really different and chill i like
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- tripwire22
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Please excuse my feedback being quite opinionated, I don't know how to give feedback whilst being critical in any other way!
Anyway, it's a very well produced track as expected!
Nice drums and of course bass, but I can't help but feel that it's slightly too minimal (which I'm pretty sure is intended)... I found it a little bit 'background music', which is perfect for when I'm writing up research or something, but I feel the track has the potential to be something a little more attention grabbing... I'm talking about incorporating some sort of motif, even if a very little one...
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Loving that one mate.aux wrote:ezzz all,
my partner (Elemiz) and I just uploaded a track on soundcloud, see what ya think.
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Safe man, I dropped you a comment on soundcloud for trance dub.tripwire22 wrote:big track loving the percussion man. nice little things in this one make the track big alot of attention to details i see.
Thanks for the feedback, I some-what agree - I thought of taking it a bit more hypey but i just don't have it "in" me, maybe i'll let it sit for a bit, I also only give critical feed back and expect the same back hahah!wirez wrote:Soundcloud
This tracks quite nice! I like the intro and the vocal usages and the bassline, a lot - I feel they all flow really well! The guitar is great too, I feel it brings a lot to the track.
Though I say that I am not keen on the drums, all to much I was expecting something really acoustic and metal breakdown-esque, I feel this track is a "stomper" instead of a roller but the drums are rolling and the rest of the track is stomping. If it was me, i'd drop the 909 hats and replace with acoustic samples, space them out a bit more, get a more organic kick, but thats me !
Big track though!
SoundcloudSoulstep wrote: My point is i just wanna hear more vibes
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As I've been given 0 (say zero) comments, I'm reposting my choonbaddub wrote:Soundcloud

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Thats serious man! Can't believe you have 0 commments, I really like the relationship between the guitar and the drums, it goes slight off but not in a off-putting way.baddub wrote:As I've been given 0 (say zero) comments, I'm reposting my choonbaddub wrote:Soundcloud
keep it up! I will be keeping an eye on you if you're making tunes like that!
SoundcloudSoulstep wrote: My point is i just wanna hear more vibes
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Haha safe man, to be honest I am some-what more of a chilled sound producer myself, I just needed the energy in that particular track to suit the remix (as you could tell, the original was a high energy metal track).legend4ry wrote:Thanks for the feedback, I some-what agree - I thought of taking it a bit more hypey but i just don't have it "in" me, maybe i'll let it sit for a bit, I also only give critical feed back and expect the same back hahah!wirez wrote:Soundcloud
This tracks quite nice! I like the intro and the vocal usages and the bassline, a lot - I feel they all flow really well! The guitar is great too, I feel it brings a lot to the track.
Though I say that I am not keen on the drums, all to much I was expecting something really acoustic and metal breakdown-esque, I feel this track is a "stomper" instead of a roller but the drums are rolling and the rest of the track is stomping. If it was me, i'd drop the 909 hats and replace with acoustic samples, space them out a bit more, get a more organic kick, but thats me !
Big track though!
As for the 909 Hats, fuck me I'm surprised how much of a specific sound they must have for you to notice lol although, that sound was intended... The only things with 'my' sound in them in that track was probably the 'old school Dance-influenced' drums, the sub bass and the break downs haha, without them I'd feel like I was cheating myself and jumping on the 'filth' boat like a lot seem to be these days!
I'm quite a novice in Metal composition man, I just went with the flow of the track, I was sent all dry stems so had to build everything from the ground up, I incorporated the snare rolls from the original track but didn't feel the rest of the original sounds were right for my style of production so went with what I know, the Dance drums

I appreciate your feedback man, I learnt a lot from that remix and the feedback received from it will help even further for future remixes with fused styles such as these

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Thank you !tripwire22 wrote:really different and chill i like
- CollisionCourse
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Despite it being drum and bass tempo and the track being predominantly drums and bass... For some reason I won't allow myself to class this track as drum and bass, I think it may simply be the lack of sampled break... I quite like this track though! Like the Hip Hop sort of snare and the deep kick... The entire track seems to be lacking higher frequencies which is making it seem a bit muddy though, seems like you have placed a LPF on everything including the hats...
The track has a really nice feel and a really nice use of instruments too... Just needs some high frequencies in there to stop it seeming so muddy!
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Niiiccce tune mate...only checking it on my laptop speakers but will take it into the studio tomorrow night and check it on my Mackies! Love the bass sounds (acid sounds goood).
Nice,
Tony
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Second finished track is up, hit me up if you like it.
http://soundcloud.com/astraldubstep/ast ... e-entities
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http://soundcloud.com/astraldubstep/ast ... e-entities
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For Production Tips Guides and Files:http://secondrateaudio.blogspot.com
For My Tunes: http://soundcloud.com/astraldubstep/
For My Tunes: http://soundcloud.com/astraldubstep/
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Thanks for the feedback. Personally I really like the contrast of the sharp bassline against the soft and deep back. But thanks for noting it.tripwire22 wrote:This is personal taste but i like everything but the sound you chose for the wobble bass it really doesnt fit the nice things under it like im guessing its a guitar and the percussions. i would personally do with out it and bring everything else up in the mix. maybe find another sound to replace the bass or make it sound less harsh against the other thingssavox wrote:So I just started here on dubstepforum and on souldcloud as well so I'm really curious as to what you think about this Deep Dubstep track I finished yesterday.
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ive got a new promo mix for download HERE... along with A FREE DUBSTEP EP! of my all original tunes.. hope you all can enjoy..
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http://www.studionascere.com/music/myki ... /mix/2010/
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visit my myspace for more info.
myspace.com/themakeroflove
or my facebook.
thank all of you for the support. plz feel free to email, Mykie@studionascere.com for any info / booking...
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http://www.studionascere.com/music/myki ... /mix/2010/
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visit my myspace for more info.
myspace.com/themakeroflove
or my facebook.
thank all of you for the support. plz feel free to email, Mykie@studionascere.com for any info / booking...
- sighnaturedubstep
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SHIT STAIN! ha, didnt see this untill now, wouldve posted this here in the first place
http://www.mediafire.com/?jwjtjmzn2eg
hope everyone enjoys this one, listening to alot of the dubz on here and theres alot of sick talent
bigup
http://www.mediafire.com/?jwjtjmzn2eg
hope everyone enjoys this one, listening to alot of the dubz on here and theres alot of sick talent
bigup
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thanks mate!wirez wrote:Loving that one mate.aux wrote:ezzz all,
my partner (Elemiz) and I just uploaded a track on soundcloud, see what ya think.
Soundcloud

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I reupped this after doing a few changes, would love to hear what people think. Its a bit more heavy
Soundcloud
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For Production Tips Guides and Files:http://secondrateaudio.blogspot.com
For My Tunes: http://soundcloud.com/astraldubstep/
For My Tunes: http://soundcloud.com/astraldubstep/
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Hello, been producing for about 6 months now and just got to a stage where im happy with my finished tracks. Any feedback would be great!
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BTW im pretty new forums so if the soundcloud doesnt work, its just me being a tard.
sminch!
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BTW im pretty new forums so if the soundcloud doesnt work, its just me being a tard.
sminch!
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