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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by wirez » Sun Feb 14, 2010 10:33 pm

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Trippy one here Habit, it's taking me to some old ruins of a druids sacrificing temple out in a forest somewhere with spirits singing through the walls and shit... :O:

Love it though man, unique as feck.
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Post by BLAHBLAHJAH » Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:22 am

Yo chaps
Really digging the uploaded tracks here, I'll let the topic flow though rather than raking tracks up from page 9 haha
Thought I'd share a couple o' tunes, feedback on what ya thinking to the vibes is welcome
One of my tamer tracks:
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Here's one for the metaphoric missing sunshine of our life. If life was perfect, we wouldn't be sat making music for 15 hours a day haha
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Post by wirez » Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:42 am

BLAHBLAHJAH wrote: If life was perfect, we wouldn't be sat making music for 15 hours a day haha
I would :)
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Post by BLAHBLAHJAH » Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:45 am

wirez wrote:
BLAHBLAHJAH wrote: If life was perfect, we wouldn't be sat making music for 15 hours a day haha
I would :)
I meant do it for 24 hours!
Been cutting back on the sleep, but still it creeps up

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Post by wirez » Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:47 am

BLAHBLAHJAH wrote: Really digging the uploaded tracks here, I'll let the topic flow though rather than raking tracks up from page 9 haha
You could have left some feedback on the last few posts, keeps the topic worthwhile when people leave feedback as well as expect it :wink:
BLAHBLAHJAH wrote: One of my tamer tracks:
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TAME?!?! Lol. I'll be having a heart attack when I hear some of your less tame stuff!!!
Awesome track though man, sounds massive!
BLAHBLAHJAH wrote: Here's one for the metaphoric missing sunshine of our life. If life was perfect, we wouldn't be sat making music for 15 hours a day haha
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Funny use of sample lol, again a sweet track though geezer!
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Post by wirez » Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:48 am

BLAHBLAHJAH wrote:
wirez wrote:
BLAHBLAHJAH wrote: If life was perfect, we wouldn't be sat making music for 15 hours a day haha
I would :)
I meant do it for 24 hours!
Been cutting back on the sleep, but still it creeps up

haha
Hahaha yes yes! So you're saying in a perfect world people wouldn't sleep? Not sure I'm feeling that... It's when the world sleeps that I can truly be!
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Post by BLAHBLAHJAH » Mon Feb 15, 2010 1:04 am

Hah thanks man, glad ya feeling them!
Yeah I raked through loads of tracks, started on page one, so thought it may fuck things up a bit if brought back someone's track from many moons ago. Gotta work my way backwards from this page and see the recent beauties
Anyway, checked your tracks now, digging the stuff on your myspace page, i'll network on there sometime. Ya got a real swish vibe to the tracks... Relaxing but not distracting!

Aye, sleep is a disrupted habit since the joy of partying fri-sun. Monday's sunrise is just too much strain
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Post by wirez » Mon Feb 15, 2010 1:10 am

BLAHBLAHJAH wrote:Hah thanks man, glad ya feeling them!
Yeah I raked through loads of tracks, started on page one, so thought it may fuck things up a bit if brought back someone's track from many moons ago. Gotta work my way backwards from this page and see the recent beauties
Anyway, checked your tracks now, digging the stuff on your myspace page, i'll network on there sometime. Ya got a real swish vibe to the tracks... Relaxing but not distracting!

Aye, sleep is a disrupted habit since the joy of partying fri-sun. Monday's sunrise is just too much strain
Haha cushty bruv, well I am following on Soundcloud so return the favour some time :D Myspace is a bit dead out these days :(
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Post by DubSket » Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:21 am

Here's a couple of tracks Iv just finished, hope you enjoy:)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yljcC5nrvA4

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Post by Worker Ant » Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:32 am

Just a little experiment. Don't get too nauseous.

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Post by KidQw3rty » Mon Feb 15, 2010 8:39 am

Hey, first post here. Basically I've just begun producing electronic music, but I'm still looking for some feedback on some demos I've cut before I finalize them in the studio at my college. Up until recently I've been mainly making bitpop/electro stuff. Lately though, I've been experimenting with dubstep and more ambient dub stuff (a la Mount Kimbie, etc). I'll post a few different tracks to give y'all a broad scope of my activities.

