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Post by Astral » Sun Feb 28, 2010 10:31 pm

Working on some four to the floor kinda stuff.

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Post by The Phantom Banger » Sun Feb 28, 2010 11:04 pm

Astral wrote:Working on some four to the floor kinda stuff.

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fucking peng horn sample <3333333

think it would sound really nice if cut out the bottom end on those gritty bass's then just layered a HUGE sub underneath

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Post by Nucleophile » Mon Mar 01, 2010 1:55 am

Hey,
I'm a relatively new producer been listening to alot of the music on this forum its all sounding really good
Here's what ive been working in the past day or two, any feed back would be appreciated,
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Post by Muta » Mon Mar 01, 2010 10:00 am

Nucleophile wrote:Hey,
I'm a relatively new producer been listening to alot of the music on this forum its all sounding really good
Here's what ive been working in the past day or two, any feed back would be appreciated,
cheers
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Posted a comment on this where you accidently posted it in the Finished track section lol. (was checking the finished track section first lol)
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Post by maelstrom99 » Mon Mar 01, 2010 11:43 am

Astral wrote:Working on some four to the floor kinda stuff.

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That sounds like a good intro, really could break down with a backbeat. All the sounds are good! the kick is kinda hiding or something it sounds intentional but maybe more from the beat. I'm really looking for something to say haha.

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Post by maelstrom99 » Mon Mar 01, 2010 11:48 am

It kills me how good everyone is on this site. I haven't been producing very long but in general the tracks here are top notch material.

Here's something I made from 12-3 in the morning just now, but its a beginning but let me know what you think. It's obviously not a dubstep track, but I would like to improve it all the same.


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Post by martello » Mon Mar 01, 2010 12:06 pm

JTL wrote:
martello wrote:"Languages"

http://www.martellorotativo.com/sound.mp3
Very mellow! I'm digging it man, that's a good basis, some vocals would go down a treat!
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martello wrote:"Languages"

http://www.martellorotativo.com/sound.mp3
awesome track, i agree with JTL- get a vocal on it
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JTL wrote:Hey guys, this is my second go at production, and I feel it's better than my first by quite a way, but still of course pretty amateur.

If anyone could just have a QUICK look at it, I'd really appreciate ANY feedback at all. I will of course return the favour!

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If I compare your second track with mine, then you are genius :wink:
Maybe it needs a little bit better kick drum, the current one is too soft I think.

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Post by KidQw3rty » Mon Mar 01, 2010 12:24 pm

JTL wrote:Hey guys, this is my second go at production, and I feel it's better than my first by quite a way, but still of course pretty amateur.

If anyone could just have a QUICK look at it, I'd really appreciate ANY feedback at all. I will of course return the favour!

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Many many thanks in advance,


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chill vibe, the horn track was some old school dub, good feel on this one.

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Post by kontrol » Mon Mar 01, 2010 1:10 pm

Tricky one this one

Daft Punk - Aerodynamic ( Kontrol Remix) --> http://www.sendspace.com/file/s1l991

any feedback would be great im a crossroads
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Post by BlindingLights » Mon Mar 01, 2010 3:55 pm

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Working on a remix of M.I.A.'s "Sunshowers". Just got some of the buildup for now.
I'm thinking I'm gonna go really hard with the drop and just have some mean wobble.

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Post by aspect-dubz » Mon Mar 01, 2010 4:48 pm

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more work in progress. this ones pretty experimental, just fucking around with pads and random samples really...

