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Post by cleanexecution » Thu Feb 04, 2010 12:42 pm

yeh, some toonage. any tips anyone? any polishes in need? let me know..
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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:06 pm

flownLess wrote:at deadnoisesystem,
i like the melody but the bass is too distorted and not enough variated.
what kind of filters do you use?
thanks mate, ive been varying the bassline more in the latest version, the wobble is quite harsh? or the sub?
the filters on this tune are part of the vst, subboombass by rob papen. my new favourite vst

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:09 pm

cleanexecution wrote:yeh, some toonage. any tips anyone? any polishes in need? let me know..
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yeah mate, that is rude
all it needs is a good mastering

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:12 pm

darronatkinson wrote:Soundcloud


This is my first attempt at dubstep.

It is a remix project for college

any suggestions for improvements would be great
nice work mate
bring the vocals up in the mix a bit
be prepared to cut them a bit to make em fit right
mastering plug in like izotope ozone would do wonders on this too

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:15 pm

LTUK wrote:this is something i started this morning. idk i know the intro needs a deal of work. Any criticism/advice would be cool :)
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very nice atmosherics going on here, very dub reggae
it would take a sample very nicely, maybe an old studio 1 type rastaman vocal?
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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:18 pm

anyone else got any feedback for me please?
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Post by cleanexecution » Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:28 pm

deadnoisesystem wrote:anyone else got any feedback for me please?
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the intro is quality, the only thing i can really suggest is to eq your bass a tad. or something with the compression, everything sounds good though!

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:34 pm

cleanexecution wrote:
deadnoisesystem wrote:anyone else got any feedback for me please?
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the intro is quality, the only thing i can really suggest is to eq your bass a tad. or something with the compression, everything sounds good though!
thanks mate, it needs a proper mastering yet as ive only heard it on my home setup and headphones so far

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Post by Plasmic aka Hanlo » Thu Feb 04, 2010 2:06 pm

Thanks for the feedback deadnoise and rhek!

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Post by Plasmic aka Hanlo » Thu Feb 04, 2010 2:11 pm

Forgot to say , Deadnoise, feeling the tune for sure! Would def spend some time eq'n the sub on the track though, sounding slightly muddy! Apart from that sick.

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Feb 04, 2010 4:08 pm

Plasmic aka Hanlo wrote:Forgot to say , Deadnoise, feeling the tune for sure! Would def spend some time eq'n the sub on the track though, sounding slightly muddy! Apart from that sick.
cheers mate, eq is on the list
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Post by flownLess » Thu Feb 04, 2010 7:57 pm

deadnoisesystem wrote:
flownLess wrote:at deadnoisesystem,
i like the melody but the bass is too distorted and not enough variated.
what kind of filters do you use?
thanks mate, ive been varying the bassline more in the latest version, the wobble is quite harsh? or the sub?
the filters on this tune are part of the vst, subboombass by rob papen. my new favourite vst
maybe you should "Split your bassline into 3 parts with eq'ing/filtering a sub bass/ mid bass / high bass combo. Limit/compress your sub bass, add chrous/bass exciters/bit crush/ distort/ overdrive/ phase/ formant or vocoder your mids/ highs....compress them, and resample them and do the whole thing all over again. Add effects a little bit at a time (preferably through return sends etc) so that you dont muddy up your bass" (quoting corpu5).
i found this one of the most to the point tips on DSF so far and i for one am definately gonna try this out, don't know about you :e:

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Post by jaydot » Thu Feb 04, 2010 9:05 pm

cleanexecution wrote:yeh, some toonage. any tips anyone? any polishes in need? let me know..
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Decent effort my friend. Add me on soundcloud and I will listen to the final version.
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Post by Cryolitik » Thu Feb 04, 2010 9:26 pm

yo just started this one and thought I could do with some ideas of where to go from here and stuff, so please give feedback fam. cheers

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Post by jaydot » Thu Feb 04, 2010 9:57 pm

darronatkinson wrote:Soundcloud


This is my first attempt at dubstep.

It is a remix project for college

any suggestions for improvements would be great
This is actually quite good...
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Post by jaydot » Thu Feb 04, 2010 10:20 pm

Quite a rough version of my latest track.

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Suggestions taken on board.
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Post by Astral » Thu Feb 04, 2010 10:21 pm

Another WIP on to go, track 3.

I know the main synth is extremely generic and probably horrible to peoples ears by now, but I accidently created it while playing, im going to use it as the framework for a much nicer sounding lead.

Short clip of my ideas currently.

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And nothing is really sorted propperly yet, so the drums are weak as.
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Post by jaydot » Thu Feb 04, 2010 10:28 pm

Astral wrote:Another WIP on to go, track 3.

I know the main synth is extremely generic and probably horrible to peoples ears by now, but I accidently created it while playing, im going to use it as the framework for a much nicer sounding lead.

Short clip of my ideas currently.

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And nothing is really sorted propperly yet, so the drums are weak as.
I'm digging the track in your signature!
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Post by Astral » Thu Feb 04, 2010 10:34 pm

jaydot wrote:
Astral wrote:Another WIP on to go, track 3.

I know the main synth is extremely generic and probably horrible to peoples ears by now, but I accidently created it while playing, im going to use it as the framework for a much nicer sounding lead.

Short clip of my ideas currently.

Soundcloud

And nothing is really sorted propperly yet, so the drums are weak as.
I'm digging the track in your signature!
>.< Pressure to perform aswell, lol, but nah I gotta shake this hype stage.
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Post by phrex » Fri Feb 05, 2010 11:54 am

flownLess wrote:
deadnoisesystem wrote:
flownLess wrote:at deadnoisesystem,
i like the melody but the bass is too distorted and not enough variated.
what kind of filters do you use?
thanks mate, ive been varying the bassline more in the latest version, the wobble is quite harsh? or the sub?
the filters on this tune are part of the vst, subboombass by rob papen. my new favourite vst
maybe you should "Split your bassline into 3 parts with eq'ing/filtering a sub bass/ mid bass / high bass combo. Limit/compress your sub bass, add chrous/bass exciters/bit crush/ distort/ overdrive/ phase/ formant or vocoder your mids/ highs....compress them, and resample them and do the whole thing all over again. Add effects a little bit at a time (preferably through return sends etc) so that you dont muddy up your bass" (quoting corpu5).
and what if he wants just a simple but deep and beautiful sinewave sub... just pure bass shaking you up.

leave it out with bitcrushing and all that. just add a squarewave to it if you want to make it slightly dirtyer or laptop-speaker-compatible

i wonder too, what effect does the compressor actally ahve on the sub? i'm more and more trying too keep the compressor away from my tunes. sounds everything too.... ''pushed'' (aggressive?) with the compressor.
maybe the ableton compressor just sounds that hard
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