Sounds alot like 50cent - wankstajam1 wrote:My first attempt at making a tune. Pretty simple stuff, all done in Reason 4. Let me know what you think please guys!
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After listening to said tune on Youtube (I can gladly say I've never heard it before), I see where you're coming from!bifta wrote:Sounds alot like 50cent - wankstajam1 wrote:My first attempt at making a tune. Pretty simple stuff, all done in Reason 4. Let me know what you think please guys!
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I'll get my coat....
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Hi
Here is a track that is 'finished' but its virtually unmixed and unmastered. I would love
some tips before I do.
thanks
Pyro
www.soundcloud.com/lordpyro - the track is called the cookbook!
Here is a track that is 'finished' but its virtually unmixed and unmastered. I would love
some tips before I do.
thanks
Pyro
www.soundcloud.com/lordpyro - the track is called the cookbook!
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sweet, nice and darklordpyro wrote:Hi
Here is a track that is 'finished' but its virtually unmixed and unmastered. I would love
some tips before I do.
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http://www.soundcloud.com/lordpyro - the track is called the cookbook!
try automating your bass lfos to switch up the tune
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your synth sound is a bit hard on the ears but the beat is nicebifta wrote:Soundcloud
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nice gangsta rap vibe, sound could be thickened up a bitdrenster wrote:Hey a track i would like you to listen to before i finish it up. let me know what you think anything is appreciated. thanks and peace!
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Here's the latest. More of a Loefah/Digital Mystikz sound this time. Long tune too, 9:32!
Post some feedback and comments and I'll gladly return the favor.
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Post some feedback and comments and I'll gladly return the favor.
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@djaccel - Good laid back vibes, and the mix sounds pretty good to me. However, don't DJs prefer shorter songs, like 3-5 min? I suggest you cut yours up and just keep your favorite parts to shorten it up, like maybe cut out half of each verse--I just did that to my current song that was 6 mins with lots of variation, I shortened it to 4 and it sounds more focused.
@lordpyro - i think it could be punchier, like maybe make the snare more central
Would like to know what you guys think the song in my sig... I'm just mixing with headphones so i dunno if i got the sub right
@lordpyro - i think it could be punchier, like maybe make the snare more central
Would like to know what you guys think the song in my sig... I'm just mixing with headphones so i dunno if i got the sub right
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Pitchdownplease wrote:Always time for a first post, only recently started producing, would just like some feedback on my first project
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Just thought Id look for final feedback on this before moving it over to the finished section.
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Im unsure to wether the bass is sitting and thinking of overhauling it.
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LOLbifta wrote:Sounds alot like 50cent - wankstajam1 wrote:My first attempt at making a tune. Pretty simple stuff, all done in Reason 4. Let me know what you think please guys!
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+Nice Mixdowndjaccel wrote:Here's the latest. More of a Loefah/Digital Mystikz sound this time. Long tune too, 9:32!
Post some feedback and comments and I'll gladly return the favor.
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+Nice vibe, sounds exactly like the style you were going for
-Doesn't need to be that long. Could cut out half of each section and not lose anything.
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sweet track, everything sits nice, just edit it down mandjaccel wrote:Here's the latest. More of a Loefah/Digital Mystikz sound this time. Long tune too, 9:32!
Post some feedback and comments and I'll gladly return the favor.
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agree with everyone on that its a great track def sounds like DMZ but its long as helldjaccel wrote:Here's the latest. More of a Loefah/Digital Mystikz sound this time. Long tune too, 9:32!
Post some feedback and comments and I'll gladly return the favor.
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First remix I've done rough 1st draft
[sounndcloud]http://soundcloud.com/jaydot/delerium-s ... step-remix[/soundcloud]
let me know your thoughts.
J.
[sounndcloud]http://soundcloud.com/jaydot/delerium-s ... step-remix[/soundcloud]
let me know your thoughts.
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rapsag111 wrote:@djaccel - Good laid back vibes, and the mix sounds pretty good to me. However, don't DJs prefer shorter songs, like 3-5 min? I suggest you cut yours up and just keep your favorite parts to shorten it up, like maybe cut out half of each verse--I just did that to my current song that was 6 mins with lots of variation, I shortened it to 4 and it sounds more focused.
ketamine wrote: +Nice Mixdown
+Nice vibe, sounds exactly like the style you were going for
-Doesn't need to be that long. Could cut out half of each section and not lose anything.
deadnoisesystem wrote: sweet track, everything sits nice, just edit it down man
tripwire22 wrote:
agree with everyone on that its a great track def sounds like DMZ but its long as hell
Thanks for the feedback guys, just cut it down a bit, here's the slimmed up version!
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new track in signature!
see what you think..
see what you think..
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nice sample, sound is very thin, needs beefing up quite considerably, the beats first then drop another sub under the bassjaydot wrote:First remix I've done rough 1st draft
[sounndcloud]http://soundcloud.com/jaydot/delerium-s ... step-remix[/soundcloud]
let me know your thoughts.
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Bassline loosely sounds like Chase n Stay's running.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Smm93h254OY
Could just be my ears and lack of sleep however
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