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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by Max4Beats » Sat Mar 06, 2010 10:22 am

Max4Beats wrote:
Olux wrote:Hey Dubbers, :mrgreen:

So i dont know if i've quite mastered mixing yet but here's a track i could really use some feedback on.

CHECK IT OUT @ http://www.soundcloud.com/olux/culture- ... x123htgf85

CHEERS!
Welcome

Cool Rhythms to start with, i like those wistley Cird like noises, Very tribal Jah Feel to it!
Need to toughen up that Bass Drum...
Pure Chilling song, Not what I was expecting
Wobble is bang on! Perfect
Love how its constantly changing
Breakdown after 2.14 is really cool and needed!
Work on the structure a bit. over 5 mins for a song like this is really long, hard to keep the interest, but with a re structure it would be a really cool tune!

Wana return feedback on this

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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by Max4Beats » Sat Mar 06, 2010 10:23 am

Whats the feeling on this one ?


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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by Muta » Sat Mar 06, 2010 10:29 am

Max4Beats wrote:
Muta wrote:Reposting this track, posted it 2 pages ago, and still have not recieved any feedback or whatsoever :/

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Thank you..

0.00 - 0.22 This is sounding cool
0.22 - 1.03 Cool like the bassline
1.05 - 1.34 I'd get rid of that Fruity Loops ride But this breakdown is great
1.49 - 2.19 Nice Change Here


Overall - Cool track, could still be a bit heavier and I'd get rid of that rhythm on the Ride, I really like the Pad sound at the end though :)


What you think of this one

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FL Ride? xD Lol, And that while im using renoise lolol. I know it could be heavier, But im still pretty new to all this lol =p

Ive tried to play your track but no amtter how many times i press the play button, it just doesnt seem to start to play... :l Soundcloud maybe fuckin' around here, cause i cant seem to paly any single track >_>
I'll check it out ASAP when my internet is to normal again and soundcloud works lol.. Sorry bro D: Ill check it soon :]
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by Max4Beats » Sat Mar 06, 2010 10:34 am

We Bang wrote:
CollisionCourse wrote:
CollisionCourse wrote:@ we bang
big samples to start with and on the drop too. the drums are and bassline are both nice but could be a bit more experimental if you get me - i feel like ive heard those doens of times before. the variation overall is spot on, but i think that vocal sample is rinsed a bit. should take it out for a few bars a let the bassline sit, well i would anyway. the second drop is sick and like i said the variation is sick. its listenable, would go well in the club, good work. :D

@ phantom badger
the synth on the intro is nice but i think its a bit too panned to the left. i love the way the melody builds and the drop is nice, think the sub needs bringing up a tiny bit if im being really picky. i like the break down of the drums at 1.22. despite you working the melody very well and variating it alot, i still think a few background pads here and there wont hurt, to add a bit more depth to it. like the outro too, well done.

heres my new one, check it out :mrgreen:
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and heres my other one for those who missed it
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anyone?

@ CollisionCourse

Just gonna do a quick one on your Track "Null"

Intro is cool, Beat goes well!
Crazy pitch effects on the piano around 1 minute
The sub that drops after this is deep!!
Overall its a col track, I think you just need to ad something else over it, another riff as a hook or some vocal samples?
A hook anyway

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Both tracks are cool for the style. Nice drum work. Not simple tracks but not a whole lot going on

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Post by zonetrooper5 » Sat Mar 06, 2010 11:31 am

Temo wrote:
zonetrooper5 wrote:Just finished another songso check it out, also a free download on my soundcloud page if you really like it.

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If you hate Souncloud then listen to it on my youtube page when I upload it and my myspace page.
pretty standard, the way youve put reverb on some of the sounds is quite intresting
That cool man, thanks for listening to it and why is the the reverb on some sounds intresting?

Do you have any tracks that you want to me to give feedback on? :)

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Post by Temo » Sat Mar 06, 2010 11:39 am

zonetrooper5 wrote:
Temo wrote:
zonetrooper5 wrote:Just finished another songso check it out, also a free download on my soundcloud page if you really like it.

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If you hate Souncloud then listen to it on my youtube page when I upload it and my myspace page.
pretty standard, the way youve put reverb on some of the sounds is quite intresting
That cool man, thanks for listening to it and why is the the reverb on some sounds intresting?

Do you have any tracks that you want to me to give feedback on? :)
like the main synth's placed behind the apreggiated sound, where usually its the other way round

umm, i posted a tune a page back for some feedback, but its not dubstep lol


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Post by phrex » Sat Mar 06, 2010 7:16 pm

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here you go...

something very different this time...
listening in the last few weeks a lot to hyperdub stuff, 8-bit infused bass music and alike, i decided to do this time a slightly more techy, '8-bitty' track.

feedback appreciated if it's worth it!
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Post by jstick » Sat Mar 06, 2010 7:42 pm

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Made a more progressive dubstep track, tried to make it really dynamic but using pretty much the same pattern throughout.