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Post by WeBang » Mon Mar 01, 2010 9:20 pm

Nucleophile wrote:Hey,
I'm a relatively new producer been listening to alot of the music on this forum its all sounding really good
Here's what ive been working in the past day or two, any feed back would be appreciated,
cheers
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Chuckie Sample has already been used before. Also the moaning girl sounds like cheese. Bass is sick
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Post by Sharpa » Mon Mar 01, 2010 9:48 pm

hi , this is something iv been working on over the past week , the mix is a bit messy but i wanna know what you think of the drop and the song. And i also wanna know if ure feeling the liquid feel this track has to it. Iv posted it below, give it a listen and any feedback is appreciated

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Post by stappard » Tue Mar 02, 2010 12:41 am

tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud

Hey guys just put this little bit together going for something kinda chill and trancy at the same time pllzzzz feedback me and ill feedback as well


Really good ambience there, reverb's spot on for the type of track it is.

Bass drum sounds a bit clunky to my ears though, have you tried any others?





My current work in progress is in the sig if anyone's got any feedback 8)

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Post by clemsonheadies » Tue Mar 02, 2010 12:43 am

Sharpa wrote:hi , this is something iv been working on over the past week , the mix is a bit messy but i wanna know what you think of the drop and the song. And i also wanna know if ure feeling the liquid feel this track has to it. Iv posted it below, give it a listen and any feedback is appreciated

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cheers x
Badass. The drop is great, really like that synth melody. The bass doesn't sound quite right to me, just my personal preference tho. Like you said, the mix is a little bit off.. the vocals need to be a little bit louder during the verse, but other than that, it's a great start!
kontrol wrote:Tricky one this one

Daft Punk - Aerodynamic ( Kontrol Remix) --> http://www.sendspace.com/file/s1l991

any feedback would be great im a crossroads
definitely a good start. sounds like the drum tracks gets a little out of sync a couple of times.. the drop needs a little bit of buildup, all the sudden it just changes on ya. throw some bass in that b! Keep working on this one, it sounds like it could turn out sick!

I'm also working on a remix of a Daft Punk song, feedback plz!

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Post by juntistik » Tue Mar 02, 2010 3:52 am

stappard wrote:
tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud

Hey guys just put this little bit together going for something kinda chill and trancy at the same time pllzzzz feedback me and ill feedback as well


Really good ambience there, reverb's spot on for the type of track it is.

Bass drum sounds a bit clunky to my ears though, have you tried any others?





My current work in progress is in the sig if anyone's got any feedback 8)

In regard to the track int he sig, Man im really feeling it. the construction of the drops is nice and simple but effective, especially for the second one where you just have the snare come in leading up to the drop. nice work man, ill definitely be following you on soundcloud

Heres one ive been workin on sporadically the past few days, feedback appreciated, i am just not sure what i want to do with it and am getting sick of hearing it over and over :u:

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Post by tripwire22 » Tue Mar 02, 2010 5:28 am

stappard wrote:
tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud

Hey guys just put this little bit together going for something kinda chill and trancy at the same time pllzzzz feedback me and ill feedback as well


Really good ambience there, reverb's spot on for the type of track it is.

Bass drum sounds a bit clunky to my ears though, have you tried any others?





My current work in progress is in the sig if anyone's got any feedback 8)
ah thanks for the feed and yeah its a shitty kick i been using way too much. your track is really interesting love the way everything goes together and its very different from the same old i hear on here sometimes. i kinda wish that like bell sounding synth u have going would go higher and lower on the scale to give it some more variety.

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Post by soulshynchyld » Tue Mar 02, 2010 7:44 am

Sharpa wrote:hi , this is something iv been working on over the past week , the mix is a bit messy but i wanna know what you think of the drop and the song. And i also wanna know if ure feeling the liquid feel this track has to it. Iv posted it below, give it a listen and any feedback is appreciated

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cheers x
bro im real likin those tracks hard ay!! first 1 fully reminds me of pendulums hold your colour!!! massive. the second 1 is mean as too!! ya so should be proud!!!step it up mayn!!!yayeh
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Post by KidQw3rty » Tue Mar 02, 2010 12:10 pm

hey, just started on this tonight, any feedback would be appreciated. still need to add another synth part.

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Post by zonetrooper5 » Tue Mar 02, 2010 1:53 pm

Got another WIP track, would be great to get some feedback.

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