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yeh, some toonage. any tips anyone? any polishes in need? let me know..
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thanks mate, ive been varying the bassline more in the latest version, the wobble is quite harsh? or the sub?flownLess wrote:at deadnoisesystem,
i like the melody but the bass is too distorted and not enough variated.
what kind of filters do you use?
the filters on this tune are part of the vst, subboombass by rob papen. my new favourite vst
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yeah mate, that is rudecleanexecution wrote:yeh, some toonage. any tips anyone? any polishes in need? let me know..
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all it needs is a good mastering
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nice work matedarronatkinson wrote:Soundcloud
This is my first attempt at dubstep.
It is a remix project for college
any suggestions for improvements would be great
bring the vocals up in the mix a bit
be prepared to cut them a bit to make em fit right
mastering plug in like izotope ozone would do wonders on this too
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very nice atmosherics going on here, very dub reggaeLTUK wrote:this is something i started this morning. idk i know the intro needs a deal of work. Any criticism/advice would be cool
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it would take a sample very nicely, maybe an old studio 1 type rastaman vocal?
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anyone else got any feedback for me please?
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the intro is quality, the only thing i can really suggest is to eq your bass a tad. or something with the compression, everything sounds good though!deadnoisesystem wrote:anyone else got any feedback for me please?
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thanks mate, it needs a proper mastering yet as ive only heard it on my home setup and headphones so farcleanexecution wrote:the intro is quality, the only thing i can really suggest is to eq your bass a tad. or something with the compression, everything sounds good though!deadnoisesystem wrote:anyone else got any feedback for me please?
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Thanks for the feedback deadnoise and rhek!
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Forgot to say , Deadnoise, feeling the tune for sure! Would def spend some time eq'n the sub on the track though, sounding slightly muddy! Apart from that sick.
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cheers mate, eq is on the listPlasmic aka Hanlo wrote:Forgot to say , Deadnoise, feeling the tune for sure! Would def spend some time eq'n the sub on the track though, sounding slightly muddy! Apart from that sick.
much love
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maybe you should "Split your bassline into 3 parts with eq'ing/filtering a sub bass/ mid bass / high bass combo. Limit/compress your sub bass, add chrous/bass exciters/bit crush/ distort/ overdrive/ phase/ formant or vocoder your mids/ highs....compress them, and resample them and do the whole thing all over again. Add effects a little bit at a time (preferably through return sends etc) so that you dont muddy up your bass" (quoting corpu5).deadnoisesystem wrote:thanks mate, ive been varying the bassline more in the latest version, the wobble is quite harsh? or the sub?flownLess wrote:at deadnoisesystem,
i like the melody but the bass is too distorted and not enough variated.
what kind of filters do you use?
the filters on this tune are part of the vst, subboombass by rob papen. my new favourite vst
i found this one of the most to the point tips on DSF so far and i for one am definately gonna try this out, don't know about you

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Decent effort my friend. Add me on soundcloud and I will listen to the final version.cleanexecution wrote:yeh, some toonage. any tips anyone? any polishes in need? let me know..
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yo just started this one and thought I could do with some ideas of where to go from here and stuff, so please give feedback fam. cheers
http://www.zshare.net/audio/72156532834438bc/
http://www.zshare.net/audio/72156532834438bc/
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This is actually quite good...darronatkinson wrote:Soundcloud
This is my first attempt at dubstep.
It is a remix project for college
any suggestions for improvements would be great
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Another WIP on to go, track 3.
I know the main synth is extremely generic and probably horrible to peoples ears by now, but I accidently created it while playing, im going to use it as the framework for a much nicer sounding lead.
Short clip of my ideas currently.
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And nothing is really sorted propperly yet, so the drums are weak as.
I know the main synth is extremely generic and probably horrible to peoples ears by now, but I accidently created it while playing, im going to use it as the framework for a much nicer sounding lead.
Short clip of my ideas currently.
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And nothing is really sorted propperly yet, so the drums are weak as.
For Production Tips Guides and Files:http://secondrateaudio.blogspot.com
For My Tunes: http://soundcloud.com/astraldubstep/
For My Tunes: http://soundcloud.com/astraldubstep/
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I'm digging the track in your signature!Astral wrote:Another WIP on to go, track 3.
I know the main synth is extremely generic and probably horrible to peoples ears by now, but I accidently created it while playing, im going to use it as the framework for a much nicer sounding lead.
Short clip of my ideas currently.
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And nothing is really sorted propperly yet, so the drums are weak as.
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>.< Pressure to perform aswell, lol, but nah I gotta shake this hype stage.jaydot wrote:I'm digging the track in your signature!Astral wrote:Another WIP on to go, track 3.
I know the main synth is extremely generic and probably horrible to peoples ears by now, but I accidently created it while playing, im going to use it as the framework for a much nicer sounding lead.
Short clip of my ideas currently.
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And nothing is really sorted propperly yet, so the drums are weak as.
For Production Tips Guides and Files:http://secondrateaudio.blogspot.com
For My Tunes: http://soundcloud.com/astraldubstep/
For My Tunes: http://soundcloud.com/astraldubstep/
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and what if he wants just a simple but deep and beautiful sinewave sub... just pure bass shaking you up.flownLess wrote:maybe you should "Split your bassline into 3 parts with eq'ing/filtering a sub bass/ mid bass / high bass combo. Limit/compress your sub bass, add chrous/bass exciters/bit crush/ distort/ overdrive/ phase/ formant or vocoder your mids/ highs....compress them, and resample them and do the whole thing all over again. Add effects a little bit at a time (preferably through return sends etc) so that you dont muddy up your bass" (quoting corpu5).deadnoisesystem wrote:thanks mate, ive been varying the bassline more in the latest version, the wobble is quite harsh? or the sub?flownLess wrote:at deadnoisesystem,
i like the melody but the bass is too distorted and not enough variated.
what kind of filters do you use?
the filters on this tune are part of the vst, subboombass by rob papen. my new favourite vst
leave it out with bitcrushing and all that. just add a squarewave to it if you want to make it slightly dirtyer or laptop-speaker-compatible
i wonder too, what effect does the compressor actally ahve on the sub? i'm more and more trying too keep the compressor away from my tunes. sounds everything too.... ''pushed'' (aggressive?) with the compressor.
maybe the ableton compressor just sounds that hard
forthcoming 12", spring/summer 2015:Legend4ry wrote:Well I am still living in that haze that dubstep is about a dark room with a big system, peoples with their heads down and trigger fingers in the air.
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