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Post by dirtmonkey » Sat Feb 06, 2010 6:42 pm

New Dirt Monkey tune. check it.

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Post by Astral » Sat Feb 06, 2010 8:38 pm

updated this after a weekend of failing to get anything else done.

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Post by icebagg » Sat Feb 06, 2010 10:29 pm

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Post by phrex » Sat Feb 06, 2010 10:30 pm

you guys never learn, eh?! :roll:
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Post by JemGrover » Sun Feb 07, 2010 2:17 am

vulvavibration wrote:you guys never learn, eh?! :roll:
You tell 'em, mate.

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:05 am

mars wrote:Hey Everyone!

I've been working on this for a bit, please let me know what you think!

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cheers and respect! i'll try to give some good feedback here too!

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yo mars this track is sick, tight production and a mean drop,
would love a copy of the finished tune
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Post by deadnoisesystem » Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:09 am

icebagg wrote:Soundcloud

any feedback greatly appreciated!
good work mate, tight production, the only thing id suggest is its very straight rhythmically, maybe try and quantise a little swing into it

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:11 am

Astral wrote:updated this after a weekend of failing to get anything else done.

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:11 pm

latest version of this dark dub
please feedback thank you
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Post by CollisionCourse » Sun Feb 07, 2010 5:41 pm

icebagg wrote:Soundcloud

any feedback greatly appreciated!
i like that alot
sample is huge
only thing id change is have a little variation on drums and the snare needs bringing up a bit i think.
still big though

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Post by unglory » Sun Feb 07, 2010 6:03 pm

I have no idea about the keys, can not they better?
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Post by Abstrym » Sun Feb 07, 2010 6:37 pm

deadnoisesystem wrote:
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that is sick, love that twisted piano melody, production is nice an clean too
just need a little more variation and a mastering and youll be sweet
Thanks man! That's what I was thinking... especially since the "second chorus" still is the exact same 32 bars over again.
deadnoisesystem wrote:latest version of this dark dub
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Really nice atmosphere going on here! Lots of reverb but it comes across nicely... the drums are a bit glitchy at the end of the segment (1:24, 2:20 and so on), but other than that I don't know what I'd improve, actually. Except; get it mastered, man.
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omg that's a dooooooooooope idea!
here's what u could do... as ur about to drop the synth, stop the piano and put 4 bars of buildup. us some sort of sweep or get a synth to glide upwards... then drop the BIG synth with the drums, but layer them with more snares and eq them (don't just use one snare sample, use 2-3, until u have a nice snare going). then, after playing the synth melody for a bit, re-introduce the piano on top of the synth.
this could be nice and dirty with a couple more hours of work!
cheers!
Haha, thanks! Nice idea, may try how that sounds. But do you really think the snare needs more power? It's already processed like fuck and sounds fine (except for some EQing) to me...
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Fat! Feels like the drums are missing something, though... maybe add some more SFX and cymbals
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Post by jaydot » Sun Feb 07, 2010 7:03 pm

Needs an arpeggiator on the growl as it's laboured but:

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Post by MADDOC » Sun Feb 07, 2010 10:38 pm

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Hi, Im Maddoc.
Im pretty new to producing music and even more new to this forum. I'd like to introduce myself with this
little piece of music which I hope you enjoy. Constructive criticism is what im up for.
Thanks. :t:

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Post by s4nn » Sun Feb 07, 2010 11:58 pm

s4nn wrote:Soundcloud
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Post by deadnoisesystem » Mon Feb 08, 2010 12:20 am

@abstrym, cheers mate, needs a bit of tidying i know
@ jaydot, the production is tight mate,

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Post by Astral » Mon Feb 08, 2010 1:05 am

MADDOC wrote:Soundcloud

Hi, Im Maddoc.
Good effort for starting up. You seem to have a good understanding of your beat programming, alot better than I did when I started out anyway. Now for the constructive part, Id give that clubby kick at the start some treatment it's very..."Whomph Whomph" bit of a tail, ya know, but you could be going for that so by all means, and possibly give the bass/vocals a bit more room to breathe in the later part.
jaydot wrote:Needs an arpeggiator on the growl as it's laboured but:

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Tune jay, different. Im a little curious what that pass is peaking at from 1m onwards? :P the stereo seperation on it feels nice, not to sure about the random laser sounds every now and then.
mars wrote:Hey Everyone!

I've been working on this for a bit, please let me know what you think!

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cheers and respect! i'll try to give some good feedback here too!

-m4rs
Loving the drums, real quality and effort put into those, and it shows, very nice.


Now a favor for me, I've been banging my head against this tune all weekend trying to get something that fits rolling. I've uploaded 3 versions, each with different changes.

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Wips 1,2 and 3 Being the last, Looking for feedback on which of these people are feeling.

3 Being the latest upload.

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Post by Subside » Mon Feb 08, 2010 2:05 am

Edit: going to re upload my track later ignore this for now

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Post by jaydot » Mon Feb 08, 2010 8:44 am

deadly habit wrote:Soundcloud
Will comment on the waveform too, but nice intro, relaxing bass, would do well in a chillout mix,
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