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Kochari · Post by **Kochari** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 2:31 am

junior spesh wrote:Soundcloud

Chinese influenced dubsteo/grime track... DROP FEEDBACK... AS USUAL I WILL RETURN IT!!!

i like this a lot, the chinese...thing \9i dont know the name!) sounds wicked and fits really well, and the bass has a lovely squelchy feel. the one thing i would say is that the drums are maybe a little repetitive (though i am guilty of this as well), perhaps add in some crazy percussion at certain points and such?

icebagg · Post by **icebagg** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 3:45 am

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icebagg · Post by **icebagg** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 3:49 am

Pitchdownplease wrote:
icebagg wrote:Soundcloud

please critique this!!! any input much appreciated!!!

Bassline loosely sounds like Chase n Stay's running.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Smm93h254OY
Could just be my ears and lack of sleep however

does sound similar, though this wasnt influenced by that song, nice observation though! hope you like the tune!

icebagg · Post by **icebagg** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 3:53 am

junior spesh wrote:Soundcloud

Chinese influenced dubsteo/grime track... DROP FEEDBACK... AS USUAL I WILL RETURN IT!!!

I like it, only thing...the sample/synth you used in the beginning is a little too messy, i would try to smooth it out, otherwise pretty good tune

twobeans · Post by **twobeans** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 4:27 am

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This isn't the latest version of this, but it is the one I have uploaded to SC. The latest version just have the levels played with a little.

icebagg · Post by **icebagg** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 4:55 am

two beans wrote:Soundcloud

This isn't the latest version of this, but it is the one I have uploaded to SC. The latest version just have the levels played with a little.

I'd like to hear the finished version!

rdub · Post by **rdub** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 5:14 am

Hey guys, I am very very new to dubstep production and I have been messing around in FL and have come up with this so far! but the thing is that I am not even sure if I am on the right track so I am posting this so that one of you can hopefully guide me in the right direction for dub production so let me know what you think and what I need to improve on!! ps. It is a very noob track so far but I think I am getting it after reading lots of things on the dsf.

http://www6.zippyshare.com/v/75297970/file.html <-------- TRACK HERE

Sorry I dont have soundcloud..

icebagg · Post by **icebagg** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 8:55 am

rdub wrote:Hey guys, I am very very new to dubstep production and I have been messing around in FL and have come up with this so far! but the thing is that I am not even sure if I am on the right track so I am posting this so that one of you can hopefully guide me in the right direction for dub production so let me know what you think and what I need to improve on!! ps. It is a very noob track so far but I think I am getting it after reading lots of things on the dsf.

http://www6.zippyshare.com/v/75297970/file.html <-------- TRACK HERE
Sorry I dont have soundcloud..

nice start, your more or less on the right track. i wouldnt worry too much about structure (most dubstep songs have a structure unique to themselves) but since your just starting i would stick with 4/4 structure, its easy on the ears. any specific questions? Ive been producing for about 5 years now might be able to help you out. i would check out the production forums about eq and compression, as well as modulation (reverb, distortion, etc...)

jaydot · Post by **jaydot** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 11:20 am

Typed the tags wrong before:

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I know what I need to do with this:

Sub bass under main bass

Sort the drop out because it doesn't fit with the track.

Fatten it out more.

Anyone else got any other suggestions?

Thanks.

J.

riproarious · Post by **riproarious** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 11:26 am

Feedback, feedback, feedback! .. Please

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Thanks!

grahamcody · Post by **grahamcody** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 11:32 am

So I've been producing for a while [about 7 years] experimenting with different styles, and i recently discovered dubstep, so i figured id give it a shot. This is my first attempt at a dubstep track, and I used Logic 9. Any feedback would be appreciated. This track is a remix of Esser - Headlock (original track with video here:) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HHQCOkSGnKs

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junior spesh · Post by **junior spesh** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 12:42 pm

icebagg wrote:
junior spesh wrote:Soundcloud

Chinese influenced dubsteo/grime track... DROP FEEDBACK... AS USUAL I WILL RETURN IT!!!
I like it, only thing...the sample/synth you used in the beginning is a little too messy, i would try to smooth it out, otherwise pretty good tune

yh man thanx.. my new seinheisser headphones hae arrived so ill able 2 clean up dese tunes properly now!

Anything u want feedback on??

deadnoisesystem · Post by **deadnoisesystem** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 1:45 pm

grahamcody wrote:So I've been producing for a while [about 7 years] experimenting with different styles, and i recently discovered dubstep, so i figured id give it a shot. This is my first attempt at a dubstep track, and I used Logic 9. Any feedback would be appreciated. This track is a remix of Esser - Headlock (original track with video here:) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HHQCOkSGnKs

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imacculate production, what you using?
edit; i didnt read your post properly, logic 9!
might have to upgrade myself

deadnoisesystem · Post by **deadnoisesystem** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 2:29 pm

work in progress, what do you all think?
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riproarious · Post by **riproarious** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 7:24 pm

Sorry to re-post, but everyone just skips over mine..

Can I get any feedback?

You can tell me the track is shit if you like..

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cronicle · Post by **cronicle** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 8:59 pm

was wondering if anyone could give me feedback on this? any tips for improvements would be appreciated.
i have only been producing for a year or so using fl studio. this track was made entirely with fl7.
http://soundcloud.com/cronicle/the-begining-unfinished

riproarious · Post by **riproarious** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 9:24 pm

cronicle wrote:was wondering if anyone could give me feedback on this? any tips for improvements would be appreciated.
i have only been producing for a year or so using fl studio. this track was made entirely with fl7.
http://soundcloud.com/cronicle/the-begining-unfinished

Your intro sound a little too muffled. I'd try and crisp it up a bit.
Your basics are really good, might want to add some sub-bass, but thats just me

Might want a little more meat on it... (Bass or Glitches etc)

deadnoisesystem · Post by **deadnoisesystem** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 9:29 pm

riproarious wrote:Sorry to re-post, but everyone just skips over mine..

Can I get any feedback?

You can tell me the track is shit if you like..

Soundcloud

strange tune, very abstract. dont be afraid to drop the obvious wobble and experiment
cut the beat up some too

miretz · Post by **miretz** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 9:37 pm

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riproarious · Post by **riproarious** » Wed Jan 06, 2010 9:59 pm

deadnoisesystem wrote:work in progress, what do you all think?
Soundcloud

I like it, very relaxing, trancey tune.
I would personally make it little dryer (EQ) and maybe add a few bass notes.
But it could completely change the vibe of the track..

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