Hey, I've been doing this track for couple of days, would be nice to hear some feedback on what i might add or adjust/change. Im out of ideas atm..
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basma wrote:Hey, I've been doing this track for couple of days, would be nice to hear some feedback on what i might add or adjust/change. Im out of ideas atm..![]()
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really nice - your production sounds tight - keep at it
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Second production over the Christmas period.. not sure how to describe - quite mellow, chopped vocals, simple structure, heavy sub - all the things I like about dubstep.
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Good tune, but just screams for some compression and a touch of limiting on the Master bus. You can see that just from the waveform.CollisionCourse wrote:heres something ive started, feedback please!
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I like everything about that other than the vinyl dust and the kick sample, which sounds distorted. On the whole, though, pretty solid.jackdixon wrote:Second production over the Christmas period.. not sure how to describe - quite mellow, chopped vocals, simple structure, heavy sub - all the things I like about dubstep.
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- CollisionCourse
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@LTUK: thanks for the feedback. yeah the intro probably is long compared to the rest of it but thats only cus ive spent the most time on it. when its finnished it should be about 5-6 mins long so it wont be as bad.
@last & least: again thanks for the advice, i agree about the drop, i think im used to making tunes with those kind of build ups and i rushed it. and no its not i rarely sample. id like to get into it, but i think im just too lazy
@bodega: yes i know lmao i was kind of focusing the sounds themselves but once i got it started like i said before i rushed it. ill get to it though dont worry
@last & least: again thanks for the advice, i agree about the drop, i think im used to making tunes with those kind of build ups and i rushed it. and no its not i rarely sample. id like to get into it, but i think im just too lazy

@bodega: yes i know lmao i was kind of focusing the sounds themselves but once i got it started like i said before i rushed it. ill get to it though dont worry

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what does this track need it sounds so boring and 2-dimensional, can someone push me in the right direction please
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Hiya guys!
FIRST POST! im new here :]
Anyways, i'd like some feedback on this thing im working on.
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I am willing to give feedback in return aswell :]
FIRST POST! im new here :]
Anyways, i'd like some feedback on this thing im working on.
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I am willing to give feedback in return aswell :]
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Nice ambience that I'm hearing at the start mate, but I think when the drums enter, they are a bit weak, and you need to use some more solid drum samples to make your beat sound more clear and powerful. Not bad from what I heard thoughHiya guys!
FIRST POST! im new here :]
Anyways, i'd like some feedback on this thing im working on.
http://soundcloud.com/impactt/demo
I am willing to give feedback in return aswell :]

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hey hey!alexwright wrote:Nice ambience that I'm hearing at the start mate, but I think when the drums enter, they are a bit weak, and you need to use some more solid drum samples to make your beat sound more clear and powerful. Not bad from what I heard thoughHiya guys!
FIRST POST! im new here :]
Anyways, i'd like some feedback on this thing im working on.
http://soundcloud.com/impactt/demo
I am willing to give feedback in return aswell :]
Thanks for the feedback, yeah i noticed the drum samples i used arrn't really.. Powerfull and clear, (specially not when i compare myself with RedLine) but i m having pretty much troubles finding some good clear powerful sounding drum samples on the net.. Do you maybe have an idea were i could get some better ones? i have checked out the Production Bible thing on here but couldnt find anything good on drum samples.. or was i being very blind and didnt look well-enough.. ? Anyhows, Thanks again, for the feedback :]
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Heh
Drum samples are everywhere mate, a good series of Sample Packs that are good quality are called Vengeance, athough they are used by ALOT of producers nowadays so I would probably recommend doing a bit of searching to find something a bit different so your tracks stand out from everybody elses. Just look on google or something and search for Dubstep Drum Packs or something. Hey, you don't even have to look for Dubstep sample packs, you can use any style sample packs to give your productions that unique sound. Hope that helps 


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Thanks for the tip :] i Deffo will give the search another try ^__^alexwright wrote:HehDrum samples are everywhere mate, a good series of Sample Packs that are good quality are called Vengeance, athough they are used by ALOT of producers nowadays so I would probably recommend doing a bit of searching to find something a bit different so your tracks stand out from everybody elses. Just look on google or something and search for Dubstep Drum Packs or something. Hey, you don't even have to look for Dubstep sample packs, you can use any style sample packs to give your productions that unique sound. Hope that helps
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just wanted some feedback on how this track sounds so far, still stuff i need to touch up on and execute the final mixdown.
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Mate I'm really liking your grooves and rythms, your synths and sounds aren't too bad, and your drums aren't either, except from your bass drum I think, I think it should have more punch and sound less like a bass drum from a drum kit (IMO anywayjust wanted some feedback on how this track sounds so far, still stuff i need to touch up on and execute the final mixdown.
http://soundcloud.com/artekular/passing-breeze-demo


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still wip
levels aren't brilliant atm
if the soundcloud link isn't working check myspace - http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fu ... =492879610
still wip

levels aren't brilliant atm
if the soundcloud link isn't working check myspace - http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fu ... =492879610
kruptah wrote:I play the technics.
My english teacher gave me a weird look when I mentioned that as the musical instrument I played. Like the wtf stare. I had to give her the 'wiki wiki' dj motion to confirm what i meant.
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cheers man, trying to make some space with the lower frequencies so the bass drum isnt so drowned out. might try putting in a punchy kick though and see how that works out.alexwright wrote:Mate I'm really liking your grooves and rythms, your synths and sounds aren't too bad, and your drums aren't either, except from your bass drum I think, I think it should have more punch and sound less like a bass drum from a drum kit (IMO anywayjust wanted some feedback on how this track sounds so far, still stuff i need to touch up on and execute the final mixdown.
http://soundcloud.com/artekular/passing-breeze-demo) Nice music aswell, sounds like you know your theory quite well too
and now you mention it, i actually know nothing about theory!

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hideouz wrote:what does this track need it sounds so boring and 2-dimensional, can someone push me in the right direction please![]()
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