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Post by metzz » Sat Jan 30, 2010 12:28 am

new thing im trying to do

using reason and fruity :D

let me know what you think. ill reply feedback to anyone aswell :)

constructive crit?

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Post by Subside » Sat Jan 30, 2010 1:58 am

edit: didn't mean to post here sorry

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Sat Jan 30, 2010 11:14 am

metzz wrote:new thing im trying to do

using reason and fruity :D

let me know what you think. ill reply feedback to anyone aswell :)

constructive crit?

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that synth is naughty,
beat needs to be louder
good work

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Sat Jan 30, 2010 11:14 am

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Sat Jan 30, 2010 11:16 am

samkablaam wrote:
brettheaslewood wrote:
j-one wrote: Soundcloud
really liking this one mate,really like that glitch vocal line and that high synth!
agree, understated and really nice. think the vocals could be touched up a bit, but i really like it
me too, exactly what these two said

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Sat Jan 30, 2010 11:20 am

LordBid wrote:Hey everybody, this is my first attempt at a track, I mixed it while bored as shit at work on my laptop speakers, so obv its not quite right, also there is no sub or eqing its pretty much just to see if I could poop a song out with everything I have learned thus far. I basically decided to start learning about music two months ago before that having no knowledge whatsoever other than being a fan of electronica

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tell me what you think as far as structure and melody goes, and yes I know its not quite proper because its not in clean multiples of four etc...

nice wobble work, nice stuff mate, if thats your first effort then you got a lot to look forward to


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Post by samkablaam » Sat Jan 30, 2010 2:38 pm

samkablaam wrote:
i know its not dubstep, but i think this forums so useful, so...
house/tech remix of lollipop preliminary mix, want some feedback on 2.30 minutes onwards basically. and if anyone can recommend a good orchestral vst (preferably free)

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Sat Jan 30, 2010 3:59 pm

samkablaam wrote:
samkablaam wrote:
i know its not dubstep, but i think this forums so useful, so...
house/tech remix of lollipop preliminary mix, want some feedback on 2.30 minutes onwards basically. and if anyone can recommend a good orchestral vst (preferably free)

thanks

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not really my thing but its well done, intros a bit long
as for orchestral vst i use the orchestra jampack for garageband

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Post by junior spesh » Sat Jan 30, 2010 5:55 pm

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Sat Jan 30, 2010 7:25 pm

junior spesh wrote:CATCHY NEW TUNE: MAGICIAN

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ent got feedback in here for a while so i would appreciate sum, especially as i drop feedback on bare people's! lol

TELL ME WHAT U WANT FEEDBACK ON ASWELL
nice wobbles, tight production
i would switch it up a bit and put some delay on the main melody
can i get a little on this w i p?
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Post by Moonloop » Sat Jan 30, 2010 8:49 pm

heres a track ive been working on recently, tell me what you guys think
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Post by Subside » Sun Jan 31, 2010 1:45 am

So I am brand new to production and have no musical background at all but here is my first track I have put together. It's nowhere near done or anything I just want to leave it here for constructive criticism and to see what you guys think of it for being the first thing I've ever made. Thanks in advance :D

Edit: Ignore the vocal sample I don't intend on keeping it and I am still learning how to make a good bass sound also the tune isn't properly mixed or have any equalization done.
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Post by JemGrover » Sun Jan 31, 2010 4:20 am

Moonloop wrote:heres a track ive been working on recently, tell me what you guys think
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Love the little sub Drops.. Personaly thing that it might benifit from some stabs ( horns, or something? ) during the quiet piano part every so often. :D

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Post by JemGrover » Sun Jan 31, 2010 4:25 am

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Roughly set out intro's to two tracks... Which one sounds more promising?

( 1st track not meant to be repeated but I can't be arsed to re-upload it to Soundcloud again, ha )

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Sun Jan 31, 2010 11:52 am

Moonloop wrote:heres a track ive been working on recently, tell me what you guys think
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heavy tune, love the piano delay and the second drop

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Post by kontigobeats » Sun Jan 31, 2010 12:21 pm

Moonloop that track is nice, feeling the delay piano, and the bass melody n rhythm is good! keep it up.
feedback on my track appreciated people, some nice synths n melodies in this one!
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Post by louissmusic » Sun Jan 31, 2010 4:13 pm

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here's a wobbler for you lot. :lol: havent made one for a while so im a bit russty havent added the sub or the whole b section yet, this is just the intro drop a section and it leads up to the second drop

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Post by dubsteppahdan » Sun Jan 31, 2010 6:32 pm

This is my first crack at dubstep was just wanting a bit of feedback on what ive done so far and some advice on what to add or maybe tweak and change...btw this is very early stages ive only bin working on it for a day :e:

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Post by CollisionCourse » Sun Jan 31, 2010 7:39 pm

@ louissmusic
that sounds nice, i like how it drops from the retro melody to hardcore bassline. the bassline i think needs more sub, and make it a bit louder, the drums seem to take over everything, spesh on the break at the end.

@ dubsteppahdan
im alsmost embarressed at how everyones first dubstep tunes are better than mine were :cry: oh well
this is good, drums sounds nice and clean. its very well produced, nice work. id probably throw in a different synth at the beggining but thats just me.

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