This first one is actually a track from my project SPACE YACHT (http://www.myspace.com/spaceyacht):
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The next two are from the demo of the EP I'm currently working on:
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for some reason the player won't work for this second one, so here's a link:
http://soundcloud.com/kidqwerty/ghost_mess

This last one is a rough sketch of dub experiment i threw together a few days ago. big up king tubby, hopefully the finalized version will do the man fuller justice.
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hope y'all dig these traxxx, this seems like a chill place. sorry for posting some unfinished cuts, just want some opinions.
also, worker ant, really fresh track, good sample work, i dig the sound collage-ish feel.

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Post by youthful_implants » Mon Feb 15, 2010 10:23 am

this is a vocal dubstep/downtempo remix forthcoming on my new label Strontium. Would love to know what people think.

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Post by Vacant » Mon Feb 15, 2010 10:48 am

My Three Newest Tracks:
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Post by Casual Fridays » Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:22 pm

Afternoon gents, new to the forums but been lurking for a while, thought I might aswel post a track:
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Im sure its not technically sound, but it sounds good to me after a few toots of an auld jig-jag and sure thats all that matters!

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Post by wirez » Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:59 pm

Worker Ant wrote:Just a little experiment. Don't get too nauseous.

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Dude you're a strange one! I actually liked this though 8)
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Post by wirez » Mon Feb 15, 2010 1:17 pm

KidQw3rty wrote: The next two are from the demo of the EP I'm currently working on:
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for some reason the player won't work for this second one, so here's a link:
http://soundcloud.com/kidqwerty/ghost_mess
Fucking really like this one, decent track. I'd reconsider having so much distortion on the kick drum, but not to say that it doesn't work, I just feel it should be slightly more subtle. Other than that, that track is a fantastic piece of work IMO.

I think you should focus more energy on creating chilled tracks like this one, it sounds a hell of a lot more professional and like more effort has gone into it than your other two (not to slate them, they're just not really so much my thing).
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Post by wirez » Mon Feb 15, 2010 1:29 pm

youthful_implants wrote:this is a vocal dubstep/downtempo remix forthcoming on my new label Strontium. Would love to know what people think.

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Nice track mate, easy to listen to and easy on the ears themselves :) Good work!
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Post by wirez » Mon Feb 15, 2010 1:38 pm

Vacant wrote:My Three Newest Tracks:
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You tracks are decent but I don't think a wobble was actually necessary in the first two tracks, I think a driving bassline would have done them much more justice. It makes more sense in the second track, but I'd really work on making your wobbles sound more unique if you're going to use them because yours sound a little standard like you've make a sound with two square waves and a saw wave and added an LFO to it you know? Experiment with some effects such as flanger, chorus and distortion but be subtle (or don't, depending on the style you're aiming for) and I think your tracks will sound wicked!
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Post by collapse » Mon Feb 15, 2010 6:14 pm

wirez wrote:
Vacant wrote:My Three Newest Tracks:
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Any Feedback Appreciated =D
You tracks are decent but I don't think a wobble was actually necessary in the first two tracks, I think a driving bassline would have done them much more justice. It makes more sense in the second track, but I'd really work on making your wobbles sound more unique if you're going to use them because yours sound a little standard like you've make a sound with two square waves and a saw wave and added an LFO to it you know? Experiment with some effects such as flanger, chorus and distortion but be subtle (or don't, depending on the style you're aiming for) and I think your tracks will sound wicked!
Yo I would agree on trying to make the wobble fatter, as above. Some subtle reverb might bring it out a bit and make it sound less "synthetic" if that makes sense

liked the intro on the first one. the drop kind of threw me a bit. might be worth experimenting with introducing that section more gradually.

again liked the intro in the second one, sick percussion. bit long though some (subtly) extra counter melody over the chords might help that. The snare needs to be fatter as do most of the sounds, again just experiment with plug ins.

the drop on this on threw me again. Is it changing key on the drop?

The third one is the best, think you got a decent template there for a sick tune all it needs is a nice mix better reverb, more effects - chorus etc. couldn't really hear the sub as well. maybe get a ride cymbal in there as well geett me.

im gonna post a tune any feedback would be well appreciated

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