New track im working on

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http://www32.zippyshare.com/v/92674811/file.html
i know, i just started it... feedback??

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I wanna listen but post it streaming so it deosnt need downloading if u can.......

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I'd say it needs more beats but as its in progress im guessing u were already planning to do that, I think the kick drum should not be a bass tom as it outways the bassline 2 much and also its not the same notes as the bass so it sort of clashes, maybe just a electronic drum kick instead of them tom things with the resonating bass, its a nice start but its a bit empty at the moment to really get a feel of where ur goi ng, nice start to a track tho.

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