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Post by axelk » Tue Feb 16, 2010 2:13 pm

thanks. i'll fidle with it some more.

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Post by lushman » Tue Feb 16, 2010 2:22 pm

Hi all, bit of a longtime lurker on this forum - decided to make the leap and start getting more involved and what have you. Got three new things done, see what you think.
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Post by Astral » Tue Feb 16, 2010 2:49 pm

Ran out of creativity for now, so this is finished, will pick it up in the future and give it an exciting break but meh.

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Post by wirez » Tue Feb 16, 2010 5:31 pm

lushman wrote:Hi all, bit of a longtime lurker on this forum - decided to make the leap and start getting more involved and what have you. Got three new things done, see what you think.
First track sounds very well produced and everything has its own place. I like the rhythmical texture loop in there which sounds a bit like a clave.
Punchy kick, nice sub. Very decent track in fact!

Second track, again very, very nice drums and placement stereo wise and frequency wise! I'm loving the way you sort of pulse your subs, it really gives the tracks movement! The bouncy ending on this track is immense, fucking decent work!

Third track, probably my favourite. I'm a sucker for the chilled ones.

Will be following you on Soundcloud from now on, nice work :mrgreen:
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Post by lushman » Tue Feb 16, 2010 5:37 pm

Cheers man, glad you liked them :)

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Post by miniweapon » Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:27 pm

in honor of the new gorillaz album i remix and old track. tell me what you think :D if you dig it download it

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Post by Worker Ant » Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:32 pm

Operative wrote:Hi all. This is a bit of a dark broody cinematic roller. I hope you like it
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That sounds great - i love the beat. The drum patterns are lovely and the sub is pretty nice too. Great track - i just have one suggestion to offer. It needs to be spiced up with something that pops up or stands out. Particularly when it drops down around 3:15, some vocal samples - singing, talking or even just some random sounds that we can't hear anywhere else in the song. It needs some spices & herbs - something to keep us surprised (keeping attention) throughout the song. Otherwise, it's a great song.

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Post by Worker Ant » Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:39 pm

Whatcha think of this one? I'll bet nobody can guess what films the snare samples come from.

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Post by Operative » Wed Feb 17, 2010 3:59 am

Astral wrote:Ran out of creativity for now, so this is finished, will pick it up in the future and give it an exciting break but meh.

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Sounding like a great start. I think some lush pads or atmosheric sounds like wooshes, sweeps etc will sound good in the breakdown to help fill it out a little with some new sounds, Kinda like a transition period, which then leads into some kind of rhythm or vibes in the second half. Your bass is phat and your drums are banging! Wicked tune!!!

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Post by Operative » Wed Feb 17, 2010 4:07 am

Worker Ant wrote:
Operative wrote:Hi all. This is a bit of a dark broody cinematic roller. I hope you like it
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That sounds great - i love the beat. The drum patterns are lovely and the sub is pretty nice too. Great track - i just have one suggestion to offer. It needs to be spiced up with something that pops up or stands out. Particularly when it drops down around 3:15, some vocal samples - singing, talking or even just some random sounds that we can't hear anywhere else in the song. It needs some spices & herbs - something to keep us surprised (keeping attention) throughout the song. Otherwise, it's a great song.
Excellent feedback thank you for listening and taking the time to post. I listened to some of your stuff,You have some cool ideas in there to be worked on and your stuff is very experimental & different. :? ,Perhaps just a little to random for my own taste =)

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Post by KidQw3rty » Wed Feb 17, 2010 5:03 am

Operative wrote:
KidQw3rty wrote:
Operative wrote:Hi all. This is a bit of a dark broody cinematic roller. I hope you like it
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this was like if danger decided to make dubstep...raaaw
i thought the melody after the second drop was particularly ill.
might want to change up the beat a little is my only suggestion, otherwise you killed it.

All good, Thanks for listening. I'll play around a bit more on it =), as you do. just kinda hit a wall in which direction to go near the end. Im still unsure about the kinda ole school type trancy lead as well.
Think that trancey lead fit pretty well, might bring it into the mix a bit more.

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Post by KidQw3rty » Wed Feb 17, 2010 8:06 am

wirez wrote:
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Anyone? Any good?
The sounds used are nice and the track production sounds tight, the track is a little too repetitive though... It needs something subtle to keep it rolling, maybe even a little bit of modulation on one of the drums to keep it moving?
Yeah the drums could use a little something, though i think your beat sounds dope.
Also, in my opinion it might be better if you shortened it up a little bit.
Overall, good sound though, the really low bass is cool, maybe do something interesting with that as well?

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Post by axelk » Wed Feb 17, 2010 10:25 am

thank you. means a lot. i'll try to juice up the drums a bit and maybe add a little something, make it less boring

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Post by serox » Wed Feb 17, 2010 11:08 am

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Post by dexdur » Wed Feb 17, 2010 11:23 am

Check these tracks and offer feedback to the artist. a guy who has just done this as a sideproject but want him to keep going!

http://soundcloud.com/itshooky

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Post by thierry_le_dj » Wed Feb 17, 2010 11:53 am

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Post by bass hertz » Wed Feb 17, 2010 11:59 am

Worker Ant wrote:Whatcha think of this one? I'll bet nobody can guess what films the snare samples come from.

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Post by tmicu » Wed Feb 17, 2010 12:01 pm

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what do you guys think ? :e:

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