Didnt use much of a wobble this time, more synthy.

Anyway, if you wanna hear what a slot machine house would sound like if you went in on acid then give it a listen.

Stay well :-]

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Post by ekoebeats » Sat Mar 06, 2010 11:27 pm

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this is one of my fairly new ones looking to get a release on it i also have a vip up for grabs so holla, feedback appreciated

contact: darryl.cashford@googlemail.com

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Post by dignan » Sun Mar 07, 2010 3:31 am

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could I get some feedback on this please? I'll return the favor - don't worry!

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Post by Worker Ant » Sun Mar 07, 2010 12:50 pm

Hey everyone. I just produced a song for an emcee/poet friend. I'll post the song, the riddim (without the vocals) and the acapella below. Here's the riddim:

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Here's the song:

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Here's the acapella. Free WAV download for anyone who wants to sample/produce/remix/use it:

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Please gimme some feedback. Thanks in advance.

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Post by Worker Ant » Sun Mar 07, 2010 1:06 pm

dignan wrote:Soundcloud

could I get some feedback on this please? I'll return the favor - don't worry!
I left some timed comments on the track for you. Sounds good to me. I like how the wobble comes into the first section. I posted a song, riddim and acapella above - please leave feedback if you want.

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Post by legend4ry » Sun Mar 07, 2010 1:58 pm

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Will give feedback to anyone who gives me feedback, as usual.
Soulstep wrote: My point is i just wanna hear more vibes
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by antihero » Sun Mar 07, 2010 6:22 pm

ekoebeats wrote:Soundcloud

this is one of my fairly new ones looking to get a release on it i also have a vip up for grabs so holla, feedback appreciated

contact: darryl.cashford@googlemail.com
You ask for feedback? Here's some: Forget the release, forget the VIP. You need to practice a lot before you need to worry 'bout either. This track is good test of your skills at the moment, but really isn't ready be judged as a finished tune yet. How long have you been doing music? I practiced for almost 6 years before putting anything online.

Peace.

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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by dignan » Sun Mar 07, 2010 6:47 pm

Worker Ant wrote:
dignan wrote:Soundcloud

could I get some feedback on this please? I'll return the favor - don't worry!
I left some timed comments on the track for you. Sounds good to me. I like how the wobble comes into the first section. I posted a song, riddim and acapella above - please leave feedback if you want.
thanks for the comments man, really appreciate it... i gave your tune a listen and it really wasn't my scene. it was very dissonant sounding - i do think you have some good production ideas and i liked the glitching that was happening...

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Post by dignan » Sun Mar 07, 2010 6:50 pm

legend4ry wrote:Soundcloud

Will give feedback to anyone who gives me feedback, as usual.
nice mellow one man - diggin the vibes for sure. your drums are sounding nice and crisp and i like that piano/keyboard thing you got going on. i'm listening on a pair of crappy PC speakers so i couldnt hear the sub... nice work nevertheless!

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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by WeBang » Sun Mar 07, 2010 6:59 pm

Max4Beats wrote:
Max4Beats wrote:
Olux wrote:Hey Dubbers, :mrgreen:

So i dont know if i've quite mastered mixing yet but here's a track i could really use some feedback on.

CHECK IT OUT @ http://www.soundcloud.com/olux/culture- ... x123htgf85

CHEERS!
Welcome

Cool Rhythms to start with, i like those wistley Cird like noises, Very tribal Jah Feel to it!
Need to toughen up that Bass Drum...
Pure Chilling song, Not what I was expecting
Wobble is bang on! Perfect
Love how its constantly changing
Breakdown after 2.14 is really cool and needed!
Work on the structure a bit. over 5 mins for a song like this is really long, hard to keep the interest, but with a re structure it would be a really cool tune!

Wana return feedback on this

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sub sounds real good on this
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by WeBang » Sun Mar 07, 2010 7:13 pm

Muta wrote:
Max4Beats wrote:
Muta wrote:Reposting this track, posted it 2 pages ago, and still have not recieved any feedback or whatsoever :/

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Thank you..

0.00 - 0.22 This is sounding cool
0.22 - 1.03 Cool like the bassline
1.05 - 1.34 I'd get rid of that Fruity Loops ride But this breakdown is great
1.49 - 2.19 Nice Change Here


Overall - Cool track, could still be a bit heavier and I'd get rid of that rhythm on the Ride, I really like the Pad sound at the end though :)


What you think of this one

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FL Ride? xD Lol, And that while im using renoise lolol. I know it could be heavier, But im still pretty new to all this lol =p

Ive tried to play your track but no amtter how many times i press the play button, it just doesnt seem to start to play... :l Soundcloud maybe fuckin' around here, cause i cant seem to paly any single track >_>
I'll check it out ASAP when my internet is to normal again and soundcloud works lol.. Sorry bro D: Ill check it soon :]
Muta track is sick all around but I don't know about those cymbals. they are overly loud and it takes away from the track
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